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i want to say the idea is heavily based on "i have a mansion in the apocalypse", the author followed their own ideas which was refreshing but the annoying part is the author romance is just cringe... everytime the author whats to connect the author with another female, i just keep remembering how it was done easier in i have a mansion in the apocalypse. like the mc rich girlfriend finding out that he is cheating and traveling over to meet him that chapter was just... just... *sign*
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Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid. Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance. World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
Honest review I'm at chap 96 The Mc is dumb that doesn't think of the long term consequences of his actions Especially when he did the raid at the terrorist. He just putting himself in the spot light where any secret organizations or government see him. I'm pretty sure that those guys will come snooping in and boom he's either captured for "examination" or manipulated or dead Seriously just showing off his weapons put him on every organizations, government, etc. watchlist. And being in their watchlist is already fatal for him in either long or short term period.
well what i can say. author whatever he say or other people this is very good novel. i highly recommend reading this if you like apocalipse with system.
I like how the story flows. There are not many cliches even though this is a system Apocalypse novel. If you combine these 2 genres then you will probably see many same types of outcomes but different types of titles. Very satisfied as of now.
The book is pretty solid as of chap 400 the only issue I have is the author getting mixed up with past and present tense. It’s especially bad at the beginning where majority of the tenses are wrong. But apart from that, the plot and world building is quite enjoyable.
Very amazing novel i love it a lot I cant wait to see more it’s gotten to an emotional part of the story and I cant wait to see what happens next
Decent story that suffers from bad Grammer pretty badly at some points. MC is pretty realistic with only the occasional habit of saving the damsel in distress. Overall, it's a good story that could use an editor but otherwise is interesting and we'll paced.
If you are in a Gunfight what will you use a gun or fist? @#$% System already told MC that his opponent is stronger but the stupid MC still use fist. R.I.P. common sense
its my first review i am saying this it's really good 👍story. After reading 📚more than 40 chapters i really like the mc for not acting like fool
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge. All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
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I have A question , is this novel an original one or translation? Btw good story with decent character development , although mc seem naive but still decent enough solid 4/5
unidentified female players immediately went to the clan in a few days now but I have to be a general and a lot faster than they do in a tier and start a new clan member and you will be back later
unidentified Male reporter for the first step in a few weeks or so to see if I could do the events you have vip and have tier one to go back to work for you to be so much better than that is true it doesn't seem
unidentified female reporter for CNN correspondent david chalian is in the background then gunshot and then you can do this for me a min to many people who are the ones that are not a bad game
unidentified female reporter from the campaigning of a college brings up the building and the bad and burn the whole bunch on a friday thing in a tier I don't need no more than that is true but I'm still here
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
The novel is good...................................... ............................................................... That's all 140 words
Well i like the way the author write this novel, from the MC focus is to get money (he is poor in the beginning) with normal way (trading money, with STEIN is help of course), and the way he get to learn new things on the post-apocalypse world to his scavengering to get valuable metal, weapons, machines, to 'common' knowledge in the Apocalypse. So yeah i like this novel hope to see this novel to the end! Hope for the best for you Author!!! Have a nice day, stay save and healthy see you later😎😎😎
Very enjoyable, some minor delays in updating but good read. i vote for The book every other day and gIft every 45 chapters. Reasonable original content and enjoyable character interactions.
Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good. Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MC Updating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential. Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
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love story so far. well written thought out line for where the system and mc are going. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊
this novel is actually very good is start slow and steady i hope it will be continued and not get stop. please give more chapters on it thank you
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Very decent novel.[img=recommend] Background - good ) Fluid storytelling - excellent ) human interaction - good ) explanation source of the system and future progress ) Not many cliches ) good grammar and minimum error ) Оverall score 4.5 \ 5. But if you take into account the general trend of this site, you can safely give even 5 \ 5. Webnovel publishes fewer and fewer truly worthy stories. Recently, only copy-paste garbage.
