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As the author said, it has a slow start, but it allows for better character development in the end. Read all the chapters available as of February 1, 2024, and hope to see more.
it's decent I guess. If you're reading for fun or to pass time , you could try reading it
Really slow. Puts to much detail into things that don’t even matter. English is a bit off, not bad though.
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Had high hopes for this second novel but honestly disappointing start has soo much filler and holes it got annoying and with the MCs character ahh anyway maybe I'll come again later and review after new chapters are released but for now it's bad more like he's out of ideas 😅
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i would say I have read 10 chapters of this book but the story isn't going anywhere It can't got me within 10 chapters, like, almost every novels I have read even the bad one got me to read them until I was bored within 10 chapters but this novel couldn't and anthe mc personality is not likable at all within these 10 chapters that I've read
What a rare find, a vrmmo novel that's actually good. Writing this review here in hopes to encourage author san. To those deliberating whether to read or not, defs read. it's one of the good ones!
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I like the book there are a few holes in it but all in all it isn't bad. I hope that the author finds an editor soon. and will continue to upload chapters. Good job.
Isn’t it still ongoing or not continuing anymore?...........…........................................................................................................................................................................
I’ve read up to chapter 125, and so far I’m liking the story! It’s definitely slow paced, but it doesn’t get boring. The story celebrates and builds on the small victories rather than have giant confrontations. I also really enjoy the characters! Each one feels important, and I like seeing them all work together. The only real criticism I have is the grammar. There are a lot of awkward sentences, but the intended meaning does get conveyed anyway. A little editing would make the book a smoother read.
Well I check it, the description intrigued me, and I then read it. In clousion the characters feel alive and not like a side character that is only there to praise Mc. Also kinda funny how the Mc is seen as a noob, well he was in the old game he played, but he is actually one of the strongest players that is smart. sometimes it do be that way, good book and looking forward for new chapters.
Revelar Spoiler Hope there are more chapter coming up. I like the story very much........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the idea to have mc have partners that are as op as mc . Overall a good novel i'm waiting for them to build a tribe.
I'm hooked, I can't get enough, the story is a little slow but it is captivating. it's a nice balance of 'real life' and game world. I can't wait to read more. I understand a balance is needed for the writer, but please keep writing
Won’t lie, the start was a little rough to read (a little boring and slow), but after chapter 45 it really does start to pick up. If you can read through the first 45, you will start enjoying this read
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Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.
I highly recommend it, very good I hope they make a webtoon of it in the future. great job hope to see the novel in the future [img = recomendar]
Written after chapter 108 : I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed : The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUP !!! (of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless) Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring… And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings. And I have great hopes for what will follow. I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced. And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together. That’s how you are supposed to play such games… Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such. Notes : Writing Quality : 4,5/5 => here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for me Stability of Updates : 3/5 => my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so… Story Development : 5/5 => so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game story Character Design : 5/5 => the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-) World Background : 5/5 => Real city names. Period.
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This is sooooooo good. I don't know about others, but I never liked vr genre. But this one is sooo good. Need more updates plsssssssssssssssss
The story is written well everything is good however you should really change the name should be about a man trying to run at No Kingdom building it takes too long to get into I was really hoping for a king the building
I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging
Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good: -game seems interesting -blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real -No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86] -MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this site Bad: -I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms. -way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86] -characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough. -There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.
My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author
I recommend this novel to those who like to read about virtual gaming and can't wait until this get to next arc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)
As the author said, it has a slow start, but it allows for better character development in the end. Read all the chapters available as of February 1, 2024, and hope to see more.
it's decent I guess. If you're reading for fun or to pass time , you could try reading it
Really slow. Puts to much detail into things that don’t even matter. English is a bit off, not bad though.
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Had high hopes for this second novel but honestly disappointing start has soo much filler and holes it got annoying and with the MCs character ahh anyway maybe I'll come again later and review after new chapters are released but for now it's bad more like he's out of ideas 😅
Revelar Spoiler i would say I have read 10 chapters of this book but the story isn't going anywhere It can't got me within 10 chapters, like, almost every novels I have read even the bad one got me to read them until I was bored within 10 chapters but this novel couldn't and anthe mc personality is not likable at all within these 10 chapters that I've read
What a rare find, a vrmmo novel that's actually good. Writing this review here in hopes to encourage author san. To those deliberating whether to read or not, defs read. it's one of the good ones!
