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This author has given us a lot so by default, he would get the 5 stars. Good luck. -------------------------------------------------------------------
C'mon. It's Lord Cornbringer, what else did you expect? The Lord Cornbringer is known for his raven fetish and his wonderful novels, so of course, I would give 5 stars to this novel even though it only has (July 22, 2021): 3 Chapters now. Also, I expect this MC to have something Raven-related. No, I don't expect, I DEMAND!
Never thought I would give a review of less then 4 to a story of CORNBRINGER but I guess here we are. This is bad mostly cause of the MC and how he does not understand subtlety
Well new chapters aside... This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I won't go into too much detail but it has everything you would want in a fanfic. A strong protagonist who starts out relatively weak but becomes strong relatively quickly, but not for "free". The characters' relationships are not hollow and have weight. With the protagonist having a personality and progression. And as the story takes place in the wars before the birth of naruto, the story does not follow the "plot", wich let us be honest a history that follows every arc with minimal divergences are at most mid. The "system" is also not the most important and is almost minimal after the first chapters, which also enriches the story but also maintains the mechanics promised by the title of the story itself. And another plus, at least for me, is the lack of harem in the story.
Woah I stopped at chapter 8, canonically Jiraiya's team didn't graduate that early, and they are known to have participated in the war. You just reduced their achievements to highlight the MC. Everything is much faster, there are so many plot holes, we are recommended to take the exams early like Kakashi and Itachi. Otherwise people like Sak. The guy doesn't know any ninja techniques and only uses those in his system, This story is rushed that we don't talk about almost any ninja techniques, they don't seal these things in paper, He doesn't even say a word about the seals , which should have helped him as an excuse with these inventions , He does not think about the danger that Konoha is by showing all the techniques of the system , the techniques themselves are weaker than the canon techniques, which he does not know, Without the plot armor he will be like Naruto at the beginning and definitely would not have succeeded in the Academy
It started great, then the mc turned into a moron showing off every power he gets as if his objective was to become a jailed target by every villages. Talking about how he wants to survive and then showing off all of his WoW powers even stuff like resurrection, in a war setting it's like asking to be killed, not to mention he does that while being still weak and during the war.
This starts out somewhat decent, then arc of the first war MC fought was very terrible because he sort of gets brainwashed after revealing his powers, then it picks up again with the point that you can overlook the previous shenanigans. The complaint I have is he is too much of a pushover, while he has so much power, it feels like he is walking in the palm of everyone.
Plot wise it’s good, haracter development wise it’s good too. Mc’s What individual character tho? Bit iffy… mc acts like he knows about the plot of Naruto, then he says he doesn’t know. He actions lead both ways. Other than that story is very good, the individual development of few characters are shown as well.
If I compare this with other novels it's one of the good ones, but it doesn't meet the standards of Corn... yet. Maybe in the future if corn chooses to finish this
the most disappointing fic from cornbringer . . . . . . . .................................................................................................
It's a really great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It's have a great translate/grammar and good plot/storyline... I like the idea of reincarnate in naruto, but in different era (hashirama, sarutobi, sannin, minato, kakashi, etc), in this story tell in sannin era, so I like it.. I like that MC/Raiden have a great system (warcraft system), and it make him so op (but not instaneous), so I like it more.. I hope that he change many sad fates, like Nawaki, Sakumo, etc.. It's bad and confusing that he starting to forget many important event (Tobirama death by Kin and Gin brothers, Madara is still alive, Black Zetsu, etc)... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁😍😍👍👍
is this story dropped cornbringer ? why? first Naruto story to start so early in the timeline. please continue this story mighty author.
Loving the story so far when do we get more .....................................................................................................................................
el Mc es un completo idi*ta, parece que renacer lo hizo olvidar que estaba en un mundo peligroso, Con una mentalidad y percepción mas parecido a estar en la Tierra que en el mundo Naruto, si fuera esa linea de tiempo y como era Tobirama, al saber que tenia técnicas extrañas lo hubiera encerrado por sospechas o como conejillo de indias en un laboratorio,
You have written a lot of fine fan-fic novels and I see you have great experience and knowledge. I wonder when are you going to write an original novel.
