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I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses. Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director. no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily. It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.
The story was surprisingly good huh aside from some grammar mistakes overall is great I think the problem I see here in novel is only it's own title 'Made in America' (In my own opinion) it sounds like lame and nationalistic that's why those kids would skip reading it as they see it on the list maybe you could change it something like "Regressed as a Hollywood director" or "Regressed as a Greatest Hollywood director " something like that. that's all.
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Amazing story. Only bad part is the grammar. This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories. Mc is smart and funny. The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities. I recommend you give this a try.
Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable. it can be improve with time. (with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.) I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities. Thankyou
There are problems with the quality of writing, there are chapters that are not understood ... but it is a good story. 👍 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author, don't forget the music. In other words, artists and bands are the jewel in the crown, music crosses borders, languages and ideologies. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
First 10 chapter is good, after that is ok I guess, but the real problems is bad grammar. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
good story but is not getting updated anymore. Still give it a try if you are looking for some time pass.
I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses. Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director. no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily. It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.
The story was surprisingly good huh aside from some grammar mistakes overall is great I think the problem I see here in novel is only it's own title 'Made in America' (In my own opinion) it sounds like lame and nationalistic that's why those kids would skip reading it as they see it on the list maybe you could change it something like "Regressed as a Hollywood director" or "Regressed as a Greatest Hollywood director " something like that. that's all.
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👍 👌 Thanks for the story [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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Amazing story. Only bad part is the grammar. This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories. Mc is smart and funny. The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities. I recommend you give this a try.
Story is greatly comprehensive and reasonable. it can be improve with time. (with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.) I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities. Thankyou
There are problems with the quality of writing, there are chapters that are not understood ... but it is a good story. 👍 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author, don't forget the music. In other words, artists and bands are the jewel in the crown, music crosses borders, languages and ideologies. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
First 10 chapter is good, after that is ok I guess, but the real problems is bad grammar. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
good story but is not getting updated anymore. Still give it a try if you are looking for some time pass.