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"Are there descriptive battles or a relatively decent introduction to modern weapons? And above all, in which chapter do planes, tanks or whatever appear? I've read novels that are about technology, but only the first 40 chapters, after that it's pure magic or cultivation even though the novel is supposedly about something "technological"
Can anyone help me find a novel similar to this but the Mac had a sister, was married to a princess (I think), caught against a demon or vampire and opens his own auction, also he made weapons that were considered rare like they were nothing… that’s all I remember
Overall I enjoyed the piece, now somewhere around chapter 150. But not enough time to read it. So I'll ask those readers who know. With whom the main character develops romance?
Almost at an important milestone that could really help your novel, which is reaching 500 chapters! I am loving the book so far. Though the chapter release is kind of abysmal and probably holds back the back from more good tickets. I think this novel has great potential and that you should not give up. I will continue to support this novel. Very excited for the upcoming chapters
Man, I started reading this novel but I didn't see the h1arem tag. It's a good read but not my type of novel.
Awesome Story More plz. this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in
Good story can get frustrating though with some plot lines (especially the relationship with his mom.) The main character becomes inconsistent sometimes. Some of his characteristics is all over the place. still a good story worth the read.
Author, my question is about the cultivation rankings, we want to learn more about it, you never even explain about it.
it's a great book to read I enjoy it but the only problem is that gravity should be a supreme attribute cuz it goes in depth with physics and if you can create a black hole that then you can do almost anything like travel back in time/forward in time to and you can rip atom's apart there for you can create anything that is matter and you can absorbs energy likes it's nothing and there for you can create a sun/a planet or just a cheeseburger 😅
Review at 120 chapters: Overall, this novel is pretty good. The pacing of his power increases, the characters, and the other general things are nice. The biggest issue I'm having which is making me take this novel slow is that the MC has absolutely no real goal. I can't anything more because it will spoil it but, because of this point, it's makes many things lack intensity or depth of meaning. I'll keep reading because the novel is definitely enjoyable but I hope this changes soon enough.
I’m loving it. However I do agree with many other reviews, the system holds his hand a little to much. I understood at the beginning however he got his own land to build a factory like 100-200 chapters ago and still has yet to do it, just relies on the system. We have yet to see the “Genius Weapon Designer”. Im still enjoying it very much though and hope it doesn’t get dropped. Anyways you release chapter pretty much everyday so keep up the hard work. Needs some work but overall is a great story.
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I didn't even started to read but giving 5 stars just because the concept has very good potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing novel. I like the MC. He's not just a "good person". Also, there seems to be no romance, which is great. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
I have to say this is a great novel and once you get around to 150 you learn so much and see the great potential this novel has! I hope we can eventually get 2 chapters a day 🤩
Great Story Kinda frustrating for me not knowing the proper plot with his mother. Please post more .........................................
I really like the concept of selling modern weapons in a magical world. Though the MC is really OP right at the start. It's a fun read without much stake or tension.
have read till chap 113(current latest) and this is my opinion. its a well-thought story. the characters are great. and when i say great i mean annoyingly real. well wht i mean is that altho there are some annoying characters. they dont feel like a 2d char. so altho i hate them, i appreciate those characters. the world however are a bit weird. its a western fantasy but the people are eastern and the term sect or ancestors do exists. so its a bit weird but not exactly in a bad way. the world building is slow, we barely know a lot abt the world. i mean there are some bits of info that does indicates the depth of the history. but as of now, none have been revealed. which is why 3 stars for now. my biggest and only problem is the MC as he is a hotheaded type. like seriously, he would do something reckles on a whim. and not only that, he is quite ruthless and cold and also evil in a way. which honestly was already warn by the author, but i didnt read it. so thats just my fault. but nevertheless, MC is just annoying to me. he acts like a tyrant, offending people for the smallest reason. its like yeah, you will be ruthless if someone pass your bottomline. but the prob is, your bottomline is wayyy too high. perhaps the best way to describe him is that he is acts like a noble. he is arrogant and hot blooded. fearless towards anyone. if you offend me by the slightest, ill kill you or extort you. as you can see, i really dislike MC. but in the end i kept reading. bcs i feel like the book has potential and as of now, the characters still feels real and well design. so yeah, idk how long i can persist. perhaps another 100 chap unless the MC changes his personality. so overall, the story are great. plothole do exist here and there, but most of them doesnt really change the core of the story. so we can let that slide. thus, my only advice w you is to prepare yourself w the MC's personality, bcs if you are like me. who likes the complete opposite of this MC. well, you can expect to frown in annoyance every 5 chapter or so. other than tht, the story is great and should be given a try.
