" Wh-what ! What ? Which son of a bitch did this ?" Lin Ze who was sleeping peacefully suddenly felt something warm and wet splashing on his body and he immediately startled awake - he jumped on his feet and took a fighting stance like he could take down ten or twenty men alone in a fight . But then instead of seeing the gangsters from the usury , he saw his mother standing in front of him with a scowl plastered on her face - even though Lin Ze saw who it was , he didn't tone down his arrogance instead , he wiped his face with his hand and growled at his mother " What ? Why are you acting like a mad woman so early in the morning , mother ? Why did you have to do that to me , can't you see I was sleeping so peacefully ? Why did you wake me up ?"
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