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Love the story most likely my favorite I also like the change between volume 1 and 2 :)
as much as like to give 5★ this one seems to don't that Rights as her new version is really horrible even makes me think is she really a girl? and she is so freaking Merciful like they kill her yet she almost like forgive them and even fell sorry how what? and the most important is that the new version is seem st"pid I really miss the past one after she died the story become less enjoyable it become bland and boring though 3★ for the past her ,writing quality and world background
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Author but ... why loli? Don't get me wrong, I love this novel. However ... loli 🤨🧐 .......................................................
I really liked the first volume. I like the settings, and the plot. However, after that, everything suddenly changes. I got so confused. It was as if this book was given to an entirely different author. The style of the book, the dynamics, and the pace of the story all changed drastically. I feel like the people who like this book would need to be as flexible as the author in their taste in books. This seriously feels like 2 books that has been meshed together, and I'm not sure I like this very much. I'll try to get through it, but I'm not loving this so far. (I'm on chapter 70-ish)
Basically just a little girl who sealed her emotions for god knows for whatever reason. Then when somebody basically exposed her she shoots em. Like is she wrong? NO Confused on why she sealed her emotions tho. When she did all of a sudden started crying and wanted to go back home and all that nonsense? So indeed in the end just a emotional little girl. So I actually prefer her sealing her emotions so I don’t gotta read a girl crying every chapter
The book has amazing world development and character design in my humble opinion. The story development and just the plot as a whole is super good and things from chapters back connect together creating a super well done story! If you can read a book that doesn’t rush things but isn’t to slow so that everything can come together this is a book for you. Just a minor disclaimer once you reach the second volume of the book it will be kind of confusing and slow paced a little at first but then I becomes even better than the first volume I’m telling you this so you don’t give up on the book halfway!! P.S I wrote this on my phone so forgive me for any mistakes I made while writing this.
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Okay so if I had to say what are the two emotions you feel when you read this novel? I would say I love and I hate it at the same time...This review might be a bit long but I hope to explain why I love and hate it. Writing quality is by no means perfect, I have seen several mistakes here and there but more or less the number of mistakes isn't too much disturbing for me. Now I hate the update schedule right now tbh I mean leaving a story at a cliffhanger and the last update is 8 days before?? (this novel seems to have released at least 1 chapter within 2 days till now). Author-san, if you were in the same room as me, I would have stabbed you with a knife due to anxiousness. Welp about the story development, I'm the kind of person who believes that an Author should write a story from his own standpoint. Other than grammatical errors or update schedules there shouldn't be a change in plot or ideas due to public sentiment and I respect your author for sticking with your plot. But I will state that I don't find myself happy with the story. It's not exactly a fluffy fluffy story(i didn't want a fluffy fluffy but not as dark as this one) and everything happened too sudden and terrifyingly...There comes a moment of cool breeze and then it suddenly turns into a hurricane. I can't even count how many times my heart broke from the sudden shift from fluffy to dark as obsidian. But I do find this novel to be addictive although I pray to myself that the future won't be as bleak as it till now. So my four stars for story development is kind of like my own personal gripe, nothing wrong with the author... Alright, character design is good but I will definitely say that the MC personality changes were indeed extremely sharp and confusing. Welp some of the well-developed characters leaving the "stage" has left me quite heartbroken. I guess that is a reminder of how good characters are developed? (welp I want the P and D back....) now the world design of this novel is still extremely confusing and I guess it's meant to stay that way? I guess the world information would get clarified later in the novel since I believe this novel will easily go beyond 200 chapters. Now Overall I would say this is a good novel... Don't expect fluffy or easy-going story cause you will die of a heart attack and author-san please never drop this novel and welp I hope you release more chapters frequently(i-if it isn't much a m-mass release wouldn't be too b-bad) GOOD DAY!
Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! (Really hope she recovers her memories sooner rather then later but I’ll trust what the authors does)
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Shame😔, that's all I can say, the beginning was promising, the mc was interesting and the story was pretty fun. But the story undergoes a big change in chapter 25 the mc seals his emotions for some ridiculous reason instead of facing them and becomes hyper arrogant overnight. I think the author changed his plan at the last minute and just wanted to write a story about a bland character in ch25, so if he wanted to write a story about a sociopath he should have done it straight away but no he preferred to seal his emotions for some ridiculous reason. I tried to continue after chapter 25 but it was getting so boring that I ended up skipping some chapters to see if there was anything to hold me over but in the end I came to the conclusion that no there was nothing left that made me enjoy the story. To think that I loved this story at the beginning, I left a few stars for the beginning of the story. Otherwise really disappointed 😞 with the way this story turned out.
this is the second best book I have ever read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I loved the story had some trouble In some chapters but overall good Goodluck author also, I like her psychopath character just want her to have more sadness about her life like give us some trauma or something, and maybe that will help in her story to become a calamity
this is my first review on the site, so check out the errors. at first i even liked her personality, but seriously, after a certain point you realize she's just a selfish sociopath who doesn't care about anyone, it's also confusing because she never explains her goals and just does things for nothing.
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trash this is pretty much just a stupid mc with a "computer like mind" but go's after people stronger than her and add a evil mc tag
very good start but the cenge of the race in sheepkin i didn't like to much sorry i m Italian [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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fantastic novel so far hope to see more chapters in the future! hope to also read them in the future to hehehe~ can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Love this type of main charictor hopes this gets posted more OfteN cause I find books like this that don’t ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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the only bad thing I have to say is that you shouldn't expect any kind of update stability. other than that, the story is great, character design also great, and everything else too.
Love the story most likely my favorite I also like the change between volume 1 and 2 :)
as much as like to give 5★ this one seems to don't that Rights as her new version is really horrible even makes me think is she really a girl? and she is so freaking Merciful like they kill her yet she almost like forgive them and even fell sorry how what? and the most important is that the new version is seem st"pid I really miss the past one after she died the story become less enjoyable it become bland and boring though 3★ for the past her ,writing quality and world background
Revelar Spoiler Author but ... why loli? Don't get me wrong, I love this novel. However ... loli 🤨🧐 .......................................................
I really liked the first volume. I like the settings, and the plot. However, after that, everything suddenly changes. I got so confused. It was as if this book was given to an entirely different author. The style of the book, the dynamics, and the pace of the story all changed drastically. I feel like the people who like this book would need to be as flexible as the author in their taste in books. This seriously feels like 2 books that has been meshed together, and I'm not sure I like this very much. I'll try to get through it, but I'm not loving this so far. (I'm on chapter 70-ish)
Basically just a little girl who sealed her emotions for god knows for whatever reason. Then when somebody basically exposed her she shoots em. Like is she wrong? NO Confused on why she sealed her emotions tho. When she did all of a sudden started crying and wanted to go back home and all that nonsense? So indeed in the end just a emotional little girl. So I actually prefer her sealing her emotions so I don’t gotta read a girl crying every chapter
The book has amazing world development and character design in my humble opinion. The story development and just the plot as a whole is super good and things from chapters back connect together creating a super well done story! If you can read a book that doesn’t rush things but isn’t to slow so that everything can come together this is a book for you. Just a minor disclaimer once you reach the second volume of the book it will be kind of confusing and slow paced a little at first but then I becomes even better than the first volume I’m telling you this so you don’t give up on the book halfway!! P.S I wrote this on my phone so forgive me for any mistakes I made while writing this.
