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OceanTourist

At first, I only intended to read the first few chapters to write a fair review, but I just couldn't stop reading! This novel has an interesting twist on the very cliché lycanthrope-human romance story trope. The love interest is a beta instead of an alpha/top of the pack or omega/bottom of the pack. The female lead has relatable concerns. As a character she's a bit weak, but with potential for growth. I honestly prefer the male lead much more. He is so cute when he's possessive and worried over our female lead. Yet, he doesn't go absolutely crazy. He tries to respect the female lead's will. The story is fairly fast paced and there's never a dull moment. The first few chapters were a bit confusing (why were our leads so trusting?) but that is quickly explained (Not going to spoil how, so read to find out!). The author has a more detail oriented writing style, which some readers may not like. The world background is developing nicely (though a bit wordy at times). While the updates are fairly regular, the author has a tendency for run-ons and long sentences which can become monotonous. I would recommend chopping up the run-on sentences and varying sentence length. This would help make actually reading flow better.

3yr
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Platasaurus_boy

This is a really good read and I enjoy it immensely. I literally had trouble putting the book done and I kept finding myself being pulled into the next chapter wanting to know what was gonna happen next. Keep up the great work, I can’t wait to continue reading to see what happens with Brooke and Jame’s.

2yr
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ssyffix

The author is quite talented. Each character and plot point serves a purpose. Interesting stuff gets explored, I had fun during my read of volume 2

2yr
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WordWarden0

Amazing. That’s the first thing’s the first thing that came to mind when reading those first couple chapters. The author writes remarkable physical and emotional descriptions. To be honest, for anyone else reading this, if you want a main take away, just know the Author doesn’t miss with descriptions. I also love how the plot moves along. I won’t spoil much but when you hear about the initial conflict, it’s raises a lot of questions. And that’s what makes it an amazing build-up. Overall, a great read. Great work Author.

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3yr
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Otonaritenshi

The story is amazing and likable a scent of uniqueness which is rare in were wolf stories is in it. I can't stop from reading more and more. The only complain is I want more and more chapter will I get some moree. Tbh that is why I didn't give 5 star hungry for more of these kinds chapters. All the best to writer ur work make me delighted and is very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

3yr
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Abssysans

Just read the first chapter this book is amazing the mix of action and entertainment is amazing the plot of this is 10/10 i recommend this for anyone to read this

3yr
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Nessy_Lock

I love this book and it deserves so much more recognition. The story has something special that balances the action/drama and the serene moments between characters which makes me come back every day to read a new chapter. Which is very rare for me bc I get bored easily with anything. The characters are lovable and their interactions feel so real. I like the FL, she's inteligent and loving and just a good person in general. The writing is good - that's always a plus. The plot is still unfolding, but even now, it's really interesting and I look forward to more chapters.💕

3yr
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OceanTourist

At first, I only intended to read the first few chapters to write a fair review, but I just couldn't stop reading! This novel has an interesting twist on the very cliché lycanthrope-human romance story trope. The love interest is a beta instead of an alpha/top of the pack or omega/bottom of the pack. The female lead has relatable concerns. As a character she's a bit weak, but with potential for growth. I honestly prefer the male lead much more. He is so cute when he's possessive and worried over our female lead. Yet, he doesn't go absolutely crazy. He tries to respect the female lead's will. The story is fairly fast paced and there's never a dull moment. The first few chapters were a bit confusing (why were our leads so trusting?) but that is quickly explained (Not going to spoil how, so read to find out!). The author has a more detail oriented writing style, which some readers may not like. The world background is developing nicely (though a bit wordy at times). While the updates are fairly regular, the author has a tendency for run-ons and long sentences which can become monotonous. I would recommend chopping up the run-on sentences and varying sentence length. This would help make actually reading flow better.

3yr
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Platasaurus_boy

This is a really good read and I enjoy it immensely. I literally had trouble putting the book done and I kept finding myself being pulled into the next chapter wanting to know what was gonna happen next. Keep up the great work, I can’t wait to continue reading to see what happens with Brooke and Jame’s.

2yr
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ssyffix

The author is quite talented. Each character and plot point serves a purpose. Interesting stuff gets explored, I had fun during my read of volume 2

2yr
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WordWarden0

Amazing. That’s the first thing’s the first thing that came to mind when reading those first couple chapters. The author writes remarkable physical and emotional descriptions. To be honest, for anyone else reading this, if you want a main take away, just know the Author doesn’t miss with descriptions. I also love how the plot moves along. I won’t spoil much but when you hear about the initial conflict, it’s raises a lot of questions. And that’s what makes it an amazing build-up. Overall, a great read. Great work Author.

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3yr
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Otonaritenshi

The story is amazing and likable a scent of uniqueness which is rare in were wolf stories is in it. I can't stop from reading more and more. The only complain is I want more and more chapter will I get some moree. Tbh that is why I didn't give 5 star hungry for more of these kinds chapters. All the best to writer ur work make me delighted and is very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

3yr
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Abssysans

Just read the first chapter this book is amazing the mix of action and entertainment is amazing the plot of this is 10/10 i recommend this for anyone to read this

3yr
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Nessy_Lock

I love this book and it deserves so much more recognition. The story has something special that balances the action/drama and the serene moments between characters which makes me come back every day to read a new chapter. Which is very rare for me bc I get bored easily with anything. The characters are lovable and their interactions feel so real. I like the FL, she's inteligent and loving and just a good person in general. The writing is good - that's always a plus. The plot is still unfolding, but even now, it's really interesting and I look forward to more chapters.💕

3yr
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