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I love the lay out and the Love story wish it could have been longer but it’s a great read pull at the heart strings it’s was true love and the second chance they both got there happy ending & crystal got what she deserved
story was great at beginning. but at the end was quite confusing because she had twins, which I thought the main character had a hysterectomy after her husband forced her to have an abortion. which is medically impossible to have children after that type of procedure......
The writing was good but the story was very rushed..I was expecting more of a background and also why would the female go back willingly to someone who abused her her, killed her child and committed adultry numerous times..the story was also confusing in sone of the chapters where I had to go back a chapter to see if I missed anything..this story is a “no” from me
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There is no revenge at all. The story, the characters are so dissapointing 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I know at a point in the storyline she had a surgery to remove her uterus to save her life.how did she carry and give birth to twins ??? until this point I can honestly say this was a great read.
This was a great book the character were very good the line was great and kept the ending well hid Alfred and Lauren loved each other Carrie was a great crook thank you to the for an enjoyable time
good read, only there lot of jumps from one chapter to other.........................................................................................
It is a good book with good characters. I wish the main male character wasnt so rude though and that the female lead did not stay with him but overall it is a good book.
It a great story. Though this work of the author is of a short story but the establishment and character sketching really left a deep curve in the hearts of the readers. I really love it🤩😍
Short story but good one has moral lesson especially how to forgive and to move one and be better person even though some people made bad thing and the goodness and pureness of a clean heart
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the book is not completed... but interesting so far just hope its not drawn out and become a few hundred chapters. hope the drama ends at chapter 34
The didban excellent job writing this book. I commend you on not being redundant and dragging the out. I will definitely read more of your work.
The ending doesnt make sense at all. It leaves the readers hanging. It looks like the story was rushed.
The overall story is good but there are many major loop holes in the story which l feel. 1. How she escaped from the hospital? What she saw on her phone? did anyone helped her? What happend to surveillance photages? 2. How can she give birth if she doesn't have uterus? Sorry it is not to offended the author but these are the points that l didn't understand ?
Although at the start, the characters were super annoying, but as he story progressed, so as the main characters . I love happy endings. Cause everyone deserves a second chance
bruhhh where is the revenge here?!!! goshhh i feel pity with the title. please give it some justice 🤭.........................................
even though the book was short is was an interesting read. I found all the characters likable and fell in love with them. I do recommend reading this book
Starated off decent, even though the grammar was atrocious, but the more I read the harder it became to understand so I went to see if this is a translation and seen it was. Probably a good story if it was translated properly
Complete garbage. Abusing man who killed his own child and almost killed his own wife has a redemption arc, as if that somehow makes any sense.
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it felt like something is miss[img=update]ing from this story. for example why did he believe the lies or how did she escape the hospital. did he have any proof.
The story was ok. I don't like the fact that she got back together with her abusive, cheating husband who forced her to have an abortion. What really annoys me is the unanswered questions. How did she leave the hospital? What did she see on her phone? Who hacked the surveillance video? How did she get to own her company when she was broke when she left? Who was the man she had ice cream with? Finally, how did she have children after having a hysterectomy, or did she not have that surgery? Which makes me ask again who helped her escape the hospital???
I love the lay out and the Love story wish it could have been longer but it’s a great read pull at the heart strings it’s was true love and the second chance they both got there happy ending & crystal got what she deserved
story was great at beginning. but at the end was quite confusing because she had twins, which I thought the main character had a hysterectomy after her husband forced her to have an abortion. which is medically impossible to have children after that type of procedure......
The writing was good but the story was very rushed..I was expecting more of a background and also why would the female go back willingly to someone who abused her her, killed her child and committed adultry numerous times..the story was also confusing in sone of the chapters where I had to go back a chapter to see if I missed anything..this story is a “no” from me
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I know at a point in the storyline she had a surgery to remove her uterus to save her life.how did she carry and give birth to twins ??? until this point I can honestly say this was a great read.
This was a great book the character were very good the line was great and kept the ending well hid Alfred and Lauren loved each other Carrie was a great crook thank you to the for an enjoyable time
good read, only there lot of jumps from one chapter to other.........................................................................................
It is a good book with good characters. I wish the main male character wasnt so rude though and that the female lead did not stay with him but overall it is a good book.
It a great story. Though this work of the author is of a short story but the establishment and character sketching really left a deep curve in the hearts of the readers. I really love it🤩😍
Short story but good one has moral lesson especially how to forgive and to move one and be better person even though some people made bad thing and the goodness and pureness of a clean heart
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the book is not completed... but interesting so far just hope its not drawn out and become a few hundred chapters. hope the drama ends at chapter 34
The didban excellent job writing this book. I commend you on not being redundant and dragging the out. I will definitely read more of your work.
The ending doesnt make sense at all. It leaves the readers hanging. It looks like the story was rushed.
The overall story is good but there are many major loop holes in the story which l feel. 1. How she escaped from the hospital? What she saw on her phone? did anyone helped her? What happend to surveillance photages? 2. How can she give birth if she doesn't have uterus? Sorry it is not to offended the author but these are the points that l didn't understand ?
Although at the start, the characters were super annoying, but as he story progressed, so as the main characters . I love happy endings. Cause everyone deserves a second chance
bruhhh where is the revenge here?!!! goshhh i feel pity with the title. please give it some justice 🤭.........................................
even though the book was short is was an interesting read. I found all the characters likable and fell in love with them. I do recommend reading this book
Starated off decent, even though the grammar was atrocious, but the more I read the harder it became to understand so I went to see if this is a translation and seen it was. Probably a good story if it was translated properly
Complete garbage. Abusing man who killed his own child and almost killed his own wife has a redemption arc, as if that somehow makes any sense.
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it felt like something is miss[img=update]ing from this story. for example why did he believe the lies or how did she escape the hospital. did he have any proof.
The story was ok. I don't like the fact that she got back together with her abusive, cheating husband who forced her to have an abortion. What really annoys me is the unanswered questions. How did she leave the hospital? What did she see on her phone? Who hacked the surveillance video? How did she get to own her company when she was broke when she left? Who was the man she had ice cream with? Finally, how did she have children after having a hysterectomy, or did she not have that surgery? Which makes me ask again who helped her escape the hospital???