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Painfully average. Story feels rushed and is poorly thought out. Cringed hard at some parts, like how the MC talked so much about how he couldn't use his guns because of Japanese gun law to stop Muscular when he can just put the guns(and shell casings ejected from the gun) into his inventory as well as how he can't use his Super Punch cheat as he doesn't know if it'll kill him only to end up using the Super Punch cheat a few paragraphs later for no reason. The romance with Fuyuki is also incredibly bland and her existance is entirely relegated to making useless filler content. Go play video games or read something else. There's nothing really worth reading this for nor makes it unique.
GTA San Andreas: lista completa de códigos de trapaça para PC e laptop Aqui está a lista completa de códigos de trapaça do GTA San Andreas para PC. BAGUVIX – Saúde Infinita FULLCLIP – Munição infinita CVWKXAM – Oxigênio Infinito STATEOFEMERGENCY – Modo Caos BLUESUEDESHOES – Elvis entrou no prédio YSOHNUL - Relógio rápido SPEEDITUP – Jogabilidade mais rápida SLOWITDOWN – Jogabilidade mais lenta CJPHONEHOME – BMX Hop gigante CANGURU – Super Salto CIKGCGX – Beach Rave PRIEBJ – Tema Funhouse BEKKNQV – Tema Excêntrico CRAZYTOWN – Tema de Carnaval MUNASEF – Modo Adrenal IOJUFZN – Modo Motim JCNRUAD – Smash N' Boom ONLYHOMIESALLOWED – Membros de gangues em todos os lugares FOOOXFT - Peds armados BGLUAWML – Ataque Peds (Foguetes) AJLOJYQY – Peds atacam uns aos outros BAGOWPG – Você está caçado AIYPWZQP – Pára-quedas BUFFMEUP – Muscle Max BTCDBCB – Gordo KVGYZQK – Magro HELLOLADIES – Sexy Maxed BEKKNQV - Ímã de Vadia ADORE-ME - Respeito Máximo CVWKXAM - Capacidade pulmonar máxima NATURALTALENT - Habilidades do veículo maximizadas BRINGITON - Nível de Procurado Máximo ROCKETMAN - Jetpack GOODBYECRUELWORLD – Suicídio AEZAKMI – Nível de procurado nunca aumenta OSRBLHH – Nível de Procurado + 2 ASNAEB – Nível de procurado liberado BMTPWHR – Tema Caminhoneiro BMTPWHR – Tema Rural NINJATOWN – Tema Ninja NIGHTPROWLER – Meia-Noite Eterna XJVSNAJ – 00:00 às 12:00 OFVIAC – 21:00 CWJXUOC – Tempestade de Areia PLEASANTLYWARM – Clima ensolarado TOODAMNHOT – Tempo super ensolarado VERÃO ESCOCÊS – Tempestade AUIFRVQS – Tempo Chuvoso CFVFGMJ – Tempo Nevoeiro ALNSFMZO – Tempo nublado WHEELSONLYPLEASE – Carro invisível SJMAHPE – Recrute Qualquer Um (9mm) ROCKETMAYHEM – Recrute Qualquer Um (Foguetes) BIFBUZZ – Gangues dominam as ruas HESOYAM – Saúde, Armadura, $ 250.000 LXGIWYL – Armas 1, Grunt PROFISSIONALSKIT – Armas 2, Cirurgião UZUMYMW – Armas 3, Berserker PROFISSIONALKILLER - Nível de Estatística Hitman STICKLIKEGLUE – Manuseio incrível YLTEICZ – Tráfego Agressivo GHOSTTOWN – Tráfego reduzido EVERYONEISRICH – Sweet Ride Car Traffic EVERYONEISPOOR – POS Car Traffic FVTMNBZ - Tráfego do País LLQPFBN – Tráfego Rosa IOWDLAC – Tráfego Negro ZEIIVG – Tráfego semáforo verde SPEEDFREAK - Todos os carros movidos a nitro BUBBLECARS - Flutuar flutuar no impacto FLYINGFISH – Barcos Voadores RIPAZHA – Carros Voadores CPKTNWT – Carros explodem VKYPQCF – Táxi Nitroso, L3 Hop OHDUDE – Caçador de Spawn MONSTERMASH – Spawn Monster Ride JUMPJET – Gerar Hidra VROCKPOKEY – Spawn Racecar ITSALLBULL – Spawn Dozer CELEBRITYSTATUS – Spawn Limo AIWPRTON – Gerar Rinoceronte WHERESTHEFUNERAL – Gerar Romero FOURWHEELFUN – Spawn Quad TRUEGRIME - Gerar Caminhão de Lixo FLYINGTOSTUNT – Spawn Stunt Plane RZHSUEW – Gerar Cadillac CQZIJMB – Spawn Bloodring Banger JQNTDMH – Gerador de Spawn KGGGDKP – Spawn Hovercraft AMOMHRER - Caminhão-tanque de desova
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Aku tidak tau pendapat kalian bagaimana tapi menurutku ini cukup membosankan. seharusnya pengguna system GTA harus sedikit jahat dan egois bukan penyayang.