Overall all an amazing story! I didn't find any too big writing errors, but no human is perfect. Uhm, I would prefer the update stability to be better, but it is what it is. I think the story is going in a great direction. Character design is impeccable. World background, well, I haven't seen much, but from what I have seen, it is detailed and nice.
The idea of modern weapons in a cultivation world is pretty interesting while sometimes the story gets bad overall the characters and the world are nice. However like most new novels the stability of updates is a bit lacking
Well i mean yeah this is good sure it’s just that the writing is pretty bad…good plot, don’t know why mc hates the system for being stingy tho
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I love this novel out of all of them that you have wrote love the background info that we get super fun to read when I get on the site bye
Hello, this is Snowstar. I wanted to highlight a few points that the readers need to consider before starting the novel. 1) MC usually has a fake bright personality on the surface but is cold on the inside. So, readers can expect a ruthless MC from time to time. 2) MC isn't OP from the start. He goes from weak to strong. 3) MC is a grey character. Due to his inner cold personality, he might lean to the evil side from time to time. Most importantly, he isn't forgiving to those who cross his bottom line. 4) Romance isn't the focus of the novel. 5) There will be side stories for the central characters more often. 6) The update stability will be 7ch/wk. Depending on its popularity, it might increase or decrease in the future. Any questions, feel free to ask here or in the comments section of the chapters. I'll try my best to answer them
"Are there descriptive battles or a relatively decent introduction to modern weapons? And above all, in which chapter do planes, tanks or whatever appear? I've read novels that are about technology, but only the first 40 chapters, after that it's pure magic or cultivation even though the novel is supposedly about something "technological"
Can anyone help me find a novel similar to this but the Mac had a sister, was married to a princess (I think), caught against a demon or vampire and opens his own auction, also he made weapons that were considered rare like they were nothing… that’s all I remember
Overall I enjoyed the piece, now somewhere around chapter 150. But not enough time to read it. So I'll ask those readers who know. With whom the main character develops romance?
Almost at an important milestone that could really help your novel, which is reaching 500 chapters! I am loving the book so far. Though the chapter release is kind of abysmal and probably holds back the back from more good tickets. I think this novel has great potential and that you should not give up. I will continue to support this novel. Very excited for the upcoming chapters
Man, I started reading this novel but I didn't see the h1arem tag. It's a good read but not my type of novel.
Awesome Story More plz. this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in
Good story can get frustrating though with some plot lines (especially the relationship with his mom.) The main character becomes inconsistent sometimes. Some of his characteristics is all over the place. still a good story worth the read.
Author, my question is about the cultivation rankings, we want to learn more about it, you never even explain about it.
it's a great book to read I enjoy it but the only problem is that gravity should be a supreme attribute cuz it goes in depth with physics and if you can create a black hole that then you can do almost anything like travel back in time/forward in time to and you can rip atom's apart there for you can create anything that is matter and you can absorbs energy likes it's nothing and there for you can create a sun/a planet or just a cheeseburger 😅
Review at 120 chapters: Overall, this novel is pretty good. The pacing of his power increases, the characters, and the other general things are nice. The biggest issue I'm having which is making me take this novel slow is that the MC has absolutely no real goal. I can't anything more because it will spoil it but, because of this point, it's makes many things lack intensity or depth of meaning. I'll keep reading because the novel is definitely enjoyable but I hope this changes soon enough.
