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Um im pretty sure most, if not all, death eaters are already white sir….just saying🥸☝️
Im glad you decided to restart the novel it's great I love it. I also love the whole dynamic of other schools and more different adventures.
Please update Your story is very good and has got a strong development potential ☺️
just a stuck up child could write better than this abomination writing quality is the only thing stopping me from deleting this story from the world😅
wimp mc. despieteall the Slytherin traits and clearly a Slytherin or ravenclaw, he was made a Gryffindor since he already made friends with harry on the train. stupid author with an mc that's just there to support harry
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This is one of those novel where MC want to avoid golden trio but find himself living the OG plot by force. like finding himself in golden trio train compartment witnessinng the whole conversions without change, getting into gryffindor house to become their roommate, being pull around in their adventure without consent where he keep saying he wont do but live the plot word for word. If you're into that then this is the book for you, i personally rather read OG novels if thats what i want instead of wasting time on fanfic if nothing major gonna change.
the system barely interferes with his life, just assisting him in his research, and with all different facts of theories presented with well English thing it's good nonetheless. background of his family is rare, since most novels I've seen are mostly from only voldemort's ancestral line or any slytherin family background. so this is still a nice change, a slytherin ancestry going to gryffindor house. this is fine as wine I guess. I hate wine, but not dislike either.
I would like to see the end for this story. (In good meaning) Because it's a stimulator for an imagination that others can't see. (Mostly because they are not careful and are blind p.s don't have imagination for themselves)
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Author has the chinese syndrome of making forced drama with sorting hat, young masters (draco malfoy), constantly uses wrong terminology and mc is a transcendent grade idiot
I see that the character of the story needs more mystery and away from the main characters more (the golden trio), especially Hermione.[img=update][img=recommend]
one of top ten best harry potter fanfiction I have seen for a while I dont think he was sort of coward but had confidence problem in his 1 st year now in his start of 2 year he like a new person can't wait for updates nice character development
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This book has tried my patience time and time again. The Author clearly has never read the books or seen the movies, has a complete disregard to the timing of events, has countless plotholes, and things that only happen because plot without having another reason behind it. And you can't make the argument that "it's Spanish translation so there will be mistakes" its simply just bad writing. Overall I do not recommend this book, it is a complete disappointment to my expectations.
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The story is really good and the reason why I love this story is because this exactly shows the prejudice between a deatheater and a person and this shows how Ron was disgusted by mc as he is the son of a deatheater who got in gryffindor.
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is it dropped??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I want to write this review for three reasons first to say it is a pretty good story. second I want to ask why to people think he has no confidence i am 34 chapters in and he has said they he dosent fight people because it is to much troble to fight with idiots when he dosnt get anything from it I mean he dosent even give a s*** about about the house cup and point because he gets no personal benifit from it. third to the people asking why he didnt take more from his families dark magic library. first off he had only a month before school second off its a library that belongs to a bunch of vicious evil wizards that don't like them a whole lot and some of them seem to want to kill him so no s*** he wouldn't steal more then a couple books.
i like this, the mc is a bit "cold" but his situation does not help. The way it interferes with the story is nice compared to other fanfiction. Having him go to other schools helps a lot to immerse oneself in the history of the mc
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Great story, the MC is very independent but it's primarily because he was forced to be that way by circumstance. Either way he’s a good guy. Big fan of how you are including him in cannon as well.
Um im pretty sure most, if not all, death eaters are already white sir….just saying🥸☝️
Im glad you decided to restart the novel it's great I love it. I also love the whole dynamic of other schools and more different adventures.
Please update Your story is very good and has got a strong development potential ☺️
just a stuck up child could write better than this abomination writing quality is the only thing stopping me from deleting this story from the world😅
wimp mc. despieteall the Slytherin traits and clearly a Slytherin or ravenclaw, he was made a Gryffindor since he already made friends with harry on the train. stupid author with an mc that's just there to support harry
I loved it................................................................................................................................................................................................. ...
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Very nice fanfiction - recommend :) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This is one of those novel where MC want to avoid golden trio but find himself living the OG plot by force. like finding himself in golden trio train compartment witnessinng the whole conversions without change, getting into gryffindor house to become their roommate, being pull around in their adventure without consent where he keep saying he wont do but live the plot word for word. If you're into that then this is the book for you, i personally rather read OG novels if thats what i want instead of wasting time on fanfic if nothing major gonna change.
the system barely interferes with his life, just assisting him in his research, and with all different facts of theories presented with well English thing it's good nonetheless. background of his family is rare, since most novels I've seen are mostly from only voldemort's ancestral line or any slytherin family background. so this is still a nice change, a slytherin ancestry going to gryffindor house. this is fine as wine I guess. I hate wine, but not dislike either.
I would like to see the end for this story. (In good meaning) Because it's a stimulator for an imagination that others can't see. (Mostly because they are not careful and are blind p.s don't have imagination for themselves)
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Author has the chinese syndrome of making forced drama with sorting hat, young masters (draco malfoy), constantly uses wrong terminology and mc is a transcendent grade idiot
I see that the character of the story needs more mystery and away from the main characters more (the golden trio), especially Hermione.[img=update][img=recommend]
one of top ten best harry potter fanfiction I have seen for a while I dont think he was sort of coward but had confidence problem in his 1 st year now in his start of 2 year he like a new person can't wait for updates nice character development
Revelar Spoiler This book has tried my patience time and time again. The Author clearly has never read the books or seen the movies, has a complete disregard to the timing of events, has countless plotholes, and things that only happen because plot without having another reason behind it. And you can't make the argument that "it's Spanish translation so there will be mistakes" its simply just bad writing. Overall I do not recommend this book, it is a complete disappointment to my expectations.
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Revelar Spoiler The story is really good and the reason why I love this story is because this exactly shows the prejudice between a deatheater and a person and this shows how Ron was disgusted by mc as he is the son of a deatheater who got in gryffindor.
I'm not going to put any statement because newnovel forces me to put 120 words so I can numbers.123456789101112131415161718192021222324352637382930313233344536373839404142434445464748495051
is it dropped??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I want to write this review for three reasons first to say it is a pretty good story. second I want to ask why to people think he has no confidence i am 34 chapters in and he has said they he dosent fight people because it is to much troble to fight with idiots when he dosnt get anything from it I mean he dosent even give a s*** about about the house cup and point because he gets no personal benifit from it. third to the people asking why he didnt take more from his families dark magic library. first off he had only a month before school second off its a library that belongs to a bunch of vicious evil wizards that don't like them a whole lot and some of them seem to want to kill him so no s*** he wouldn't steal more then a couple books.
i like this, the mc is a bit "cold" but his situation does not help. The way it interferes with the story is nice compared to other fanfiction. Having him go to other schools helps a lot to immerse oneself in the history of the mc
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Great story, the MC is very independent but it's primarily because he was forced to be that way by circumstance. Either way he’s a good guy. Big fan of how you are including him in cannon as well.