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It was good but it has many holes and kinda dissapointing that he just limit's his strength... It also feels like their kinda forced. It would be better if he just late bloomed in his quirk, not trying to hide it.
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i wanna ask, how many system in this novel? when fuyumi got 1, i already verge on dropping the novel cuz i think it will get too complicated for a fanfic. i already read till chapter 60+ because i hope it will not be like future diary where the host need to kill each other. if dear author read this please reply.....
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A dead hero character. I do not mean that he is cold and impressive. On the contrary, he is pathetic. He asks for a date in a primitive way, without love or confessions.
Great MHA fanfic, has that law and order vide a mix of Deadpool. You can definitely relax will reading this fanfic. Since this story is a early publish I'm not going to comment on Grammer because that can be edited later. The 'flow' of the story was so-so in the start but got better and better later on. The main character is well designed, although some of the interactions could be considered robotic, I think that he is cool. Yes, so my review is gonna be a 5, I would like to thank Gonshido for publishing this on SH and really really really hope it goes far. :)
truly in my opinion the fanfic is not really good it could be good but it isnt but just because gru is in the image you get one extra star in each category
this is the perfect definition of to not bite more than you can chew 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄👏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
what's the point of empowering the character too quickly if he's just going to limit himself all the time? and these names after the lines are completely unnecessary, and the story development is kind of meh
consider is this profesional courtesy.. Good job man.. dont take my bad comment to heart, well, if you take it too is not a problem. sorry for my bad english, not my 1st..
Специальный мега обзор на великом-могучем ! Есть один вопрос который сильно мешает восприятию, а точнее последняя глава если это правда концовка, то это черт возьми ужас! Автор дал нам надежду за 90+ глав и разрушение её за пару глав убьет веру в фанфики навсегда. Еще есть проблема с мировым фоном, фона вообще нету ГГ просто забыл про основной сюжет мга и туда его надо-то вместить и идеальным моментом для этого будет инцидент с Stain, а то в самом произведении даже не упоминалось хотя бы про инцидент с лигой злодеев
It's a great fanfic, good job Author-san. But it's just there's nothing serene about MC's life. At first I thought it will be slice of life fanfic and maybe some hero work. Mc just wanted to get strong and save eri, he started vigilante work just to get fighting experience. Everything was going good but suddenly he just started fighting with heroes and government for apparently no reason. I just don't get it, what is mc's goal? Because from what I understood by reading this fic is that mc is no hero of justice who wants to cleanse the corrupt government.
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Gold, just Gold. If you think that you arent sure its a good read, trust me, it is for various reasons. Just give it a couple chapters, you will love it.
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Its unique... GTA system in superpower world. I would be dumb if I dont like this... Apreciate your train of thought with this wonderful story and implementation. cheeeersss... Please just dont drop
i have read until chp 76, i will say this ff is unique... the chararter, their personality, interaction and all i want say is RESPECT ++ ....
The chapter is interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
GTA San Andreas HUD in MHA . . .,...............................,............. ........... .. . . . . . ............ . . . . . . . . . . .
A fun story with an interesting combination of system and world. If your looking for a really serious novel this may not be for you. though it is a fun story which is very enjoyable ir you dont take it too seriously and just go along for the ride. All in all enjoyable and a good read
First of all I want to say Mc and CJ interactions are hella funny. Story is about MC getting iskeai to MHA with Gta system (with cheats) as you can think Mc is Op with cheats and Character interactions are Too good like Mc with Eri & Mc with his team especially knuckle Guy (forget his name) and Heroine also interesting (with hers quirks, you will know about when you read it😜) Mc interacts with All-might and Deku but not too much (just acceptable levels) and yeah Mc can go to Gta world which is Hella Funny, you guys will love it [To Author: Mc is too rich, so make him get the technology and stuff for surveillance and tracking etc, like Batman & Base for his operations and don't show too much of UA stuff because every Mha Ff has done it and now it's too boring. I hope you didn't drop this, Anyway Goodluck]
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Teve algumas partes que não gostei seja por opinião pessoal ou por outro motivo, mas também teve partes que gostei é outras que ri muito. Recomendo pra quem não tem nada de melhor pra ler
Painfully average. Story feels rushed and is poorly thought out. Cringed hard at some parts, like how the MC talked so much about how he couldn't use his guns because of Japanese gun law to stop Muscular when he can just put the guns(and shell casings ejected from the gun) into his inventory as well as how he can't use his Super Punch cheat as he doesn't know if it'll kill him only to end up using the Super Punch cheat a few paragraphs later for no reason. The romance with Fuyuki is also incredibly bland and her existance is entirely relegated to making useless filler content. Go play video games or read something else. There's nothing really worth reading this for nor makes it unique.