Alright, my first comment on a Cornbringer fanfic 🌽, first of all so glad to see Nick Ravenicus back and also appreciate the fact he remembers Ronard, the continuity between Cornbringers novel could turn into a unique multiverse of sorts. Also is the Atlas supposed to be our dear God of Magic? Anyways to the review: The only two categories I didn't give full marks on are: Translation: Dunno if it's during editing or what, but on multiple of The almighty 🌽 novels I see it's and is often in each others place. Sometiles some minor syntax errors nothing disturbing though. World background: I'd give full marks just for the references to other Fanfics but my only problem with this is that while some things are really well explained some events are unseen and left to the reader to deduce, while this would work with obvious things sometimes the situation could have more than one possible outcome, this could be explained in later chapters tho, so dunno.
Недавно я познакомился с повестью . Книги о войне всегда тяжело читать, но это произведение мне понравилось. Это не только история мальчишки-сироты Райден, но и яркое правдивое повествование о самой войне, о мужестве наших воинов. Райден мне очень понравился. Оказавшись в артиллерийском полку, этот бесстрашный паренек воевал наравне со взрослыми солдатами. Райден для меня пример смелости, героизма и несгибаемой воли. Повесть «Мира шиноби» учит никогда не терять надежду, всем сердцем любить свою Родину и верить в лучшее.
Decent writing quality and decent stability of updates too, at least while it lasted. The premise of the story is interesting but the execution felt way too lacking, especially if compared to the game of throne fanfic. Could've done well with the explanations of the racial traits and maybe keeping some track of what abilities the mc have. Many details are lacking as well, especially the spells. All in all, it needs more details. I also don't like how things turned out so quickly. It felt like the author is trying to pull a blitzkrieg. The novel started, then comes the prologue and a few short chapters later the mc is already in the war, killed some enemies, showed off his cards and then got noticed by the Hokage. Perhaps things could've been done in a better way. 1.8 total score by the way.
diablos, puede que solo haya tres capítulos al momento de escribir esto, pero si todos los otros libros que el gran y poderoso comerciante nos ha dado a nosotros, humildes campesinos (y tengo la sensación de que lo son), entonces esta novela será gloriosa, también la mejor de las suertes con esto. nueva novela no quiero que te agobies ni nada. Hasta la vista.
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I liked it, so I'll give it five stars. This is the first story of yours I've read, and I couldn't be happier to have found it. I'm sorry you're not posting daily, but at least I spend the time reading your other stories.
Pas mal pas mal je suppose ça aurait pu être pire Maintenant si il pouvait nous donner une mise à jour çe serait encore mieux hhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuyuuyuuygrthcgrdgh
There is something that just doesn't make sense to me, Why reveal ur revive powers. There is people that will exploit ur powers, or worse the mc will become a labrat and be called a monster by their own people. You ignored it, the reality of what will happen to someone if got this kind of power. But i think that this is gud, the mc makes poor choice all the time and kind of doesn't act mature when it comes to smth like i dont know.. hes an adult when he died right? but why do he act like a child and don't think the consequences that he will make, senju is not a good person, so if this is the original person the hokage will prolly use him as smth, like always reviving.. Using his summons to aid in war and worse of all be prisoned, or be killed because someone, doesn't want to be replaced. Thas all but i think that this is a good fanfic, But there is so many possibilities in any decisions.
You got one 5 star just from having no harem tag! ..........................................................................................
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Very good story. good story, magnificent and elegant I have to say, I am sorry that there are crossovers between Naruto and Warcraft, because these types of stories are like desert oases which is a rarity, I hope to see the next updates as soon as possible
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heck there might only be three chapters as of writing this but if all the other books that the great and mighty cornbringer has given us lowly peasants (and I have a feeling they are) then this novel will be glorious, also best of luck with this new novel don't want you to get over worked or anything. au revoir.
