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It's a good book but It doesn't have many chapters yet so I cant really talk about update stability or world/character development but I will say its a good story that reminds me of The Snake Report and Tales of the World Devouring Serpent the only issue is the grammar which the author is getting better at after each chapter so overall its a read.
HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. [img=recommend] The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stones or send gifts. BIG THANKS FOR READING!!
Author, is this dropped?, i really like the book and hope u continiue . ........................................................................................................
Buenos dias, cuando tendremos mas capitulos de SNAKE EVOLUTION SYSTEM ya que es muy bueno pero ya no se a escrito mas capitulos, de antemano gracias
So are you gonna type out more chapters cause I really like this book? I cant be the only one wondering that.
how could there be an animal he feared in a self-created subspace is ridiculous. he's the ruler in the subspace of the souls created by idiots
Imprortant annoouncement for readers, i am going to continue this book,from now on i am going to update everyday and I am also editing this book from sccratch as well as writing, starting chapters are messy and will take some time to edit them.
It's a good novel but the MC is too much simp try to hold on but I can't anymore I'm sorry but it's a good novel, there's no denying that.....................
the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves
The writing quality is lacking, which is the grammar but in overall the story is great and its fun to read. Keep up the good work author.[img=update]
Gary sue mc, becomes tier 5 besst in 10 chapters and gets future harem member at the same time. Very lazy way to write a story and the characters are also one dimensional. Unless you have a power fantast and want to read something that seems like it was devised by a 10th grader dont read this. Writing quality is good tho, but thats about it
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really it's a good novel and more over I find it very interesting keep it bro I recommend all my friends to atleast give it a try you will definitely find it interesting and will not be disappointed Last lot of love from India😀😀🙏
Love how fast the mc mature and hope u good health so u can write more lets go 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
Not expert on giving reviews about novels but this story is good and the mc is not dumb, he knows how to use his brain and think before acting, he's strong too well not from the start. The problem is the release rate of the chapters, its too low.
it's not that bad (good potential) but it's hard to read. writing quality is bad especially tenses and personal pronouns. characters are bland and superficial and the plot could have potential but the way it happens isn't good. I tried until 150 ish chapters but it's a no for me.
dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . . I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . . aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us😅 I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.
A funny snek for the MC. I didn't read far yet, but for now it's pretty good. There is also a question of a future romance development. So I'll see if I change my opinion. Would recommend to read.
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I like the story but the grammar is holding it back. I'll update my review with a higher score if the author improves or invests in grammarly or an editor
this is awesome i like this novel most and i add this novel to my library and well i give three star rating so please see my review now im reading the 81 th chapter this novel , you reached 180 chapters please slow down your writing this is only for two week so that i can read it faster and even more .
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Everything is going too fast, maybe it's going to be better in the following chapters but I can't immerse myself in the story due to many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. English isn't my first language either so I can understand that is not easy but still, it's too much mistakes for me... As i was saying, everuthing is going too fast, many things happen without any explication... but well i'm only at chapter 27 so who knows. The story is interesting and I hope the author continue with his good ideas. If you don't mind the numerous mistakes and fast pace novel then i suggest you give this novel a try.
this is only to balance out the authors shameless 2 5 star reviews :D honest author reviews are the best reviews
Es un buen libro, pero aún no tiene muchos capítulos, así que no puedo hablar sobre la estabilidad de la actualización o el desarrollo del mundo / personaje, pero diré que es una buena historia que me recuerda a The Snake Report y Tales of the World Devouring Serpent, los únicos El problema es la gramática en la que el autor está mejorando después de cada capítulo, por lo que, en general, es una lectura.
The story is great but the grammar and spelling has need to be work on specially the spellings ......................................................
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
i like this book because it's hilarious to read, i mean... imagine you wanted to do something to your girlfriend but suddenly you died in accident and become a snake. it's good book, but the problem is in grammar. using grammarly for the help. i'm using mine too.
Has some grammatical errors but doesn't feel like it's been put through Google translate 20 times so a lot better then some books on here. The only other criticism I really have is that it feels like it rushes to its plot points too fast early on but if that changes I will change the review, If you put those two things aside tho the author does feel like they know where they want to go with the stories and it seems like it will be good just needs to rush the plot less.
This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.
We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation! I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests. I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.
this here is a self serving novel, the character is just out right over powered, any and all setbacks are laughed off, and everything is plot armoired away. but the goal of our snake is too get human form, and the path to it goes from chapter 5 to 35, of more or less building every character but the MC, people who we will never see again get more story and character design then the MC.
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Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.
It's a good book but It doesn't have many chapters yet so I cant really talk about update stability or world/character development but I will say its a good story that reminds me of The Snake Report and Tales of the World Devouring Serpent the only issue is the grammar which the author is getting better at after each chapter so overall its a read.
HI, Author here! Shamelessly reviewing his work the second time after completing one month. Of course, I rated it for 5. But if you have free time and nothing to do, try to peek and read in this novel. Maybe what you’re looking for is here. [img=recommend] The greatness of this novel cannot be found in the early chapter. Every character in this novel is 4d😉. So try and see. Then don’t forget to leave a review. And if you are more than generous, I will be happy and be more motivated if you can drop some power stones or send gifts. BIG THANKS FOR READING!!
Author, is this dropped?, i really like the book and hope u continiue . ........................................................................................................
