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I added this because I liked the preview and the first 20 chapters were really good. However, the plot seems to be off-track and rushed. Characters were coming in, FL suddenly has a twin, she suddenly knows martial arts, there were suddenly mafia-terrorist fights and the ML's backstory is so inconsistent. I feel like the author has potential but he/she seems to not have a solid plan as to how she wants the story to be.
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It was a well- developed story and I loved the plot. The story was written with great grammar an vocabulary.
this is a very interesting and different story. It not at all like I thought it would be. I like thar Yan you could take care of herself if need to.
Omg great story.. the ML anf FL are so awesome..how there romance started just makes ur heart pitter patter💗❤👍
Love the novel 😘😘 It is amazing both ML and FL is so cute and romantic 😍😍 And it is complete i hope it has more chapters but it's too short😔😔
Enjo the story, should have include future information about her best friend that she left in London and also his friends. Also about her sister.Would love to know their fut as well.ures
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Its a good book. I enjoyed it very much. I like that the fl is not a damsel in distress. Though there were some loose ends like I didnt see the why and how the fl's father was poisoned and what happened to her father's company after her uncle's arrest. But overall it was very entertaining. I could not stop reading it until the last chap. Thanks for sharing this very sweet story Author.❤️❤️❤️
Cute. The ending is a bit rushed and illogical, but it is a cute story with a happy ending. ML seems to be in the category of high IQ and negative EQ. Why do most relationships fail: failure to communicate. P.S. The UK has a NHCS and uses euros not Yuan: if you can mental bend your thinking, it won't hurt too much
Cute love story with excitement.might even make you cry will make you a little angry I guess I enjoyed all the emotions through the story. [img=update]
must read.. recommended..this is my type of story with romance,peace,turns and twist,thrilling,not so long and dragging..thanks to the author for sucha wonderful story..I love this ..looking forward for your other projects as well..good luck
The story line was just so perfect 👍 and l really wished thAt you could have found a right ending for her Twin sister .l really want to read another one of your creation
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I am enjoying this book so far. It is a very good read. I will be reading more . Hope everyone enjoys as much as I do.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is great story, Twin sisters, male lead is genius, love his wife, great job Author 👍❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💗💗💗💗🌹🌹🌹🌹🌼🌼🦋🐞❤️💗
it is a good romantic short story. it is worth the time reading. the storyline and character development is good. I like the story. if your looking for a short romantic story to read choose this one.
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Love it, thanks keep up.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I really like the story I just thought that you was too rushed I want to know more about the sister and her life [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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At first it was a little boring. The typical he saved her, married her, and now he's caught cheating on her. But it turned out to be very exciting and a nail biter. Great work really enjoyed out
I really really wanted to give it a 5 stars. The beginning of the story was wonderful, the characters were well written, the story was well developed. But starting from half of the story, things were getting horrible (strong fl was gone, lovely and romantic ml was gone,... he let her alone in a house with no ressources, no news and she forgave him for a kiss???)
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I just finished reading this book. It's awesome. I just loved it. Great work author! I'm looking forward to more stories from you!!Take care! 😊😊
Really an interesting read with an impressive depth to most of the characters. Excellent writing quality. I enjoyed it a lot, even the over-the-top parts, and the plot holes were forgivable. I wish the ending had been more fleshed out, though, as it hit me pretty suddenly and so wasn't as satisfying as I would have liked.
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such a lousy story. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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Loved it!! I started reading and I just couldn't put it down!! I even only slept a few hours! It is gun, fast paced, one thing after another, keeps you interested all the time. There are some typos, errors and language barrier mistakes that could be improved, but over all pretty good!
the bbook is a bomb 💣, I ccoul not drop it till I finished the last page. I love ❤ it because it not over drawn and It is very straightforward. well work author. I love your work .
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It was a decent story. The ending felt rushed and the story overall felt like information was missing causing loop holes in the story but overall it was a good short read.
