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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍
well... nothing good, nothing bad, would say its below average still... hate the spacing and some other stuff tho... ......................
AMAZING!! AMAZING!! AMAZING!! A very very very well developed story. The world background is phenomenal, it has so many elements that makes it really different from your typical fanfic's. Grammar wise.....it's okay at least it's readable. The author can improve by making paragraphs shorter, this will help us in reading more comfortably. Altogether it has great potential to be an even greater story. So go and try it or you will regret for the rest of your life.
good story so far could use some grammar correction and some correct spelling but, other than that pretty good .
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍
well... nothing good, nothing bad, would say its below average still... hate the spacing and some other stuff tho... ......................
AMAZING!! AMAZING!! AMAZING!! A very very very well developed story. The world background is phenomenal, it has so many elements that makes it really different from your typical fanfic's. Grammar wise.....it's okay at least it's readable. The author can improve by making paragraphs shorter, this will help us in reading more comfortably. Altogether it has great potential to be an even greater story. So go and try it or you will regret for the rest of your life.
good story so far could use some grammar correction and some correct spelling but, other than that pretty good .
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The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍
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