This author has given us a lot so by default, he would get the 5 stars. Good luck. -------------------------------------------------------------------
C'mon. It's Lord Cornbringer, what else did you expect? The Lord Cornbringer is known for his raven fetish and his wonderful novels, so of course, I would give 5 stars to this novel even though it only has (July 22, 2021): 3 Chapters now. Also, I expect this MC to have something Raven-related. No, I don't expect, I DEMAND!
Never thought I would give a review of less then 4 to a story of CORNBRINGER but I guess here we are. This is bad mostly cause of the MC and how he does not understand subtlety
Well new chapters aside... This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I won't go into too much detail but it has everything you would want in a fanfic. A strong protagonist who starts out relatively weak but becomes strong relatively quickly, but not for "free". The characters' relationships are not hollow and have weight. With the protagonist having a personality and progression. And as the story takes place in the wars before the birth of naruto, the story does not follow the "plot", wich let us be honest a history that follows every arc with minimal divergences are at most mid. The "system" is also not the most important and is almost minimal after the first chapters, which also enriches the story but also maintains the mechanics promised by the title of the story itself. And another plus, at least for me, is the lack of harem in the story.
Woah I stopped at chapter 8, canonically Jiraiya's team didn't graduate that early, and they are known to have participated in the war. You just reduced their achievements to highlight the MC. Everything is much faster, there are so many plot holes, we are recommended to take the exams early like Kakashi and Itachi. Otherwise people like Sak. The guy doesn't know any ninja techniques and only uses those in his system, This story is rushed that we don't talk about almost any ninja techniques, they don't seal these things in paper, He doesn't even say a word about the seals , which should have helped him as an excuse with these inventions , He does not think about the danger that Konoha is by showing all the techniques of the system , the techniques themselves are weaker than the canon techniques, which he does not know, Without the plot armor he will be like Naruto at the beginning and definitely would not have succeeded in the Academy
It started great, then the mc turned into a moron showing off every power he gets as if his objective was to become a jailed target by every villages. Talking about how he wants to survive and then showing off all of his WoW powers even stuff like resurrection, in a war setting it's like asking to be killed, not to mention he does that while being still weak and during the war.
This starts out somewhat decent, then arc of the first war MC fought was very terrible because he sort of gets brainwashed after revealing his powers, then it picks up again with the point that you can overlook the previous shenanigans. The complaint I have is he is too much of a pushover, while he has so much power, it feels like he is walking in the palm of everyone.
Plot wise it’s good, haracter development wise it’s good too. Mc’s What individual character tho? Bit iffy… mc acts like he knows about the plot of Naruto, then he says he doesn’t know. He actions lead both ways. Other than that story is very good, the individual development of few characters are shown as well.
If I compare this with other novels it's one of the good ones, but it doesn't meet the standards of Corn... yet. Maybe in the future if corn chooses to finish this
the most disappointing fic from cornbringer . . . . . . . .................................................................................................
It's a really great Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It's have a great translate/grammar and good plot/storyline... I like the idea of reincarnate in naruto, but in different era (hashirama, sarutobi, sannin, minato, kakashi, etc), in this story tell in sannin era, so I like it.. I like that MC/Raiden have a great system (warcraft system), and it make him so op (but not instaneous), so I like it more.. I hope that he change many sad fates, like Nawaki, Sakumo, etc.. It's bad and confusing that he starting to forget many important event (Tobirama death by Kin and Gin brothers, Madara is still alive, Black Zetsu, etc)... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁😍😍👍👍
is this story dropped cornbringer ? why? first Naruto story to start so early in the timeline. please continue this story mighty author.
Loving the story so far when do we get more .....................................................................................................................................
el Mc es un completo idi*ta, parece que renacer lo hizo olvidar que estaba en un mundo peligroso, Con una mentalidad y percepción mas parecido a estar en la Tierra que en el mundo Naruto, si fuera esa linea de tiempo y como era Tobirama, al saber que tenia técnicas extrañas lo hubiera encerrado por sospechas o como conejillo de indias en un laboratorio,
You have written a lot of fine fan-fic novels and I see you have great experience and knowledge. I wonder when are you going to write an original novel.
