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I just wanted to say this is my first story and English is not my first language, so if you find any mistakes point it out for me, so I can learn from them.
I really like Asoiaf and read ton of its fanfiction, but is hard to find a good si fanfic. Most of them are insinely unrealistic or they have some kind of system with harem and they know of every technology that exists and they know how to make it. What i don't like the most is Gary Stue mc, they are so overpowered that there no point in them to do anything, they actions don't have any consequences, that why i think they are not interesting at all.
Anyways what i like about Asoiaf is the political things, how people betray each other and how easy it is to die in this world. That why I try to keep that suspense in my story, but don't worry, I think that Asoiaf a little bit too dark so I try to make it lighter
In conclusion I have many ideas in this story, but it is my first, so if you think I going in the wrong direction with the story then feel free to coment on it. I like your feedback at how bad are my fight scenes and dialogue, and how to improve it.
Support me at p*a*t*r*e*o*n, to keep me motivated, but it is a fanfiction I write this story as a test at my capabilities and for fun so there won't be any advance chapters at my p*a*t*r*e*o*n.
Thank you for reading my story and for the support.
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