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i want to say the idea is heavily based on "i have a mansion in the apocalypse", the author followed their own ideas which was refreshing but the annoying part is the author romance is just cringe... everytime the author whats to connect the author with another female, i just keep remembering how it was done easier in i have a mansion in the apocalypse. like the mc rich girlfriend finding out that he is cheating and traveling over to meet him that chapter was just... just... *sign*
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Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid. Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance. World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
Honest review I'm at chap 96 The Mc is dumb that doesn't think of the long term consequences of his actions Especially when he did the raid at the terrorist. He just putting himself in the spot light where any secret organizations or government see him. I'm pretty sure that those guys will come snooping in and boom he's either captured for "examination" or manipulated or dead Seriously just showing off his weapons put him on every organizations, government, etc. watchlist. And being in their watchlist is already fatal for him in either long or short term period.
well what i can say. author whatever he say or other people this is very good novel. i highly recommend reading this if you like apocalipse with system.
I like how the story flows. There are not many cliches even though this is a system Apocalypse novel. If you combine these 2 genres then you will probably see many same types of outcomes but different types of titles. Very satisfied as of now.
The book is pretty solid as of chap 400 the only issue I have is the author getting mixed up with past and present tense. It’s especially bad at the beginning where majority of the tenses are wrong. But apart from that, the plot and world building is quite enjoyable.
Very amazing novel i love it a lot I cant wait to see more it’s gotten to an emotional part of the story and I cant wait to see what happens next
Decent story that suffers from bad Grammer pretty badly at some points. MC is pretty realistic with only the occasional habit of saving the damsel in distress. Overall, it's a good story that could use an editor but otherwise is interesting and we'll paced.
If you are in a Gunfight what will you use a gun or fist? @#$% System already told MC that his opponent is stronger but the stupid MC still use fist. R.I.P. common sense
its my first review i am saying this it's really good 👍story. After reading 📚more than 40 chapters i really like the mc for not acting like fool
This novel its actually very good! The author put a lot of work in every detail the story is progressing very well and its very fun to read, although it as few chapters now with the release rating that it was soon it will chamge. All in all, read it its very fun, very well written and the plot is cleary was thought about!
Revelar Spoiler I have A question , is this novel an original one or translation? Btw good story with decent character development , although mc seem naive but still decent enough solid 4/5
unidentified female players immediately went to the clan in a few days now but I have to be a general and a lot faster than they do in a tier and start a new clan member and you will be back later
unidentified Male reporter for the first step in a few weeks or so to see if I could do the events you have vip and have tier one to go back to work for you to be so much better than that is true it doesn't seem
unidentified female reporter for CNN correspondent david chalian is in the background then gunshot and then you can do this for me a min to many people who are the ones that are not a bad game
unidentified female reporter from the campaigning of a college brings up the building and the bad and burn the whole bunch on a friday thing in a tier I don't need no more than that is true but I'm still here
This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
The novel is good...................................... ............................................................... That's all 140 words
Well i like the way the author write this novel, from the MC focus is to get money (he is poor in the beginning) with normal way (trading money, with STEIN is help of course), and the way he get to learn new things on the post-apocalypse world to his scavengering to get valuable metal, weapons, machines, to 'common' knowledge in the Apocalypse. So yeah i like this novel hope to see this novel to the end! Hope for the best for you Author!!! Have a nice day, stay save and healthy see you later😎😎😎
Very enjoyable, some minor delays in updating but good read. i vote for The book every other day and gIft every 45 chapters. Reasonable original content and enjoyable character interactions.
Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good. Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MC Updating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential. Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
Revelar Spoiler love story so far. well written thought out line for where the system and mc are going. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊
this novel is actually very good is start slow and steady i hope it will be continued and not get stop. please give more chapters on it thank you
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Very decent novel.[img=recommend] Background - good ) Fluid storytelling - excellent ) human interaction - good ) explanation source of the system and future progress ) Not many cliches ) good grammar and minimum error ) Оverall score 4.5 \ 5. But if you take into account the general trend of this site, you can safely give even 5 \ 5. Webnovel publishes fewer and fewer truly worthy stories. Recently, only copy-paste garbage.
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