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good straight forward fun story. not too long. maybe a little short. but great overall.
I tthought it was pretty cool, happy he at leaat finished the story but I felt like he was running out of things to write about so he just ended it but ngl pretty solid
Honestly this is one of the best novel I've read so far. Really great one. I had hoped that you would mention about supes and Diana. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I will not say that it was the best story, but one of the best and with an ending that although rushed, very well narrated 5star____________
A more realistic hero view with the superman character type. Still a Boy Scout mentality but the world could have been better flushed out.
I am always surprised by such authors with such fantasies . the hero likes to show off , but what prevented Superman from making cancer drugs ? and do not interfere in human culture , it is clear that Superman is not the defender of the earth , but the defender of the universe , but he is hunting for robbers ? nonsense superman could make the police stronger could create a tracking system , but really I can 't understand superman who doesn 't think with his head . There is power, but he not only has the power, but also the brain of superman
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Like the author said it was a rush ending. But other than that it was a fantastic story that I would read over and over again. Please never lose your incredible imagination and creativity.
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The story is just plain wired, characters pop up, no context or real background to anything. The MC is has a very weak character build with a mix of being naive, stupid, weak-willed and kinda dense that it makes some parts very cringe. All in all it's a basic slice of life story with a superpowerd MC but it lacks all the fluff and emotions that make a slice of life good. The ending was also a rush job.
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The end felt so rushed and has no meaning behind it but still it's far much better than other fanfiction on webnovel as they don't even go till half story. It's nice one time read
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This was a good story. You rushed the hero's work but it was still good jkjkhkjkhjkhjkhjkjhkhjkjhkjhkjhk jkjhkhjkjhkjhy khj k jh khj k hjk jhk hj khj
It's boring to die 😩😩😩 I really try, I stopped in Chapter 30. It's the Bordel in it. The MC is weird and foolish, characters are introduced from left to right without reasons. No way to attach themselves to them because he does not have a story, no background. It's not like I was better than a story with harem but for once it's not that (only) who spoils history, it's no story to spoil. I tried because the superman stories if they are rare but unfortunately this one is not great. Good luck to the author.
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Quite good enough story about immortal godlike being that grows up within mortals; it could be better, it could be more satisfying than it is, but we have, what we have - and it's enough.
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This story was a bit too much like a slice of life story with some Hero elements thrown into it. I think I would’ve enjoyed it more if it had a couple story arcs. Other than that, I don’t regret reading it and it was enjoyable. 3.6 out of 5, maybe in a year I’ll read it again.
this is the most boring novel who i ever read in this webnovel, at least one punchman is better than this, not to offend author.. but this novel is like one punchman with a bit of romance. that's my honest opinion. peace ✌
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nice story looking forward to how it develops. Not exactly the best but it's interesting to read someone's idea on how the characters make decisions and adapt. Hope it gets updated more frequently can't wait to see what happens.
It's not bad i guess, its just that there's no real development in the story and the premise is generic using the trope very overpowered loner. I didn't say its terrible and you should not read cause i respect the grind it takes to write the novel just that if you dont want to see sth generic then you shouldn't. (I am, or was on chapter 32 when im dropping the book)
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Al empezar a leerla me encanto como se desarrollaba y la adición de personajes que no se ve mu ch o en los fanfic es fantástico, autor si lees la reseña adiciona más categoría y en la descripción mejorala un poco que tienes una buena historia, me gustó mucho gracias por traer y espero que lo sigas hasta el final y que sea largo.
Not gonna lie, this fan-fic became one of my favourite fanfics i have ever read. It's really impressive how the mc is not just living like a guy who wants to follow on his father's footsteps in becoming a hero but still protects the world. It's really entertaining and a must read from my point of view.
I started reading your Potter book and was hooked. So now it's a day later and I've finished both. seriously. I put off responsibility to keep reading. really awesome work.
I just finished this book and feel like crying I love it deeply it was a great take on super heroes thank you author for this
good straight forward fun story. not too long. maybe a little short. but great overall.
