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This should be read by everyone. As I read the first chapter, there is already a horror and thriller vibe. I went back and read the tags and it has the thriller tag. And the synopsis...it's hot! Sooo hoooot that I'm even blushinggggg?! Because the kiss and the omggg
Really intense start, keeps your attention with ease. Descriptions are wonderful and a joy to read, with good writing quality. The author wastes no time putting in some romance right at the beginning and keeps up the integrity of the writing throughout. The plot itself is also intriguing, loving the fact that some details are being held off of to really create a nice sense of wanting to read on. If you're looking for good easy to read romance and magic, then this is the novel to pick up!
I love how this story has so many different interesting sub plots that come together so nicely to make for a very captivating story. The backstories got me clutching my pillow like😲. Btw I also think Gorak is hot🥵♥️
Grammar and story both on point. Although the point may not be very new it's certainly an interesting take on it. One of the better novels of the genre. Cheers
This is Brandon Gould i am responding to a Review Swap here is my review The story is very interesting and has a lot of uniqe chartors. the diolage is very descpitve and the story starts out strongly and progress at a very good pace. I will be sure to contue to read this book to see where the story leads
Great Author, Great Novel, Great Potential. I hope it continues and the writer becomes successful. There are many chapters, and it is a great concept
This book is amazing! A well-crafted novel about gods and their characters! The author placed a lot of effort describing the scenes! I really love the fact that the world-building in this novel is really amazing! The only points I'd like to point out are the tenses and passive voice misused. Although there are mixed and matched of tenses, it did not hindered me from reading! However, it would be nice if those words would be fixed soon to ensure and improve the quality of the work~ (the passive voice misuse are verbs that are not in their active forms. Some lines that I found in the novel are ""was being dented" and "a lightning storm was gathering". Fixing these would enhance readability for us readers. Kudos for the author!
Wow I like this! Such vivid imageries, deliciously steamy scenes, suspense, and mysteries. A page-turner starting at the first chapter! Highly recommend [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I should have written a review of for this a long time ago, but I really like this book. It is so well described and the story is just so fun. Since it was almost 60 chapters I can read this almost everyday without worrying about finishing it too fast. Hopefully the author can upload more son as I really like everything about this book. Keep up the amazing work!
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! I gave you five stars hehehe If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I really liked this novel! Mysterious force interested me so much that I couldn't help but read till the very end. Waiting for the new chappy ❤️
After reading this so far, you should read it too. This is what you call 'Show, not tell'. The author really detailed those are in need of details. It's quite rare to see other authors do 'Show, not tell.' When I started reading this, I stood to the point where I imagined everything single detail in my mind — It was as if I was in the story itself. You know the feeling of just sitting and listening in the sidelines? It's like I'm just the side character of the story. Sitting to where the MC doesn't notice you, that's what I imagine. Let's say, "Shivering feverishly, the young woman crept up the stairs of the old abandoned warehouse. A slight and startling tingle tiptoed down her spine, and she turned abruptly halfway up the flight of steps to see if someone had entered the decrepit building. Gazing intently around the lobby, the woman concluded that it must have been a breeze from the unlocked window. Cautiously this time, she continued up the rotting stairs. Upon reaching the second to last step, the young woman felt a rush of fear wash over her, and her head began to spin and the walls whipped around her – while her feet remained rooted to the steps. Desperately, she tried to scream, yet no sound escaped her mouth." In the passage given, you can already imagine everything, right? I'm the side character. She can't see me, but I can see her. That's what I think about this story. Overall, everything's great. I enjoy the narration of the story, a lot. If you read this, it isn't a waste of time. You'll be in Luck to read the story the author made.
Wow! It's rare to find a story quite like this. I love everything about this novel! The detailed descriptions, the captivating plot, the incredible characters with interesting personalities the expert world building, the creative writing style, Everything! I am hooked!! Beautiful. Just beautiful. I recommend to everyone! Great job author[img=recommend]
A really interesting world which is vividly described with very interesting characters. Love the part about torturing a demon with videos of kindness and charity in the ‘supermax’ type of prison for demons. Keep up the good work!
this one is beautiful as its English easy for everyone and it's balanced ...i downloaded the app for this book as it's the first book I read I downloaded as soon as I registered in this app everyone should read it
WQ: (4/5). US: (5/5). SD: (4/5). CD: (3/5). WB: (4/5). Surprisingly good. Intro was great and somehow hooked me on right from the start. its not just a solely on fantasy or romance like the main genre would lead you to believe. Slight disclaimer tho its pretty intense but thats why i love the various aspects of it.
