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This is a really good story with good build up so far. Really looking forward to more chapters.
not terrible but not very good early on was a nice suprise that the mc wasnt a cookie cutter swordsman/rouge assassin although he more or less turned out at least early on to be more of a rouge at ch 22 since he stuck to using a dagger and didnt bother buying a bow+arrows..... well regardless the author either forgot what they wrote or using some system of calculation that isnt explained but the mc gets a title which give him physical dmg "immunity" note the word immunity 100% immunity im like ....ok completly busted all he needs now is a op shotgun arrow spray and he is god now.... nope nope nope fights a goblin elite? or something? im not sure what it is but he just stands there and then takes 10 dmg..... from what should be 40 but with a cripple its then 30???? but howd he take 10 dmg then?????????? in short author either forgot what they wrote or using a wierd way of calculating cause i dont understand how 100% phys dmg immunity ends up taking dmg..... more like dmg ""RESIST"" lol even then should at best take 1 dmg with 100%
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I really enjoy this novel keep up the good work. Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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An early review But very well written, The characters are so relatable and nicely expressed, I read through the 7 chapters without sleep at 4 in the morning😅 can't wait to read more
I've read upto chapter 2 and honestly, the storyline is quite interesting, especially the characters. There are some typos but they can be ignored. Really looking forward to the future chapters
An earlier review. The story beginning is well done. There is long way to open up the rest of development and I am looking forward to it.[img=update]
I read up to Chapter 7 which Evolution Online may be introduced in detail after (that’s my assumption). So far, the characters are written well. The set up and background is there for an all SYSTEMS GO! Keep up the good job!
Great story overall similar to other works done by this author it’s an interesting take on what the future goes bad for a bit then goes into a higher tech era I would highly recommend at least trying this story if you like more science fiction story’s if you like this story take a look at his others you will find similar quality
Whoa. Complex characters and backgrounds. A really well thought out setting too. I almost got too lost in the world. This is going to turn out really well, I can tell. Keep up the good work!
5 star goes without a doubt!!!!!!!!! Reasons- First the author name was enough. heheh😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 second- the synopsis💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 and the third- is the book! still a start, but I'll wait patiently for chps.
Seems like something.The plot hasn't unfolded yet.Minimal holes which are easily skipped over.Future chapters may change my mind.Need more chapters
Hihi! I came after reading the synopsis. So, I ammaa gonna wait until new chapters come😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂. Come chapters come. Come soon. ❤💛😂
I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!
This was an interesting read. Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read. Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors. I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out. Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc. Overall, good work there. Good luck.
Naturally, being the author, I will be the first to comment. Just here to say that This is a project I have been working on for the past 2 months~ approximately.... So enjoy Updates should be daily for the first week, then 3 chapters per week from then onwards
i have read first few chapters and honestly, the plot is quite interesting, especially the world building is great. it's a great read,Really looking forward to the future chapters..keep rocking
This is a really good story with good build up so far. Really looking forward to more chapters.
not terrible but not very good early on was a nice suprise that the mc wasnt a cookie cutter swordsman/rouge assassin although he more or less turned out at least early on to be more of a rouge at ch 22 since he stuck to using a dagger and didnt bother buying a bow+arrows..... well regardless the author either forgot what they wrote or using some system of calculation that isnt explained but the mc gets a title which give him physical dmg "immunity" note the word immunity 100% immunity im like ....ok completly busted all he needs now is a op shotgun arrow spray and he is god now.... nope nope nope fights a goblin elite? or something? im not sure what it is but he just stands there and then takes 10 dmg..... from what should be 40 but with a cripple its then 30???? but howd he take 10 dmg then?????????? in short author either forgot what they wrote or using a wierd way of calculating cause i dont understand how 100% phys dmg immunity ends up taking dmg..... more like dmg ""RESIST"" lol even then should at best take 1 dmg with 100%
Revelar Spoiler I really enjoy this novel keep up the good work. Filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler
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Revelar Spoiler An early review But very well written, The characters are so relatable and nicely expressed, I read through the 7 chapters without sleep at 4 in the morning😅 can't wait to read more
I've read upto chapter 2 and honestly, the storyline is quite interesting, especially the characters. There are some typos but they can be ignored. Really looking forward to the future chapters
An earlier review. The story beginning is well done. There is long way to open up the rest of development and I am looking forward to it.[img=update]
I read up to Chapter 7 which Evolution Online may be introduced in detail after (that’s my assumption). So far, the characters are written well. The set up and background is there for an all SYSTEMS GO! Keep up the good job!
Great story overall similar to other works done by this author it’s an interesting take on what the future goes bad for a bit then goes into a higher tech era I would highly recommend at least trying this story if you like more science fiction story’s if you like this story take a look at his others you will find similar quality
Whoa. Complex characters and backgrounds. A really well thought out setting too. I almost got too lost in the world. This is going to turn out really well, I can tell. Keep up the good work!
5 star goes without a doubt!!!!!!!!! Reasons- First the author name was enough. heheh😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 second- the synopsis💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 and the third- is the book! still a start, but I'll wait patiently for chps.
Seems like something.The plot hasn't unfolded yet.Minimal holes which are easily skipped over.Future chapters may change my mind.Need more chapters
Hihi! I came after reading the synopsis. So, I ammaa gonna wait until new chapters come😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂. Come chapters come. Come soon. ❤💛😂
I think I have to give five stars at everything since it only has one chapter for now. Although the chapter dumped a few information about the reader's needs, it was still an entertaining read! kudos for the author!
This was an interesting read. Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read. Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors. I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out. Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc. Overall, good work there. Good luck.
Naturally, being the author, I will be the first to comment. Just here to say that This is a project I have been working on for the past 2 months~ approximately.... So enjoy Updates should be daily for the first week, then 3 chapters per week from then onwards
i have read first few chapters and honestly, the plot is quite interesting, especially the world building is great. it's a great read,Really looking forward to the future chapters..keep rocking