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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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good fanfic, steady and rational mc and i like the story progression so far. i hope the character interactions improve once he joins a squad.
This is a really good book, look forward to more chapters[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
now this book has fresh new approach with new magic not some op system and harem that type of trash. liking so far can't wait for more updates
nice book overall newly in love with this although I'm not in a relationship,loving this book.Just for u know the book is accelerating my heart beat xoxo kk❤️
It was a very creative power mc has isn't it has a lot of potential and creative scope and think aurthor can make use of this and I hope u can continue writing this it has a lot of potential
another one also to show a little support to a friend and encourage to not drop this and keep on pursuing what you feel and keep going and don't give up.
we'll just here to support a fellow friend with same interests and tastes .Have a good day and hope you will go on what you started and don't give up.
well, I will give my myself 5 stars don't mind me here just enjoy the novel, English is not my first language so please keep it in mind. ok then bye
It's perfect and very creative the story is good. His magic is very clever he has star magic and fire magic which will make his strong. If you don't like it done read it.
good fanfic, steady and rational mc and i like the story progression so far. i hope the character interactions improve once he joins a squad.
This is a really good book, look forward to more chapters[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
now this book has fresh new approach with new magic not some op system and harem that type of trash. liking so far can't wait for more updates
nice book overall newly in love with this although I'm not in a relationship,loving this book.Just for u know the book is accelerating my heart beat xoxo kk❤️
It was a very creative power mc has isn't it has a lot of potential and creative scope and think aurthor can make use of this and I hope u can continue writing this it has a lot of potential
another one also to show a little support to a friend and encourage to not drop this and keep on pursuing what you feel and keep going and don't give up.
we'll just here to support a fellow friend with same interests and tastes .Have a good day and hope you will go on what you started and don't give up.
well, I will give my myself 5 stars don't mind me here just enjoy the novel, English is not my first language so please keep it in mind. ok then bye
It's perfect and very creative the story is good. His magic is very clever he has star magic and fire magic which will make his strong. If you don't like it done read it.