GTA San Andreas: lista completa de códigos de trapaça para PC e laptop Aqui está a lista completa de códigos de trapaça do GTA San Andreas para PC. BAGUVIX – Saúde Infinita FULLCLIP – Munição infinita CVWKXAM – Oxigênio Infinito STATEOFEMERGENCY – Modo Caos BLUESUEDESHOES – Elvis entrou no prédio YSOHNUL - Relógio rápido SPEEDITUP – Jogabilidade mais rápida SLOWITDOWN – Jogabilidade mais lenta CJPHONEHOME – BMX Hop gigante CANGURU – Super Salto CIKGCGX – Beach Rave PRIEBJ – Tema Funhouse BEKKNQV – Tema Excêntrico CRAZYTOWN – Tema de Carnaval MUNASEF – Modo Adrenal IOJUFZN – Modo Motim JCNRUAD – Smash N' Boom ONLYHOMIESALLOWED – Membros de gangues em todos os lugares FOOOXFT - Peds armados BGLUAWML – Ataque Peds (Foguetes) AJLOJYQY – Peds atacam uns aos outros BAGOWPG – Você está caçado AIYPWZQP – Pára-quedas BUFFMEUP – Muscle Max BTCDBCB – Gordo KVGYZQK – Magro HELLOLADIES – Sexy Maxed BEKKNQV - Ímã de Vadia ADORE-ME - Respeito Máximo CVWKXAM - Capacidade pulmonar máxima NATURALTALENT - Habilidades do veículo maximizadas BRINGITON - Nível de Procurado Máximo ROCKETMAN - Jetpack GOODBYECRUELWORLD – Suicídio AEZAKMI – Nível de procurado nunca aumenta OSRBLHH – Nível de Procurado + 2 ASNAEB – Nível de procurado liberado BMTPWHR – Tema Caminhoneiro BMTPWHR – Tema Rural NINJATOWN – Tema Ninja NIGHTPROWLER – Meia-Noite Eterna XJVSNAJ – 00:00 às 12:00 OFVIAC – 21:00 CWJXUOC – Tempestade de Areia PLEASANTLYWARM – Clima ensolarado TOODAMNHOT – Tempo super ensolarado VERÃO ESCOCÊS – Tempestade AUIFRVQS – Tempo Chuvoso CFVFGMJ – Tempo Nevoeiro ALNSFMZO – Tempo nublado WHEELSONLYPLEASE – Carro invisível SJMAHPE – Recrute Qualquer Um (9mm) ROCKETMAYHEM – Recrute Qualquer Um (Foguetes) BIFBUZZ – Gangues dominam as ruas HESOYAM – Saúde, Armadura, $ 250.000 LXGIWYL – Armas 1, Grunt PROFISSIONALSKIT – Armas 2, Cirurgião UZUMYMW – Armas 3, Berserker PROFISSIONALKILLER - Nível de Estatística Hitman STICKLIKEGLUE – Manuseio incrível YLTEICZ – Tráfego Agressivo GHOSTTOWN – Tráfego reduzido EVERYONEISRICH – Sweet Ride Car Traffic EVERYONEISPOOR – POS Car Traffic FVTMNBZ - Tráfego do País LLQPFBN – Tráfego Rosa IOWDLAC – Tráfego Negro ZEIIVG – Tráfego semáforo verde SPEEDFREAK - Todos os carros movidos a nitro BUBBLECARS - Flutuar flutuar no impacto FLYINGFISH – Barcos Voadores RIPAZHA – Carros Voadores CPKTNWT – Carros explodem VKYPQCF – Táxi Nitroso, L3 Hop OHDUDE – Caçador de Spawn MONSTERMASH – Spawn Monster Ride JUMPJET – Gerar Hidra VROCKPOKEY – Spawn Racecar ITSALLBULL – Spawn Dozer CELEBRITYSTATUS – Spawn Limo AIWPRTON – Gerar Rinoceronte WHERESTHEFUNERAL – Gerar Romero FOURWHEELFUN – Spawn Quad TRUEGRIME - Gerar Caminhão de Lixo FLYINGTOSTUNT – Spawn Stunt Plane RZHSUEW – Gerar Cadillac CQZIJMB – Spawn Bloodring Banger JQNTDMH – Gerador de Spawn KGGGDKP – Spawn Hovercraft AMOMHRER - Caminhão-tanque de desova
Revelar Spoiler Aku tidak tau pendapat kalian bagaimana tapi menurutku ini cukup membosankan. seharusnya pengguna system GTA harus sedikit jahat dan egois bukan penyayang.