Alright, my first comment on a Cornbringer fanfic 🌽, first of all so glad to see Nick Ravenicus back and also appreciate the fact he remembers Ronard, the continuity between Cornbringers novel could turn into a unique multiverse of sorts. Also is the Atlas supposed to be our dear God of Magic? Anyways to the review: The only two categories I didn't give full marks on are: Translation: Dunno if it's during editing or what, but on multiple of The almighty 🌽 novels I see it's and is often in each others place. Sometiles some minor syntax errors nothing disturbing though. World background: I'd give full marks just for the references to other Fanfics but my only problem with this is that while some things are really well explained some events are unseen and left to the reader to deduce, while this would work with obvious things sometimes the situation could have more than one possible outcome, this could be explained in later chapters tho, so dunno.
Недавно я познакомился с повестью . Книги о войне всегда тяжело читать, но это произведение мне понравилось. Это не только история мальчишки-сироты Райден, но и яркое правдивое повествование о самой войне, о мужестве наших воинов. Райден мне очень понравился. Оказавшись в артиллерийском полку, этот бесстрашный паренек воевал наравне со взрослыми солдатами. Райден для меня пример смелости, героизма и несгибаемой воли. Повесть «Мира шиноби» учит никогда не терять надежду, всем сердцем любить свою Родину и верить в лучшее.
Decent writing quality and decent stability of updates too, at least while it lasted. The premise of the story is interesting but the execution felt way too lacking, especially if compared to the game of throne fanfic. Could've done well with the explanations of the racial traits and maybe keeping some track of what abilities the mc have. Many details are lacking as well, especially the spells. All in all, it needs more details. I also don't like how things turned out so quickly. It felt like the author is trying to pull a blitzkrieg. The novel started, then comes the prologue and a few short chapters later the mc is already in the war, killed some enemies, showed off his cards and then got noticed by the Hokage. Perhaps things could've been done in a better way. 1.8 total score by the way.
diablos, puede que solo haya tres capítulos al momento de escribir esto, pero si todos los otros libros que el gran y poderoso comerciante nos ha dado a nosotros, humildes campesinos (y tengo la sensación de que lo son), entonces esta novela será gloriosa, también la mejor de las suertes con esto. nueva novela no quiero que te agobies ni nada. Hasta la vista.
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I liked it, so I'll give it five stars. This is the first story of yours I've read, and I couldn't be happier to have found it. I'm sorry you're not posting daily, but at least I spend the time reading your other stories.
Pas mal pas mal je suppose ça aurait pu être pire Maintenant si il pouvait nous donner une mise à jour çe serait encore mieux hhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuyuuyuuygrthcgrdgh
There is something that just doesn't make sense to me, Why reveal ur revive powers. There is people that will exploit ur powers, or worse the mc will become a labrat and be called a monster by their own people. You ignored it, the reality of what will happen to someone if got this kind of power. But i think that this is gud, the mc makes poor choice all the time and kind of doesn't act mature when it comes to smth like i dont know.. hes an adult when he died right? but why do he act like a child and don't think the consequences that he will make, senju is not a good person, so if this is the original person the hokage will prolly use him as smth, like always reviving.. Using his summons to aid in war and worse of all be prisoned, or be killed because someone, doesn't want to be replaced. Thas all but i think that this is a good fanfic, But there is so many possibilities in any decisions.
You got one 5 star just from having no harem tag! ..........................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Very good story. good story, magnificent and elegant I have to say, I am sorry that there are crossovers between Naruto and Warcraft, because these types of stories are like desert oases which is a rarity, I hope to see the next updates as soon as possible
It's great idea to add world of Warcraft in his abilities but author San please for god sake change the cover image of the novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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heck there might only be three chapters as of writing this but if all the other books that the great and mighty cornbringer has given us lowly peasants (and I have a feeling they are) then this novel will be glorious, also best of luck with this new novel don't want you to get over worked or anything. au revoir.