I tthought it was pretty cool, happy he at leaat finished the story but I felt like he was running out of things to write about so he just ended it but ngl pretty solid
Honestly this is one of the best novel I've read so far. Really great one. I had hoped that you would mention about supes and Diana. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I will not say that it was the best story, but one of the best and with an ending that although rushed, very well narrated 5star____________
A more realistic hero view with the superman character type. Still a Boy Scout mentality but the world could have been better flushed out.
I am always surprised by such authors with such fantasies . the hero likes to show off , but what prevented Superman from making cancer drugs ? and do not interfere in human culture , it is clear that Superman is not the defender of the earth , but the defender of the universe , but he is hunting for robbers ? nonsense superman could make the police stronger could create a tracking system , but really I can 't understand superman who doesn 't think with his head . There is power, but he not only has the power, but also the brain of superman
meh---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Like the author said it was a rush ending. But other than that it was a fantastic story that I would read over and over again. Please never lose your incredible imagination and creativity.
Revelar Spoiler The story is just plain wired, characters pop up, no context or real background to anything. The MC is has a very weak character build with a mix of being naive, stupid, weak-willed and kinda dense that it makes some parts very cringe. All in all it's a basic slice of life story with a superpowerd MC but it lacks all the fluff and emotions that make a slice of life good. The ending was also a rush job.
Revelar Spoiler The end felt so rushed and has no meaning behind it but still it's far much better than other fanfiction on webnovel as they don't even go till half story. It's nice one time read
lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo lixo
This was a good story. You rushed the hero's work but it was still good jkjkhkjkhjkhjkhjkjhkhjkjhkjhkjhk jkjhkhjkjhkjhy khj k jh khj k hjk jhk hj khj
It's boring to die 😩😩😩 I really try, I stopped in Chapter 30. It's the Bordel in it. The MC is weird and foolish, characters are introduced from left to right without reasons. No way to attach themselves to them because he does not have a story, no background. It's not like I was better than a story with harem but for once it's not that (only) who spoils history, it's no story to spoil. I tried because the superman stories if they are rare but unfortunately this one is not great. Good luck to the author.
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Revelar Spoiler Quite good enough story about immortal godlike being that grows up within mortals; it could be better, it could be more satisfying than it is, but we have, what we have - and it's enough.
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This story was a bit too much like a slice of life story with some Hero elements thrown into it. I think I would’ve enjoyed it more if it had a couple story arcs. Other than that, I don’t regret reading it and it was enjoyable. 3.6 out of 5, maybe in a year I’ll read it again.
this is the most boring novel who i ever read in this webnovel, at least one punchman is better than this, not to offend author.. but this novel is like one punchman with a bit of romance. that's my honest opinion. peace ✌
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nice story looking forward to how it develops. Not exactly the best but it's interesting to read someone's idea on how the characters make decisions and adapt. Hope it gets updated more frequently can't wait to see what happens.
It's not bad i guess, its just that there's no real development in the story and the premise is generic using the trope very overpowered loner. I didn't say its terrible and you should not read cause i respect the grind it takes to write the novel just that if you dont want to see sth generic then you shouldn't. (I am, or was on chapter 32 when im dropping the book)
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Revelar Spoiler Al empezar a leerla me encanto como se desarrollaba y la adición de personajes que no se ve mu ch o en los fanfic es fantástico, autor si lees la reseña adiciona más categoría y en la descripción mejorala un poco que tienes una buena historia, me gustó mucho gracias por traer y espero que lo sigas hasta el final y que sea largo.
Not gonna lie, this fan-fic became one of my favourite fanfics i have ever read. It's really impressive how the mc is not just living like a guy who wants to follow on his father's footsteps in becoming a hero but still protects the world. It's really entertaining and a must read from my point of view.
I started reading your Potter book and was hooked. So now it's a day later and I've finished both. seriously. I put off responsibility to keep reading. really awesome work.
I just finished this book and feel like crying I love it deeply it was a great take on super heroes thank you author for this