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I have really enjoyed this story and hope to see it continue. It has humorous moments and the author is really good at workd building and immersing you into what is happening. You like all the characters and want them to succeed.
Quite frustrating to read, as the mc starts as a calm and talented child, grows to become arrogant, naive and reckless, while the enemies and secondary characters canon and OC that appear are much stronger than in the show with more features, more high level jutsus, techniques and powers the mc is nerfed for a 'limited time' just while she needs to defeat enemies, of course...
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
the story is amazing and I like how the author made the female mc and her mother a part of the namikaze (Minato namikaze) family............
I like the concept, the story development and the world background are so detail and it shows the concept of alternate reality if 4th hokage are not dead and resulting the corrupt leader (4 idiots) to lose their control but still not quite agree with the character of Hiruzen as he is too out of bound. In my opinion he is a person that likes control but at the same time he's not the type of person that will stoop so low to cooperate like that with Danzo. Either way the butterfly are so strong the development of the story and can't wait about how the MC will resolve the problem.
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Personally, I feel like this is a fantastic and unique Naruto story with an incredibly interesting main character and many interesting twists and turns. It undubtedly goes at it’s own pace but if you’re a patient reader, you should have a lot of fun with this story. All I can suggest is to give it a try, I doubt you’ll be disappointed
I'm 30 chapters in and I don't really get a feel for the characters, including the lead. It's like identical robots without any personality or emotion are just exchanging information, instead of people having a conversation.
Good fan fiction, thanks to the author for the work. I liked the development of the main character. The plot line itself, though intersecting with the canon, does not completely copy it. The changes and the main plot twist are new, I did not find similar ones. The characters have their own goals and characters
This is a nice take on the Naruto Canon. I especially love the MC, Kamui... Her character development is on point and the story keeps getting better and better!
she s not overpowered tho ............................................................
I really like the original content and concepts here, one thing that could be better is the pacing of the next arcs, the Shinobu Island felt like a slow burn in some chapters.
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Really really amazing stuff. One of the best naruto fanfics I’ve read out of thousands and also one of the best with an OC that doesn’t have any foreknowledge. Just superb! The pacing, the storytelling, the little butterfly wings and their effects, fugaku’s heroic qualities to save his clan…all really well done And a lot of great lore on chakra and kaguya and world building too
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You dont have to give an exact chapter but when does she meet the her lover and when would they get together ?
the story started very good. it's not the most original but still better than most Naruto fanfics imo. would give 4.5 if it wasn't so slow. it's been 15 or so chapters since the start of 1 mission and it's still ongoing that's really too slow and boring.
The novel is good and interesting but please learn to cut the paragraph into good size. your writing style is like put a whole carrot without chopping it into a soup pot.
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The way the author filled the plot holes never ceases to amaze me. But, I gotta admit, after she became a genin, everything seems to become a bit boring and plain.
Not gonna say too many words just read it , its like an original story not like the one that literally follow the event of anime/manga/manhwa counterpart
Nice story and please don't drop this novel.Hopefully author-san upload more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A wonderful fanfiction for the naruto section. It's rare to get a female protagonist that actually is enjoyable to read. You have done a great job realizing her character and keeping it consistent throughout the chapters released as of the moment I am writing this review. I earnestly look forward to where this fanfiction will go in the future.
good job keep up hope to see more ............... ...........................................................................................
The story is good so far. The concept is really different; thus making it more exciting. I am really excited for the coming chapter and to see how the story develops.
best naruto fanfic so far. the concept of the plot and its development currently is really good. the mc's personality is also very interesting and hilarious. looking forward to further development of the story. keep up with the releases![img=recommend][img=update]
Nice start, the plot will be completely new with all those change it change from all those fanfics who sticks to the plot with little change
Did you drop this? I really enjoyed it 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
I have really enjoyed this story and hope to see it continue. It has humorous moments and the author is really good at workd building and immersing you into what is happening. You like all the characters and want them to succeed.