Revelar Spoiler Okay so if I had to say what are the two emotions you feel when you read this novel? I would say I love and I hate it at the same time...This review might be a bit long but I hope to explain why I love and hate it. Writing quality is by no means perfect, I have seen several mistakes here and there but more or less the number of mistakes isn't too much disturbing for me. Now I hate the update schedule right now tbh I mean leaving a story at a cliffhanger and the last update is 8 days before?? (this novel seems to have released at least 1 chapter within 2 days till now). Author-san, if you were in the same room as me, I would have stabbed you with a knife due to anxiousness. Welp about the story development, I'm the kind of person who believes that an Author should write a story from his own standpoint. Other than grammatical errors or update schedules there shouldn't be a change in plot or ideas due to public sentiment and I respect your author for sticking with your plot. But I will state that I don't find myself happy with the story. It's not exactly a fluffy fluffy story(i didn't want a fluffy fluffy but not as dark as this one) and everything happened too sudden and terrifyingly...There comes a moment of cool breeze and then it suddenly turns into a hurricane. I can't even count how many times my heart broke from the sudden shift from fluffy to dark as obsidian. But I do find this novel to be addictive although I pray to myself that the future won't be as bleak as it till now. So my four stars for story development is kind of like my own personal gripe, nothing wrong with the author... Alright, character design is good but I will definitely say that the MC personality changes were indeed extremely sharp and confusing. Welp some of the well-developed characters leaving the "stage" has left me quite heartbroken. I guess that is a reminder of how good characters are developed? (welp I want the P and D back....) now the world design of this novel is still extremely confusing and I guess it's meant to stay that way? I guess the world information would get clarified later in the novel since I believe this novel will easily go beyond 200 chapters. Now Overall I would say this is a good novel... Don't expect fluffy or easy-going story cause you will die of a heart attack and author-san please never drop this novel and welp I hope you release more chapters frequently(i-if it isn't much a m-mass release wouldn't be too b-bad) GOOD DAY!
Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! Really enjoy this story! Keep it up! (Really hope she recovers her memories sooner rather then later but I’ll trust what the authors does)
Revelar Spoiler Shame😔, that's all I can say, the beginning was promising, the mc was interesting and the story was pretty fun. But the story undergoes a big change in chapter 25 the mc seals his emotions for some ridiculous reason instead of facing them and becomes hyper arrogant overnight. I think the author changed his plan at the last minute and just wanted to write a story about a bland character in ch25, so if he wanted to write a story about a sociopath he should have done it straight away but no he preferred to seal his emotions for some ridiculous reason. I tried to continue after chapter 25 but it was getting so boring that I ended up skipping some chapters to see if there was anything to hold me over but in the end I came to the conclusion that no there was nothing left that made me enjoy the story. To think that I loved this story at the beginning, I left a few stars for the beginning of the story. Otherwise really disappointed 😞 with the way this story turned out.
this is the second best book I have ever read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I loved the story had some trouble In some chapters but overall good Goodluck author also, I like her psychopath character just want her to have more sadness about her life like give us some trauma or something, and maybe that will help in her story to become a calamity
this is my first review on the site, so check out the errors. at first i even liked her personality, but seriously, after a certain point you realize she's just a selfish sociopath who doesn't care about anyone, it's also confusing because she never explains her goals and just does things for nothing.
a very nice and op FL novel fhhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhhfhffhhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhfhhfhfhfhf HD fhfhfhfhhfhfhfhfhfhfhhhfhfhfhfhhfhfhfhfhfhfhhfhhfchhc
trash this is pretty much just a stupid mc with a "computer like mind" but go's after people stronger than her and add a evil mc tag
very good start but the cenge of the race in sheepkin i didn't like to much sorry i m Italian [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
lo Consiglio spero che l'autore non lo abbandoni[img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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fantastic novel so far hope to see more chapters in the future! hope to also read them in the future to hehehe~ can't wait to find out what happens next!
Amo esse de história e personagen, continue assim que você vai longe. ......................................................................................................................................
Love this type of main charictor hopes this gets posted more OfteN cause I find books like this that don’t ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
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the only bad thing I have to say is that you shouldn't expect any kind of update stability. other than that, the story is great, character design also great, and everything else too.