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This novel has very quickly grown to be one of my most anticipated each day. The MC has a different personality than the usual, and is fun to see how she handles things that occur around her. She has quite a rough background to her, and suffers a loss that I honestly didn't expect to see very early on. Even the likely love interest has things rough in her own way. Seeing low points like this feels good in a story from time to time, since life doesn't just magically work out from start to finish for folks most of the time without some amount of bumps or potholes in the road. First review I've posted so I'm sure it isn't great, but overall I enjoy the heck out of this story, and I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
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first off this series is highly anticipated by those in the know. invayne is a superb author, with both a good grasp of the language and an insane amount of creativity. soul fusion online or sfo has elements of many vrmmorpg stories. some elements of the story remind me of the best parts of stories like rssg, and martial gamer while avoiding most of thier pitfalls that make mmorpg stories disliked by some. the main character and other support characters are well thought out, relatable, and can be pictured as people instead of designed characters. they have their flaws and thier strengths instead of just being op or just cute they are much more. at the time of writing this review the story is still within the first ark but already it's addicting to read. I continue to look forward to this series as yuki/Ryu grow as both a person and gain status and power to seek the freedom they deserve. vote comment and like to promote this new gem of a novel.
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Author i really want this story picked back up. .. .I've been waiting for a while on this story that made me fall in love with these stories and I'm very sad that you haven't updated this one. Start a vol. 2 please I am begging you 😊
im very upset that you have not finished this book if you have a problem then just go with the flow but please finish this book. I was going through such depression then I found this book and a couple others that you wrote then stopped those as well please I'll give my left hand for you to finish this one plese
Coming from someone rational. Classic VR book. Too many cliche, too many coincidence, too many luck, too many illogical things. The mc's personality looked like a logical antihero. Which is a breath of fresh air in Female Lead books. But unfortunately she became dumb classic hero after tens of chapters. In short average book.
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I don’ know what I should write bury this novel just keeps me up and reading. It’ a shame it stop updating or is it just that it’s finish?
one of my favorite stories, I'm in the same contest but I love this story so much that I root for em to win. great story and can't wait for more gxgxgxg well hopefully but I'll put up with gxg as well. I can't wait for more.
one of my favorite authors and stories, I love the characters and the world was beautifully written. Definitely check out this story, I only read gxg stories and this one did not disappoint me. I can't wait for more gxg stories especially since that's all I'll read cant wait for more of this story and new ones you write.
one of the best stories you'll ever find it deserves recognition and the way th authorputs you in makes you visually be there in the story so please read author I hope this book has many more chapters
Let me start by saying that at first i loved this novel, the fight scenes were okay but the devolpment and romance combined with an interesting world left me very pleased... until it didnt. my main fault lies in the lack of morals and empathy in relation to some characters, im all fine with joke characters and understand the intended humour in poking fun at someone. (If its innocent) However there is litteraly a character (greenhat) who has a fight with his girlfriend and immediately she cheats on him with two of her friends only to just get back with him saying she always loved him but was mad he didnt run after her. The two friends then act smug about taking advantage of the depressed girl and sleeping with her.. the female lead then laughs with them and says “haha he deserves it” ... i lost all respect for the character and couldnt continue unfortunately. it sucks because it just felt so unnecessary and ruined an otherwise enjoyable read.
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I really enjoyed this book, really sad that it got left behind. Also makes me kind of reluctant to start reading other books by the author as i dont want to get hooked and have it dropped :3
I'm in love with the story its very well written and also entertaining I hope she is fine I did not expect that one thing but I'm really into this I'm broke so I have t wait for my free passes I wish I'd get something for this s I cld read everyday
I really enjoy this novel.....................................................................................................................................
I really like the story ,the development of the characters as well as their love for each other through the bad times and the good times.. Hope the story last longer atleast 1000 at most😅
Olá, meu inglês não é muito bom para me comunicar, mas estou amando ler a novel, e parece que ganhei uma nova autora com obras maravilhosas para ler
This is a rare example of a story with a female lead that doesn't feel contrived, and it has excellent writing quality as well. Enjoying it so far, I was a little annoyed by the assassination attempt, however. The specific scene didn't make a whole lot of sense and Yuki even took an incendiary bullet (from a sniper rifle?) to the head but still survived?? They have incredibly advanced tech, so why didn't the bullets advance too? Yeah, it's nitpicky but still. Everything else is great.