I am going to be totally honest with you. What attracted me the most was the female on your book cover. Great book tho, keep up the work. Would you mind checking my book out as well?
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The story is extremely good... I am super excited to continue reading. The world background is expertly done and the characters are designed well. There is this flowery prose that lets you sink into the novel. Kudos to the author.
Interesting and great novel, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The novel have a strong start through the synopsis, and it's really well written grabbing readers' attention. Your writing style really shows what's happening in the novel, you're awesome! [img=recommend][img=recommend] You have great characters too, by the way. 😊 I will definitely keep this in my collection and read more of your upcoming chapters. 😊💕 😅😂 Oh, and... the, "He wanted to lick her dry." is a good one by the way! I was surprised and amazed how you thought about that. 😂👍🏻
After reading a few chapters I have absolutely no doubts that you know how to write! I am not really in fantasy, but that was a real pleasure to read. I will follow... and I wish I could have more power stones!
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When people usually gives a perfect five you kind of become skeptical, but I am telling you that it is worth it. From the first chapter it's title is already justified. The characterization of the details just gives you this clear picture in your head and the visualization is amazing! Keep it up author!
Love it, my only complaint is having to wait for more chapters. The story and setting are very intriguing, I love the MC's actions and how it is developing. Eager to read more.
Extremely vivid descriptions, almost makes me feel like I am there, in the novel itself. It's incredible. Stories like these are hard to get right and yet the author did an incredible job with the world and the characters themselves as well as ... the ... interactions (Wink wink nudge nudge).
How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww! I think I'm in love with the way you write. It's amazing. The way you described the background is really great! Keep up the good work, author!
Okay... I'll say this story is off to a great start. It starts off horror-thriller "ish". If you love superpower, adventure, mystery novels with some sweet romance, you'll love it. It has a little bit of everything, so it's perfect for all genders. I'll most definitely keep reading!💕
I love this book! If you like God-class superpowers, thrilling romance and mystery, it's all here. And the English is good! Everything is just so well described. Thank you author. It's also got many exciting characters.
This should be read by everyone. As I read the first chapter, there is already a horror and thriller vibe. I went back and read the tags and it has the thriller tag. And the synopsis...it's hot! Sooo hoooot that I'm even blushinggggg?! Because the kiss and the omggg
Really intense start, keeps your attention with ease. Descriptions are wonderful and a joy to read, with good writing quality. The author wastes no time putting in some romance right at the beginning and keeps up the integrity of the writing throughout. The plot itself is also intriguing, loving the fact that some details are being held off of to really create a nice sense of wanting to read on. If you're looking for good easy to read romance and magic, then this is the novel to pick up!
I love how this story has so many different interesting sub plots that come together so nicely to make for a very captivating story. The backstories got me clutching my pillow like😲. Btw I also think Gorak is hot🥵♥️
Grammar and story both on point. Although the point may not be very new it's certainly an interesting take on it. One of the better novels of the genre. Cheers
This is Brandon Gould i am responding to a Review Swap here is my review The story is very interesting and has a lot of uniqe chartors. the diolage is very descpitve and the story starts out strongly and progress at a very good pace. I will be sure to contue to read this book to see where the story leads
Great Author, Great Novel, Great Potential. I hope it continues and the writer becomes successful. There are many chapters, and it is a great concept
This book is amazing! A well-crafted novel about gods and their characters! The author placed a lot of effort describing the scenes! I really love the fact that the world-building in this novel is really amazing! The only points I'd like to point out are the tenses and passive voice misused. Although there are mixed and matched of tenses, it did not hindered me from reading! However, it would be nice if those words would be fixed soon to ensure and improve the quality of the work~ (the passive voice misuse are verbs that are not in their active forms. Some lines that I found in the novel are ""was being dented" and "a lightning storm was gathering". Fixing these would enhance readability for us readers. Kudos for the author!
Wow I like this! Such vivid imageries, deliciously steamy scenes, suspense, and mysteries. A page-turner starting at the first chapter! Highly recommend [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I should have written a review of for this a long time ago, but I really like this book. It is so well described and the story is just so fun. Since it was almost 60 chapters I can read this almost everyday without worrying about finishing it too fast. Hopefully the author can upload more son as I really like everything about this book. Keep up the amazing work!