I’m loving it. However I do agree with many other reviews, the system holds his hand a little to much. I understood at the beginning however he got his own land to build a factory like 100-200 chapters ago and still has yet to do it, just relies on the system. We have yet to see the “Genius Weapon Designer”. Im still enjoying it very much though and hope it doesn’t get dropped. Anyways you release chapter pretty much everyday so keep up the hard work. Needs some work but overall is a great story.
Revelar Spoiler I didn't even started to read but giving 5 stars just because the concept has very good potential!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing novel. I like the MC. He's not just a "good person". Also, there seems to be no romance, which is great. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
I have to say this is a great novel and once you get around to 150 you learn so much and see the great potential this novel has! I hope we can eventually get 2 chapters a day 🤩
Great Story Kinda frustrating for me not knowing the proper plot with his mother. Please post more .........................................
I really like the concept of selling modern weapons in a magical world. Though the MC is really OP right at the start. It's a fun read without much stake or tension.
have read till chap 113(current latest) and this is my opinion. its a well-thought story. the characters are great. and when i say great i mean annoyingly real. well wht i mean is that altho there are some annoying characters. they dont feel like a 2d char. so altho i hate them, i appreciate those characters. the world however are a bit weird. its a western fantasy but the people are eastern and the term sect or ancestors do exists. so its a bit weird but not exactly in a bad way. the world building is slow, we barely know a lot abt the world. i mean there are some bits of info that does indicates the depth of the history. but as of now, none have been revealed. which is why 3 stars for now. my biggest and only problem is the MC as he is a hotheaded type. like seriously, he would do something reckles on a whim. and not only that, he is quite ruthless and cold and also evil in a way. which honestly was already warn by the author, but i didnt read it. so thats just my fault. but nevertheless, MC is just annoying to me. he acts like a tyrant, offending people for the smallest reason. its like yeah, you will be ruthless if someone pass your bottomline. but the prob is, your bottomline is wayyy too high. perhaps the best way to describe him is that he is acts like a noble. he is arrogant and hot blooded. fearless towards anyone. if you offend me by the slightest, ill kill you or extort you. as you can see, i really dislike MC. but in the end i kept reading. bcs i feel like the book has potential and as of now, the characters still feels real and well design. so yeah, idk how long i can persist. perhaps another 100 chap unless the MC changes his personality. so overall, the story are great. plothole do exist here and there, but most of them doesnt really change the core of the story. so we can let that slide. thus, my only advice w you is to prepare yourself w the MC's personality, bcs if you are like me. who likes the complete opposite of this MC. well, you can expect to frown in annoyance every 5 chapter or so. other than tht, the story is great and should be given a try.
Overall all an amazing story! I didn't find any too big writing errors, but no human is perfect. Uhm, I would prefer the update stability to be better, but it is what it is. I think the story is going in a great direction. Character design is impeccable. World background, well, I haven't seen much, but from what I have seen, it is detailed and nice.
The idea of modern weapons in a cultivation world is pretty interesting while sometimes the story gets bad overall the characters and the world are nice. However like most new novels the stability of updates is a bit lacking
Well i mean yeah this is good sure it’s just that the writing is pretty bad…good plot, don’t know why mc hates the system for being stingy tho
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I love this novel out of all of them that you have wrote love the background info that we get super fun to read when I get on the site bye
Hello, this is Snowstar. I wanted to highlight a few points that the readers need to consider before starting the novel. 1) MC usually has a fake bright personality on the surface but is cold on the inside. So, readers can expect a ruthless MC from time to time. 2) MC isn't OP from the start. He goes from weak to strong. 3) MC is a grey character. Due to his inner cold personality, he might lean to the evil side from time to time. Most importantly, he isn't forgiving to those who cross his bottom line. 4) Romance isn't the focus of the novel. 5) There will be side stories for the central characters more often. 6) The update stability will be 7ch/wk. Depending on its popularity, it might increase or decrease in the future. Any questions, feel free to ask here or in the comments section of the chapters. I'll try my best to answer them