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I picked this book up sort of randomly, but just could not put it down. In less than a day I was caught up, and wanting for more. Its a great take a the genre, where most on this site are reincarnated guild leaders, the MC is just a normal person working hard and striking gold
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It is just a really goog novel and I can only advise everyone to look into it. The world is interesting as well as the characters etc. I'm looking forward to a bunch of new chapters
I've never been a fan of female leads but im pretty sure that this is gonna stay on my main novel list that I read daily the story so far is honestly really good.
This book is amazing. I don't know what else to say. It has everything you will ever need and ever want. It is the ultimate book and nothing can be better.
I don't write very many reviews, but this is one of the best books that I have read. A great plot and interesting characters and their history. I can't tear myself away from reading. I'm waiting for new chapters.
Although the novel starts out with a very good plot with very realistic characters, events and writing quality, it makes a turn for the worst after the 18+ comes into play.Im not talking about the book quickly going downhill , im talking about a ripe apple getting left in the open.The book starts with a very realistic-fantasy novel to a sort of xianxia type novel with the amount of arrogant young masters and face slapping later in the story.With all said, I do recommend you give this novel a try and see for yourself.
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I've been heavily into game based books the last few months, this one caught me from the start. It isn't every day you hear of a girl playing as a guy in game, it is usually the other way around. Not to mention Yuki/Ryu's Additude is perfect, I love her outlook on life!!!!! Thank you for the great read Invayne, I'll be sticking the novel until the end!!!
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The chapter that I look forward to the most during the day ! The story is interesting and we always want to know more at the end of each chapter. Keep up the good work.
This novel has very quickly grown to be one of my most anticipated each day. The MC has a different personality than the usual, and is fun to see how she handles things that occur around her. She has quite a rough background to her, and suffers a loss that I honestly didn't expect to see very early on. Even the likely love interest has things rough in her own way. Seeing low points like this feels good in a story from time to time, since life doesn't just magically work out from start to finish for folks most of the time without some amount of bumps or potholes in the road. First review I've posted so I'm sure it isn't great, but overall I enjoy the heck out of this story, and I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
Revelar Spoiler first off this series is highly anticipated by those in the know. invayne is a superb author, with both a good grasp of the language and an insane amount of creativity. soul fusion online or sfo has elements of many vrmmorpg stories. some elements of the story remind me of the best parts of stories like rssg, and martial gamer while avoiding most of thier pitfalls that make mmorpg stories disliked by some. the main character and other support characters are well thought out, relatable, and can be pictured as people instead of designed characters. they have their flaws and thier strengths instead of just being op or just cute they are much more. at the time of writing this review the story is still within the first ark but already it's addicting to read. I continue to look forward to this series as yuki/Ryu grow as both a person and gain status and power to seek the freedom they deserve. vote comment and like to promote this new gem of a novel.
Revelar Spoiler Author i really want this story picked back up. .. .I've been waiting for a while on this story that made me fall in love with these stories and I'm very sad that you haven't updated this one. Start a vol. 2 please I am begging you 😊
im very upset that you have not finished this book if you have a problem then just go with the flow but please finish this book. I was going through such depression then I found this book and a couple others that you wrote then stopped those as well please I'll give my left hand for you to finish this one plese
Coming from someone rational. Classic VR book. Too many cliche, too many coincidence, too many luck, too many illogical things. The mc's personality looked like a logical antihero. Which is a breath of fresh air in Female Lead books. But unfortunately she became dumb classic hero after tens of chapters. In short average book.
it will be OK for you if you update everymonth? just don't toss the novel and forgot it[img=Sigh]
I don’ know what I should write bury this novel just keeps me up and reading. It’ a shame it stop updating or is it just that it’s finish?
one of my favorite stories, I'm in the same contest but I love this story so much that I root for em to win. great story and can't wait for more gxgxgxg well hopefully but I'll put up with gxg as well. I can't wait for more.