Quite frustrating to read, as the mc starts as a calm and talented child, grows to become arrogant, naive and reckless, while the enemies and secondary characters canon and OC that appear are much stronger than in the show with more features, more high level jutsus, techniques and powers the mc is nerfed for a 'limited time' just while she needs to defeat enemies, of course...
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
the story is amazing and I like how the author made the female mc and her mother a part of the namikaze (Minato namikaze) family............
I like the concept, the story development and the world background are so detail and it shows the concept of alternate reality if 4th hokage are not dead and resulting the corrupt leader (4 idiots) to lose their control but still not quite agree with the character of Hiruzen as he is too out of bound. In my opinion he is a person that likes control but at the same time he's not the type of person that will stoop so low to cooperate like that with Danzo. Either way the butterfly are so strong the development of the story and can't wait about how the MC will resolve the problem.
Revelar Spoiler Personally, I feel like this is a fantastic and unique Naruto story with an incredibly interesting main character and many interesting twists and turns. It undubtedly goes at it’s own pace but if you’re a patient reader, you should have a lot of fun with this story. All I can suggest is to give it a try, I doubt you’ll be disappointed
I'm 30 chapters in and I don't really get a feel for the characters, including the lead. It's like identical robots without any personality or emotion are just exchanging information, instead of people having a conversation.
Good fan fiction, thanks to the author for the work. I liked the development of the main character. The plot line itself, though intersecting with the canon, does not completely copy it. The changes and the main plot twist are new, I did not find similar ones. The characters have their own goals and characters
This is a nice take on the Naruto Canon. I especially love the MC, Kamui... Her character development is on point and the story keeps getting better and better!
she s not overpowered tho ............................................................
I really like the original content and concepts here, one thing that could be better is the pacing of the next arcs, the Shinobu Island felt like a slow burn in some chapters.
Revelar Spoiler Really really amazing stuff. One of the best naruto fanfics I’ve read out of thousands and also one of the best with an OC that doesn’t have any foreknowledge. Just superb! The pacing, the storytelling, the little butterfly wings and their effects, fugaku’s heroic qualities to save his clan…all really well done And a lot of great lore on chakra and kaguya and world building too
is the mc have some hero conplex? pls tell so i wont waste time reading it[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
did u drop this? it's rlly gooddddddddddddddddd...................................................................................................................................................................................
You dont have to give an exact chapter but when does she meet the her lover and when would they get together ?
the story started very good. it's not the most original but still better than most Naruto fanfics imo. would give 4.5 if it wasn't so slow. it's been 15 or so chapters since the start of 1 mission and it's still ongoing that's really too slow and boring.
The novel is good and interesting but please learn to cut the paragraph into good size. your writing style is like put a whole carrot without chopping it into a soup pot.
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The way the author filled the plot holes never ceases to amaze me. But, I gotta admit, after she became a genin, everything seems to become a bit boring and plain.
Not gonna say too many words just read it , its like an original story not like the one that literally follow the event of anime/manga/manhwa counterpart
Nice story and please don't drop this novel.Hopefully author-san upload more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A wonderful fanfiction for the naruto section. It's rare to get a female protagonist that actually is enjoyable to read. You have done a great job realizing her character and keeping it consistent throughout the chapters released as of the moment I am writing this review. I earnestly look forward to where this fanfiction will go in the future.
good job keep up hope to see more ............... ...........................................................................................
The story is good so far. The concept is really different; thus making it more exciting. I am really excited for the coming chapter and to see how the story develops.
best naruto fanfic so far. the concept of the plot and its development currently is really good. the mc's personality is also very interesting and hilarious. looking forward to further development of the story. keep up with the releases![img=recommend][img=update]
Nice start, the plot will be completely new with all those change it change from all those fanfics who sticks to the plot with little change
Did you drop this? I really enjoyed it 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