Sinopse
She was promised to one of the twins and deeply in love with the other, leaving her torn between the twin brothers.
[MATURE CONTENT R18]
****
The sun was shining brightly, and the birds were singing when the sound of the bell rang. It's the signal that the wedding is happening inside the beautiful cathedral.
Inside the cathedral, the bride and groom just finished exchanging their rings after promising to love one another till death do they part...
"It is with great pleasure that I introduce to all of you our newlyweds. Mr. and Mrs. Jones!" He then looked at the groom.
Mr. Jones, you may now kiss your bride!" Announced the priest for all the guests inside the church to hear.
Everyone applauded and cheered, shouting for the couple to kiss.
"Kiss!"
"Kiss!"
"Kiss!"
Yelled by everyone. However, unknown to everyone, the bride and groom were glaring at each other, while the groom was not moving to comply with the guests' requests.
"Kiss!"
"Kiss!"
"Kiss!"
Shouted everyone once more, waiting for the groom to comply and kiss the beautiful bride.
While everyone excitedly waits for the groom to kiss the new bride...
Suddenly, the church door flew open and banged against its stopper, and stopped with a crack. All eyes swiveled to assess the intrusion.
A very handsome young man barged in who looked identical to the groom who was standing by the altar.
Everyone inside the church was stunned speechless. Some were wondering if they were seeing things or if the other man was for real.
While they were all at a loss for words...
A smile surfaced on the bride's flawless angelic face. Then suddenly, she runs as fast as she can muster toward the intruder, leaving the groom standing on the altar dumbfounded.
As the smattering of polite applause died away, the bride and groom's parents got up and shamelessly followed to chase after the bride and the intruder.
****
If you want to chat with me and have some questions.
Follow me on Tiktok.com/@_AJZHEN_
Instagram: @Ajzheny
If you want to donate, you can do it at:
https://ko-fi.com/ajzhen
Tags
Fãs
-
![Vun_Wei_Ching]()
Vun_Wei_Ching Contribuído 13828 -
![Seaman_ako]()
Seaman_ako Contribuído 3446 -
![Shawn_TF]()
Shawn_TF Contribuído 3152
Presentes
-- Presente
recebido Status de energia semanal
-- Ranking de
Poder 
-- Pedra de
Poder Você também pode gostar
18Opiniões
5
- Qualidade da Tradução
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
Compartilhe seus pensamentos com outras pessoas
Escreva uma avaliação
This is the tale of the Ava and her friends growing up and to eventually find true love. There are twists and turns.The author has used the back setting of her previous stories. Because this is the children's tale, the story can stand alone or be read as part of the ongoing compilation. The author likes to involve her readers. And who knows, you may find yourself getting drawn into the story.
Hello, potential readers. The author here giving the story and myself five stars. I believe this story is one of my best yet, after writing their parents' stories, now is their turn. It will be a slow burn at the beginning but will go fast-paced once the story progressed to adulthood. Come and join me in my world of fantasy, where you could be one of the characters... The following readers had been with me from the beginning and this is to show my appreciation. Denise Williams- Headmistress Shannon H-Guidance Counselor Chupsy- Secret service Pisces-Personal bodyguard Mary_Ghan-Personal bodyguard
Finally! Its only over a year that I waited for the children story. It’s only the beginning and I’m loving it already. Keep up the good work and hope you update a lot. Highly recommended, I know this will be another good one.
So excited for this sequel for both CEO' and their family. The story was so interesting and intriguing just a couple of chapters release good job as always author Ajzhen 👏👏👏💐💐💐
So loving characters, with comedy in different ways, the story just keeps revolving in mind all the time. I egarly wait to read next chapters.
If its from AJZHEN you know its going to be good. And I am really not disappointed. So hooked up! More chapters to go Madam! Lets see who is the best twin win or baka pwd both. Haha
It’s only 13 chapters but im already hooked. come and join me read this wonderful original story. You will not regret once you start. It’s really cute and funny.
The author has previous works that are very popular in the romance genre! I do not know how to make a hot and romantic plotline, so I will focus my review in an objective manner Writing Quality-4.5 (but i made it 5 overall. The descriptions are nice, but there are times that the scenes were "told" but not "shown" to the readers. Things like "he was upset" and other emotions are out there, which I think could be improved. Another point is that there are a lot of passive voice misuse such as "were scattered, began gathering, he was able to catch". The author could change these sentences into a more active one by making the word "was" into an active verb "scattered, gathered, caught" would be preferred. Stability of updates- The author has an uipdate schedule so 5/5 Story development- I like it. It seems solid and unique Character design- Very well made And world background 5/5 kudos for the author!
interesting.....love it🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 thank you [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=coins]😍 so lovely the story is, feel to keep on reading it, without break. Restless to know, who will be paired with whom? Such a mystery 😌
Finally! The children story is out. If you have not add this to your library , your missing out. Heart warming , fun loving characters all around .check it out and join the party.
If your looking for a fun book to read, this one is for you. Highly recommended. Check it out! Very different than the normal cliche story with a evil step sister and step mother. it’s original.
Nice, its the continuation of my two favorite books and all the characters are back. I’m loving it cause i get to read them again . I just love the Love story of their parents, I cant wiat to get to know the children .
Read the story and tou will know that its enjoyable to read. it’s my stress relief after a hard day from work. From the parents story to the children , its superb. kudos to the author you came a long way.
Behold, AJZHEN's spirity entry! It's a refreshing read, something to look forward to reading, as every chapter will leave you on your toes and anticipating what the next will entail. Anything with AJZHEN as its author is a must-read, and I'm excited to read how this story progresses, and what happens next! (To Ava especially o_o) - mari <3
This book is so good!!! I just want to binge read it!!! I really want to read the next chapters!!! I 100% am loving Torn between twin brothers!!! I cant wait to see what will happen next!!!
I am super happy with how frequently it updates and the story development is great! I cant wait to see how the relationship between Ava and the twins evolves!!![img=recommend]
If you've read any of the books written by the lovely AJZHEN you'll know that they are all worth your time, powerstones, freepasses and coins. The mother, sister and aunty books as I would call them are all outstanding, so now that the daughter book has arrived be prepared because it wont disappoint. My lovely AJZHEN welcome back🎉😍😘