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Nice story and Plot but there is no update for a long time, hope author start updating novel like earlier... Thanks for the Chapter........
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''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''
1 star for making the novel so disgusting. I don't like the fact the Mc will start liking the girl even though she did harmful things to him. Even if he did it first but that doesn't mean they should do it to him.
An interesting story with a few mistakes but very little and that don't effect the story much. The story is already pretty unique, I find the experience can concept very interesting. There are only a couple dozen chapters at the moment but I can't wait to see more of it. To the author: I hope u don't drop it and continue writing this story. You are doing great so far and I believe it will do good but it might take a while so don't be discouraged. All I can say to finish of this post is, I wish there was more to read.
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Nice story and Plot but there is no update for a long time, hope author start updating novel like earlier... Thanks for the Chapter........
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''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''''You also have to bring me a bride the next time you return'' then she put a bright smile on her face and continued ''Hopefully someone that isn't flat chested like that Lin girl. Also hurry up, your father is waiting for you in the carriage.''
1 star for making the novel so disgusting. I don't like the fact the Mc will start liking the girl even though she did harmful things to him. Even if he did it first but that doesn't mean they should do it to him.
An interesting story with a few mistakes but very little and that don't effect the story much. The story is already pretty unique, I find the experience can concept very interesting. There are only a couple dozen chapters at the moment but I can't wait to see more of it. To the author: I hope u don't drop it and continue writing this story. You are doing great so far and I believe it will do good but it might take a while so don't be discouraged. All I can say to finish of this post is, I wish there was more to read.
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Revelar SpoilerI think this whould of ben better if this was a one piece fan fic im just sayin u miss out. Pls im beggin u like this post im mentaly deprived
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I thibk the concept is amazing. I Have a very high hope for this story and the mc. Go go go I want more chapter of this book ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This... this really something beyond any harem story available. If you like harem + sci-fi + pirate theme combined with star wars-like plot, this story is really for you. Definitely recommend, mostly because the plot is super intriguing.
oh ho! I am already latched on this journey of Ed to space and beyond. Action, and beauties only two things any man would want. I am already rooting for the Author to release more chapters because damn I can't wait for more. You should definitely give it a try, bcz it's worth your time .....
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