Buenos dias, cuando tendremos mas capitulos de SNAKE EVOLUTION SYSTEM ya que es muy bueno pero ya no se a escrito mas capitulos, de antemano gracias
So are you gonna type out more chapters cause I really like this book? I cant be the only one wondering that.
how could there be an animal he feared in a self-created subspace is ridiculous. he's the ruler in the subspace of the souls created by idiots
Imprortant annoouncement for readers, i am going to continue this book,from now on i am going to update everyday and I am also editing this book from sccratch as well as writing, starting chapters are messy and will take some time to edit them.
It's a good novel but the MC is too much simp try to hold on but I can't anymore I'm sorry but it's a good novel, there's no denying that.....................
the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves
The writing quality is lacking, which is the grammar but in overall the story is great and its fun to read. Keep up the good work author.[img=update]
Gary sue mc, becomes tier 5 besst in 10 chapters and gets future harem member at the same time. Very lazy way to write a story and the characters are also one dimensional. Unless you have a power fantast and want to read something that seems like it was devised by a 10th grader dont read this. Writing quality is good tho, but thats about it
Revelar Spoiler really it's a good novel and more over I find it very interesting keep it bro I recommend all my friends to atleast give it a try you will definitely find it interesting and will not be disappointed Last lot of love from India😀😀🙏
Love how fast the mc mature and hope u good health so u can write more lets go 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
Not expert on giving reviews about novels but this story is good and the mc is not dumb, he knows how to use his brain and think before acting, he's strong too well not from the start. The problem is the release rate of the chapters, its too low.
it's not that bad (good potential) but it's hard to read. writing quality is bad especially tenses and personal pronouns. characters are bland and superficial and the plot could have potential but the way it happens isn't good. I tried until 150 ish chapters but it's a no for me.
dear author I'm going to be honest with you I really like the story development and even the fact that you let your readers create the image of your main character can be overlooked but. . . you should seriously think about stopping the releases for a while and fix the already posted chapters because at the start your grammar mistakes were bearable but instead of improving you worsened the quality of your writing. . . I have to literally guess what you were trying to say in certain lines and you often use wrong words if you use autocorrect turn it off and if you're not using it then turn it on I don't know what to say. . . aside from that you have poor description of the world background like you only say that the place is really beautiful, there are some ruins, a forest and that's it dude turn on your imagination if not just the readers for some pointers this app is not just for posting chapters also the character development is too fast like in just 10 short chapters the main character is akin to a boss also you haven't described the characters at all aside from the small details like their hair length, hair color, eye color and their gender and instead of describing their cloths you always use robes. . . you can't fool us😅 I honestly don't want to drop this book because it has potential just work on it and your writing.
A funny snek for the MC. I didn't read far yet, but for now it's pretty good. There is also a question of a future romance development. So I'll see if I change my opinion. Would recommend to read.
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I like the story but the grammar is holding it back. I'll update my review with a higher score if the author improves or invests in grammarly or an editor
this is awesome i like this novel most and i add this novel to my library and well i give three star rating so please see my review now im reading the 81 th chapter this novel , you reached 180 chapters please slow down your writing this is only for two week so that i can read it faster and even more .
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Everything is going too fast, maybe it's going to be better in the following chapters but I can't immerse myself in the story due to many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. English isn't my first language either so I can understand that is not easy but still, it's too much mistakes for me... As i was saying, everuthing is going too fast, many things happen without any explication... but well i'm only at chapter 27 so who knows. The story is interesting and I hope the author continue with his good ideas. If you don't mind the numerous mistakes and fast pace novel then i suggest you give this novel a try.
this is only to balance out the authors shameless 2 5 star reviews :D honest author reviews are the best reviews
Es un buen libro, pero aún no tiene muchos capítulos, así que no puedo hablar sobre la estabilidad de la actualización o el desarrollo del mundo / personaje, pero diré que es una buena historia que me recuerda a The Snake Report y Tales of the World Devouring Serpent, los únicos El problema es la gramática en la que el autor está mejorando después de cada capítulo, por lo que, en general, es una lectura.
The story is great but the grammar and spelling has need to be work on specially the spellings ......................................................
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
i like this book because it's hilarious to read, i mean... imagine you wanted to do something to your girlfriend but suddenly you died in accident and become a snake. it's good book, but the problem is in grammar. using grammarly for the help. i'm using mine too.
Has some grammatical errors but doesn't feel like it's been put through Google translate 20 times so a lot better then some books on here. The only other criticism I really have is that it feels like it rushes to its plot points too fast early on but if that changes I will change the review, If you put those two things aside tho the author does feel like they know where they want to go with the stories and it seems like it will be good just needs to rush the plot less.
This is going to be the most honest review you will find. This book is a fun read and thats what it is. There are many grmmar mistakes but you can deal with them and the author is indian so understandable. Also the charecters are really stale and corny. Overall iff you want a really solid book with an in depth story this is not the one but if you just want a fun read to relax to this is it.
We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation! I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests. I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.
this here is a self serving novel, the character is just out right over powered, any and all setbacks are laughed off, and everything is plot armoired away. but the goal of our snake is too get human form, and the path to it goes from chapter 5 to 35, of more or less building every character but the MC, people who we will never see again get more story and character design then the MC.
discord link is not working ....it show invite link invalid .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................................
Hello, guys, your dear author is here, I just wanted to say that my English is not good because English is not my first language, but I am trying very hard to improve myself, please keep loving and keep supporting my work.