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This is a stolen work. This "author" didn't request permission to write this, nor was the real author informed. The real author also does not want this up. Delete it.
I'm not going to lie, stayed up until 3 in the morning last night (I had to get up for work around 5:30) binge reading to catch up and I got to say I truly love what you have done here with this fanfic. the fight scenes are detailed and enjoyable and had me on my toes. the fact that his dragonsoul counters genjutsu was a nice power up I wasnt expecting. conrads stowaways/apprentices interaction with modern technology was enjoyable to read as well as his interactions with Naruto. I'm curious see how Conrad reacts to Itachi when he finds out that he's a kin-killer seeing that most if not all nords despise those types. I did see there was a romance tag, im curious to see how that works out and with who. over all I will keep reading and give my powerstones as long as you keep going. 😊
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Hey Everyone! I am the author of this Readapted Fanfic(of Igornerd). The edited Versions of the earlier chapters is out and marked with a [2.0] This will be the "clean" version of this fanmade series. You might find these 2.0 Chapters not in "synch" with the events on those that dont had 2.0 marks, This was because those unmarked chapters were the "rough drafts" or preview/experimental versions which were intentionally released to gather some help and reviews on how to improve this series and which ones should be fixed. Please do note also that some 2.0 Chapters may have big changes but some may have none. I am still open to recommendations and suggestions so don't hesitate to notify me. (But still, these versions were not the final state as they may be subjected again to more revisions in the future. Probably if I get more ideas on how to make it better or if I found a good suggestion on the reviews/comments) And I do apologize if you see some quirky or clunky sentences or wrong use of words as I am not that good in English, so any corrections are welcome. \\(>w<\\)
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loving it so far only thing is wouldnt the mc be able to get odahviing or durnehviir be able to fly him to the elemental nations? other than that great story so far
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My god this is the best story i have read in a while. This new chapter gave me goosebumps
While I did enjoy this it started to become very annoying and aggrivating. For someone who has slain dragons and fought so many wars is portrayed as in my opinion kinda weak and honestly pretty dumb in some cases. I enjoyed it, I really did but he is way too weak for being who he is.
Honestly this is a really amazingly good read I loved reading every sentence in this fiction... All the way up until the MC was used as a toy. The main character, From where I am currently reading is being controlled by Minato inside of his mind, Causing him unable to even save his own students and properly defend himself. Not only that infuriating piece of information but throughout the past few chapters the Main character was defenceless, The Dragonborn, A vampirelord, Someone who has been through years of combat can't defend against some poison. It is so mind numbingly annoying that I'm just going to drop this. It was an amazing and really great read but the moment the Main character became a doll for Minato pretty much is when it crossed my line of annoyance.
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The Premise is very good and it sounds interessting, However its very slow and arduous to read, The story takes a very long tIme to progress
I noticed and the official FF only has 22 chapters, I imagine you will continue more? ------------------------------------------------------
The storys not to bad! I like it and Im suprised it doesnt have many more views.
This is a stolen work. This "author" didn't request permission to write this, nor was the real author informed. The real author also does not want this up. Delete it.
I'm not going to lie, stayed up until 3 in the morning last night (I had to get up for work around 5:30) binge reading to catch up and I got to say I truly love what you have done here with this fanfic. the fight scenes are detailed and enjoyable and had me on my toes. the fact that his dragonsoul counters genjutsu was a nice power up I wasnt expecting. conrads stowaways/apprentices interaction with modern technology was enjoyable to read as well as his interactions with Naruto. I'm curious see how Conrad reacts to Itachi when he finds out that he's a kin-killer seeing that most if not all nords despise those types. I did see there was a romance tag, im curious to see how that works out and with who. over all I will keep reading and give my powerstones as long as you keep going. 😊
Revelar Spoiler Hey Everyone! I am the author of this Readapted Fanfic(of Igornerd). The edited Versions of the earlier chapters is out and marked with a [2.0] This will be the "clean" version of this fanmade series. You might find these 2.0 Chapters not in "synch" with the events on those that dont had 2.0 marks, This was because those unmarked chapters were the "rough drafts" or preview/experimental versions which were intentionally released to gather some help and reviews on how to improve this series and which ones should be fixed. Please do note also that some 2.0 Chapters may have big changes but some may have none. I am still open to recommendations and suggestions so don't hesitate to notify me. (But still, these versions were not the final state as they may be subjected again to more revisions in the future. Probably if I get more ideas on how to make it better or if I found a good suggestion on the reviews/comments) And I do apologize if you see some quirky or clunky sentences or wrong use of words as I am not that good in English, so any corrections are welcome. \\(>w<\\)
Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good Good good good good good good
loving it so far only thing is wouldnt the mc be able to get odahviing or durnehviir be able to fly him to the elemental nations? other than that great story so far
Revelar Spoiler My god this is the best story i have read in a while. This new chapter gave me goosebumps
While I did enjoy this it started to become very annoying and aggrivating. For someone who has slain dragons and fought so many wars is portrayed as in my opinion kinda weak and honestly pretty dumb in some cases. I enjoyed it, I really did but he is way too weak for being who he is.
Honestly this is a really amazingly good read I loved reading every sentence in this fiction... All the way up until the MC was used as a toy. The main character, From where I am currently reading is being controlled by Minato inside of his mind, Causing him unable to even save his own students and properly defend himself. Not only that infuriating piece of information but throughout the past few chapters the Main character was defenceless, The Dragonborn, A vampirelord, Someone who has been through years of combat can't defend against some poison. It is so mind numbingly annoying that I'm just going to drop this. It was an amazing and really great read but the moment the Main character became a doll for Minato pretty much is when it crossed my line of annoyance.
thx thx h thx thx th x hx hx thx thx t xht thx thc th xht txht xthx thx thx thx thx thx thx th thx thx thx thx thx th xth thx thx thx th xthx thx thx thx thx thx h thx thx thx thx thx th thx thx thx thx thx thx thx thx tx thx thx thx thx tx
The Premise is very good and it sounds interessting, However its very slow and arduous to read, The story takes a very long tIme to progress
I noticed and the official FF only has 22 chapters, I imagine you will continue more? ------------------------------------------------------
The storys not to bad! I like it and Im suprised it doesnt have many more views.
This is nothing but a truly pathetic attempt at plagiarism.