This is my invitation for you to see this fanfiction🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
It was good but it has many holes and kinda dissapointing that he just limit's his strength... It also feels like their kinda forced. It would be better if he just late bloomed in his quirk, not trying to hide it.
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i wanna ask, how many system in this novel? when fuyumi got 1, i already verge on dropping the novel cuz i think it will get too complicated for a fanfic. i already read till chapter 60+ because i hope it will not be like future diary where the host need to kill each other. if dear author read this please reply.....
Revelar Spoiler A dead hero character. I do not mean that he is cold and impressive. On the contrary, he is pathetic. He asks for a date in a primitive way, without love or confessions.
Great MHA fanfic, has that law and order vide a mix of Deadpool. You can definitely relax will reading this fanfic. Since this story is a early publish I'm not going to comment on Grammer because that can be edited later. The 'flow' of the story was so-so in the start but got better and better later on. The main character is well designed, although some of the interactions could be considered robotic, I think that he is cool. Yes, so my review is gonna be a 5, I would like to thank Gonshido for publishing this on SH and really really really hope it goes far. :)
truly in my opinion the fanfic is not really good it could be good but it isnt but just because gru is in the image you get one extra star in each category
this is the perfect definition of to not bite more than you can chew 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄👏🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
what's the point of empowering the character too quickly if he's just going to limit himself all the time? and these names after the lines are completely unnecessary, and the story development is kind of meh
consider is this profesional courtesy.. Good job man.. dont take my bad comment to heart, well, if you take it too is not a problem. sorry for my bad english, not my 1st..
Специальный мега обзор на великом-могучем ! Есть один вопрос который сильно мешает восприятию, а точнее последняя глава если это правда концовка, то это черт возьми ужас! Автор дал нам надежду за 90+ глав и разрушение её за пару глав убьет веру в фанфики навсегда. Еще есть проблема с мировым фоном, фона вообще нету ГГ просто забыл про основной сюжет мга и туда его надо-то вместить и идеальным моментом для этого будет инцидент с Stain, а то в самом произведении даже не упоминалось хотя бы про инцидент с лигой злодеев
It's a great fanfic, good job Author-san. But it's just there's nothing serene about MC's life. At first I thought it will be slice of life fanfic and maybe some hero work. Mc just wanted to get strong and save eri, he started vigilante work just to get fighting experience. Everything was going good but suddenly he just started fighting with heroes and government for apparently no reason. I just don't get it, what is mc's goal? Because from what I understood by reading this fic is that mc is no hero of justice who wants to cleanse the corrupt government.
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Gold, just Gold. If you think that you arent sure its a good read, trust me, it is for various reasons. Just give it a couple chapters, you will love it.
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Its unique... GTA system in superpower world. I would be dumb if I dont like this... Apreciate your train of thought with this wonderful story and implementation. cheeeersss... Please just dont drop
i have read until chp 76, i will say this ff is unique... the chararter, their personality, interaction and all i want say is RESPECT ++ ....
The chapter is interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
GTA San Andreas HUD in MHA . . .,...............................,............. ........... .. . . . . . ............ . . . . . . . . . . .
A fun story with an interesting combination of system and world. If your looking for a really serious novel this may not be for you. though it is a fun story which is very enjoyable ir you dont take it too seriously and just go along for the ride. All in all enjoyable and a good read
First of all I want to say Mc and CJ interactions are hella funny. Story is about MC getting iskeai to MHA with Gta system (with cheats) as you can think Mc is Op with cheats and Character interactions are Too good like Mc with Eri & Mc with his team especially knuckle Guy (forget his name) and Heroine also interesting (with hers quirks, you will know about when you read it😜) Mc interacts with All-might and Deku but not too much (just acceptable levels) and yeah Mc can go to Gta world which is Hella Funny, you guys will love it [To Author: Mc is too rich, so make him get the technology and stuff for surveillance and tracking etc, like Batman & Base for his operations and don't show too much of UA stuff because every Mha Ff has done it and now it's too boring. I hope you didn't drop this, Anyway Goodluck]
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