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I like the book there are a few holes in it but all in all it isn't bad. I hope that the author finds an editor soon. and will continue to upload chapters. Good job.
Isn’t it still ongoing or not continuing anymore?...........…........................................................................................................................................................................
I’ve read up to chapter 125, and so far I’m liking the story! It’s definitely slow paced, but it doesn’t get boring. The story celebrates and builds on the small victories rather than have giant confrontations. I also really enjoy the characters! Each one feels important, and I like seeing them all work together. The only real criticism I have is the grammar. There are a lot of awkward sentences, but the intended meaning does get conveyed anyway. A little editing would make the book a smoother read.
Well I check it, the description intrigued me, and I then read it. In clousion the characters feel alive and not like a side character that is only there to praise Mc. Also kinda funny how the Mc is seen as a noob, well he was in the old game he played, but he is actually one of the strongest players that is smart. sometimes it do be that way, good book and looking forward for new chapters.
Revelar Spoiler Hope there are more chapter coming up. I like the story very much........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like the idea to have mc have partners that are as op as mc . Overall a good novel i'm waiting for them to build a tribe.
I'm hooked, I can't get enough, the story is a little slow but it is captivating. it's a nice balance of 'real life' and game world. I can't wait to read more. I understand a balance is needed for the writer, but please keep writing
Won’t lie, the start was a little rough to read (a little boring and slow), but after chapter 45 it really does start to pick up. If you can read through the first 45, you will start enjoying this read
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.
I highly recommend it, very good I hope they make a webtoon of it in the future. great job hope to see the novel in the future [img = recomendar]
Written after chapter 108 : I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed : The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUP !!! (of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless) Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring… And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings. And I have great hopes for what will follow. I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced. And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together. That’s how you are supposed to play such games… Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such. Notes : Writing Quality : 4,5/5 => here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for me Stability of Updates : 3/5 => my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so… Story Development : 5/5 => so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game story Character Design : 5/5 => the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-) World Background : 5/5 => Real city names. Period.
Revelar Spoiler This is sooooooo good. I don't know about others, but I never liked vr genre. But this one is sooo good. Need more updates plsssssssssssssssss
The story is written well everything is good however you should really change the name should be about a man trying to run at No Kingdom building it takes too long to get into I was really hoping for a king the building
I read to chapter 20 and couldn't continue. I am sorry but the story is boring. The writing quality is good however the story isn't engaging
Overall, I like the structure of this story and I think it has potential, but I am disappointed with the slower pace. Maybe the novel will pick up the pace once a "Tribe" is formed between the various characters. Author definitely seems like they have a direction and the main cast all have some personality instead of one dimensional characteristics. Good: -game seems interesting -blend of real world and video game which gives life to characters and makes the world seem more real -No line up of jade beauties trying to get into MC's pants just cause he has a pulse [as of latest chapter, 86] -MC is not a money obsessed like a lot of video game genre MCs on this site Bad: -I am current through chapter 86 and there has been no kingdom building, no romance, and no e-sports. The novel is interesting though it seems more like a cultivation novel where almost all of the focus is on the main character being a "trash" with a cute little sister type character doing a VERY long training montage with stat increases instead of changes in realms. -way too much early focus on press conferences and other news segments that have little story relevance [at least as of chapter 86] -characters responding to the smallest conflict between each other as "do they hate me?" if you have been friends and close for over a decade and the one little thing makes you think that they hate you, that is just rough. -There are some grammar errors though nothing that makes it impossible to understand what is going on in the story.
My impression on this one is, it was really good and many good and detail description around the game. It also has a good gaming mechanism which almost follow the norm in real life. It very in opinion. Thanks author
I recommend this novel to those who like to read about virtual gaming and can't wait until this get to next arc. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)
I read 30 chapters waiting for something to happen and it never did