one of my favorite authors and stories, I love the characters and the world was beautifully written. Definitely check out this story, I only read gxg stories and this one did not disappoint me. I can't wait for more gxg stories especially since that's all I'll read cant wait for more of this story and new ones you write.
one of the best stories you'll ever find it deserves recognition and the way th authorputs you in makes you visually be there in the story so please read author I hope this book has many more chapters
Let me start by saying that at first i loved this novel, the fight scenes were okay but the devolpment and romance combined with an interesting world left me very pleased... until it didnt. my main fault lies in the lack of morals and empathy in relation to some characters, im all fine with joke characters and understand the intended humour in poking fun at someone. (If its innocent) However there is litteraly a character (greenhat) who has a fight with his girlfriend and immediately she cheats on him with two of her friends only to just get back with him saying she always loved him but was mad he didnt run after her. The two friends then act smug about taking advantage of the depressed girl and sleeping with her.. the female lead then laughs with them and says “haha he deserves it” ... i lost all respect for the character and couldnt continue unfortunately. it sucks because it just felt so unnecessary and ruined an otherwise enjoyable read.
Revelar Spoiler I really enjoyed this book, really sad that it got left behind. Also makes me kind of reluctant to start reading other books by the author as i dont want to get hooked and have it dropped :3
I'm in love with the story its very well written and also entertaining I hope she is fine I did not expect that one thing but I'm really into this I'm broke so I have t wait for my free passes I wish I'd get something for this s I cld read everyday
I really enjoy this novel.....................................................................................................................................
I really like the story ,the development of the characters as well as their love for each other through the bad times and the good times.. Hope the story last longer atleast 1000 at most😅
Olá, meu inglês não é muito bom para me comunicar, mas estou amando ler a novel, e parece que ganhei uma nova autora com obras maravilhosas para ler
This is a rare example of a story with a female lead that doesn't feel contrived, and it has excellent writing quality as well. Enjoying it so far, I was a little annoyed by the assassination attempt, however. The specific scene didn't make a whole lot of sense and Yuki even took an incendiary bullet (from a sniper rifle?) to the head but still survived?? They have incredibly advanced tech, so why didn't the bullets advance too? Yeah, it's nitpicky but still. Everything else is great.
Revelar Spoiler I picked this book up sort of randomly, but just could not put it down. In less than a day I was caught up, and wanting for more. Its a great take a the genre, where most on this site are reincarnated guild leaders, the MC is just a normal person working hard and striking gold
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It is just a really goog novel and I can only advise everyone to look into it. The world is interesting as well as the characters etc. I'm looking forward to a bunch of new chapters
I've never been a fan of female leads but im pretty sure that this is gonna stay on my main novel list that I read daily the story so far is honestly really good.
This book is amazing. I don't know what else to say. It has everything you will ever need and ever want. It is the ultimate book and nothing can be better.
I don't write very many reviews, but this is one of the best books that I have read. A great plot and interesting characters and their history. I can't tear myself away from reading. I'm waiting for new chapters.
Although the novel starts out with a very good plot with very realistic characters, events and writing quality, it makes a turn for the worst after the 18+ comes into play.Im not talking about the book quickly going downhill , im talking about a ripe apple getting left in the open.The book starts with a very realistic-fantasy novel to a sort of xianxia type novel with the amount of arrogant young masters and face slapping later in the story.With all said, I do recommend you give this novel a try and see for yourself.
Revelar Spoiler I've been heavily into game based books the last few months, this one caught me from the start. It isn't every day you hear of a girl playing as a guy in game, it is usually the other way around. Not to mention Yuki/Ryu's Additude is perfect, I love her outlook on life!!!!! Thank you for the great read Invayne, I'll be sticking the novel until the end!!!
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Hehehehe The plot is good!!! ahhahahahhahah😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂👌👍😎🤣😂👌👍😎🍿👁️🍿👁️🍿😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😏
The chapter that I look forward to the most during the day ! The story is interesting and we always want to know more at the end of each chapter. Keep up the good work.