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! I gave you five stars hehehe If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
I really liked this novel! Mysterious force interested me so much that I couldn't help but read till the very end. Waiting for the new chappy ❤️
After reading this so far, you should read it too. This is what you call 'Show, not tell'. The author really detailed those are in need of details. It's quite rare to see other authors do 'Show, not tell.' When I started reading this, I stood to the point where I imagined everything single detail in my mind — It was as if I was in the story itself. You know the feeling of just sitting and listening in the sidelines? It's like I'm just the side character of the story. Sitting to where the MC doesn't notice you, that's what I imagine. Let's say, "Shivering feverishly, the young woman crept up the stairs of the old abandoned warehouse. A slight and startling tingle tiptoed down her spine, and she turned abruptly halfway up the flight of steps to see if someone had entered the decrepit building. Gazing intently around the lobby, the woman concluded that it must have been a breeze from the unlocked window. Cautiously this time, she continued up the rotting stairs. Upon reaching the second to last step, the young woman felt a rush of fear wash over her, and her head began to spin and the walls whipped around her – while her feet remained rooted to the steps. Desperately, she tried to scream, yet no sound escaped her mouth." In the passage given, you can already imagine everything, right? I'm the side character. She can't see me, but I can see her. That's what I think about this story. Overall, everything's great. I enjoy the narration of the story, a lot. If you read this, it isn't a waste of time. You'll be in Luck to read the story the author made.
Wow! It's rare to find a story quite like this. I love everything about this novel! The detailed descriptions, the captivating plot, the incredible characters with interesting personalities the expert world building, the creative writing style, Everything! I am hooked!! Beautiful. Just beautiful. I recommend to everyone! Great job author[img=recommend]
A really interesting world which is vividly described with very interesting characters. Love the part about torturing a demon with videos of kindness and charity in the ‘supermax’ type of prison for demons. Keep up the good work!
this one is beautiful as its English easy for everyone and it's balanced ...i downloaded the app for this book as it's the first book I read I downloaded as soon as I registered in this app everyone should read it
WQ: (4/5). US: (5/5). SD: (4/5). CD: (3/5). WB: (4/5). Surprisingly good. Intro was great and somehow hooked me on right from the start. its not just a solely on fantasy or romance like the main genre would lead you to believe. Slight disclaimer tho its pretty intense but thats why i love the various aspects of it.
I am going to be totally honest with you. What attracted me the most was the female on your book cover. Great book tho, keep up the work. Would you mind checking my book out as well?
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The story is extremely good... I am super excited to continue reading. The world background is expertly done and the characters are designed well. There is this flowery prose that lets you sink into the novel. Kudos to the author.
Interesting and great novel, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The novel have a strong start through the synopsis, and it's really well written grabbing readers' attention. Your writing style really shows what's happening in the novel, you're awesome! [img=recommend][img=recommend] You have great characters too, by the way. 😊 I will definitely keep this in my collection and read more of your upcoming chapters. 😊💕 😅😂 Oh, and... the, "He wanted to lick her dry." is a good one by the way! I was surprised and amazed how you thought about that. 😂👍🏻
After reading a few chapters I have absolutely no doubts that you know how to write! I am not really in fantasy, but that was a real pleasure to read. I will follow... and I wish I could have more power stones!
Revelar Spoiler When people usually gives a perfect five you kind of become skeptical, but I am telling you that it is worth it. From the first chapter it's title is already justified. The characterization of the details just gives you this clear picture in your head and the visualization is amazing! Keep it up author!
Love it, my only complaint is having to wait for more chapters. The story and setting are very intriguing, I love the MC's actions and how it is developing. Eager to read more.
Extremely vivid descriptions, almost makes me feel like I am there, in the novel itself. It's incredible. Stories like these are hard to get right and yet the author did an incredible job with the world and the characters themselves as well as ... the ... interactions (Wink wink nudge nudge).
How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww! I think I'm in love with the way you write. It's amazing. The way you described the background is really great! Keep up the good work, author!
Okay... I'll say this story is off to a great start. It starts off horror-thriller "ish". If you love superpower, adventure, mystery novels with some sweet romance, you'll love it. It has a little bit of everything, so it's perfect for all genders. I'll most definitely keep reading!💕
I love this book! If you like God-class superpowers, thrilling romance and mystery, it's all here. And the English is good! Everything is just so well described. Thank you author. It's also got many exciting characters.