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I'm not an expert, but if we look for the deeper meaning of this fanfic, we could see that i don't really know what it means because in the first place I already said that I'm not an expert.
nìiiiiiiiice first of its kind people should really start writing fma si's there are few of them................................................................
As of chapter 19, so far so good. Everything is worth the five Stars and out of all fma fics ive seen this one took my interest and it hasn't disappointed yet. Hope to see this finished!
FMAB fanfictions are rare as it is. Good ones? An endangered species. Finding yours was a very pleasant surprise. Keep it up mate, it's great!
Bruh it's FMAB. Do you expect me to give it anything less than a perfect score? Good job with the creativity and idea author-san. Hope you make it an amazing piece of work.
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Now, I really like this because both the plot and grammar are superb. Hopefully this won't get dropped or put on hiatus. but it's really great I recommend.
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No harem and well written, you don't need anything else!! =)))) <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
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Author-San, I'm Brazilian and I say with all my strength that this is one of the best Fanfic I've read ...😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👍👍👍👍👍
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So far the development of the story is great. I have only one question author have you already decided who is the love interest? .................................................................
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First FMAB fanfic so please don't drop. 💦 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Do not drop tho, for real. and this 140 characters rule suck.
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please continue there's not many full metal alchemists fanfics out there that are decent. please continue your hard work... ..................
I have been looking for a fmab fan-fiction, for the longest time. Keep up the good work. .
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Revelar Spoiler I'm not an expert, but if we look for the deeper meaning of this fanfic, we could see that i don't really know what it means because in the first place I already said that I'm not an expert.
nìiiiiiiiice first of its kind people should really start writing fma si's there are few of them................................................................
As of chapter 19, so far so good. Everything is worth the five Stars and out of all fma fics ive seen this one took my interest and it hasn't disappointed yet. Hope to see this finished!
FMAB fanfictions are rare as it is. Good ones? An endangered species. Finding yours was a very pleasant surprise. Keep it up mate, it's great!
Bruh it's FMAB. Do you expect me to give it anything less than a perfect score? Good job with the creativity and idea author-san. Hope you make it an amazing piece of work.
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Now, I really like this because both the plot and grammar are superb. Hopefully this won't get dropped or put on hiatus. but it's really great I recommend.
just read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read .only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.just read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read .only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.only read.
Revelar Spoiler No harem and well written, you don't need anything else!! =)))) <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Revelar Spoiler Author-San, I'm Brazilian and I say with all my strength that this is one of the best Fanfic I've read ...😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👍👍👍👍👍
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So far the development of the story is great. I have only one question author have you already decided who is the love interest? .................................................................
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FMAB FMAB FMAB FMAB FMAB FMAB !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic Good Fic
Revelar Spoiler First FMAB fanfic so please don't drop. 💦 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Do not drop tho, for real. and this 140 characters rule suck.
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Revelar Spoiler please continue there's not many full metal alchemists fanfics out there that are decent. please continue your hard work... ..................
I have been looking for a fmab fan-fiction, for the longest time. Keep up the good work. .
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