I added this because I liked the preview and the first 20 chapters were really good. However, the plot seems to be off-track and rushed. Characters were coming in, FL suddenly has a twin, she suddenly knows martial arts, there were suddenly mafia-terrorist fights and the ML's backstory is so inconsistent. I feel like the author has potential but he/she seems to not have a solid plan as to how she wants the story to be.
Revelar Spoiler It was a well- developed story and I loved the plot. The story was written with great grammar an vocabulary.
this is a very interesting and different story. It not at all like I thought it would be. I like thar Yan you could take care of herself if need to.
Omg great story.. the ML anf FL are so awesome..how there romance started just makes ur heart pitter patter💗❤👍
Love the novel 😘😘 It is amazing both ML and FL is so cute and romantic 😍😍 And it is complete i hope it has more chapters but it's too short😔😔
Enjo the story, should have include future information about her best friend that she left in London and also his friends. Also about her sister.Would love to know their fut as well.ures
******************************************this book is highly intriguing could not put it down, gr8 job! **************************************************************************************
Its a good book. I enjoyed it very much. I like that the fl is not a damsel in distress. Though there were some loose ends like I didnt see the why and how the fl's father was poisoned and what happened to her father's company after her uncle's arrest. But overall it was very entertaining. I could not stop reading it until the last chap. Thanks for sharing this very sweet story Author.❤️❤️❤️
Cute. The ending is a bit rushed and illogical, but it is a cute story with a happy ending. ML seems to be in the category of high IQ and negative EQ. Why do most relationships fail: failure to communicate. P.S. The UK has a NHCS and uses euros not Yuan: if you can mental bend your thinking, it won't hurt too much
Cute love story with excitement.might even make you cry will make you a little angry I guess I enjoyed all the emotions through the story. [img=update]
must read.. recommended..this is my type of story with romance,peace,turns and twist,thrilling,not so long and dragging..thanks to the author for sucha wonderful story..I love this ..looking forward for your other projects as well..good luck
The story line was just so perfect 👍 and l really wished thAt you could have found a right ending for her Twin sister .l really want to read another one of your creation
interesting story 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I am enjoying this book so far. It is a very good read. I will be reading more . Hope everyone enjoys as much as I do.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is great story, Twin sisters, male lead is genius, love his wife, great job Author 👍❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💗💗💗💗🌹🌹🌹🌹🌼🌼🦋🐞❤️💗
it is a good romantic short story. it is worth the time reading. the storyline and character development is good. I like the story. if your looking for a short romantic story to read choose this one.
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Revelar Spoiler Love it, thanks keep up.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I really like the story I just thought that you was too rushed I want to know more about the sister and her life [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Revelar Spoiler At first it was a little boring. The typical he saved her, married her, and now he's caught cheating on her. But it turned out to be very exciting and a nail biter. Great work really enjoyed out
I really really wanted to give it a 5 stars. The beginning of the story was wonderful, the characters were well written, the story was well developed. But starting from half of the story, things were getting horrible (strong fl was gone, lovely and romantic ml was gone,... he let her alone in a house with no ressources, no news and she forgave him for a kiss???)
Revelar Spoiler I just finished reading this book. It's awesome. I just loved it. Great work author! I'm looking forward to more stories from you!!Take care! 😊😊
Really an interesting read with an impressive depth to most of the characters. Excellent writing quality. I enjoyed it a lot, even the over-the-top parts, and the plot holes were forgivable. I wish the ending had been more fleshed out, though, as it hit me pretty suddenly and so wasn't as satisfying as I would have liked.
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such a lousy story. 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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Loved it!! I started reading and I just couldn't put it down!! I even only slept a few hours! It is gun, fast paced, one thing after another, keeps you interested all the time. There are some typos, errors and language barrier mistakes that could be improved, but over all pretty good!
the bbook is a bomb 💣, I ccoul not drop it till I finished the last page. I love ❤ it because it not over drawn and It is very straightforward. well work author. I love your work .
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It was a decent story. The ending felt rushed and the story overall felt like information was missing causing loop holes in the story but overall it was a good short read.