Despicable Mate

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BFD_80

Good book. Easy read, though there was a lot of translation error (you could still get the gist of things) along with names being mixed up. I feel like there could’ve been more details. Much more. No backstory on how they ended up in their predicament and so much more could’ve been told. But, it’s a good read if you are looking for a short story.

LV 15

Lisa_McNew

while this story has a few errors in the that there are times when names are mixed up, otherwise the grammar is perfect. the story itself had a bittersweet ending. maybe a sequel could make things better... I cried my eyes out.