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I have just started reading it and I enjoy it very much. The story is very slow paste but it shows how much he is trying to get into the story buildup. However, the author is not that frequent on updates.
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Start as a slave ... really ? Dk why ppl try so hard to make mc in fanfics be shit at the start and start crawling up the ladder of development.Could have been born a normal person and still have the development but nope lets be a slave and read about him being abused and pushed around like a dog.Wont change no matter how much he grows Was and will always be a slave.Thats just how GOT is
I like it a lot, the only thing I dislike is the slow development. I have nothing against the characters developing but there are chapters that have nothing but the MC and system communicating which are unnecessarily long. The story is great! It is new, with the starting of slavery instead of nobility, and is based in Essos instead of Westeros. I just don't like the slow development, most chapters feel like fillers. Don't drop!
Revelar Spoiler story is good so far but bit slow. I hope auther wont drop ....................................................................................
i have a really high expectations when reading the first chapter, but the progress was so slow, i got tired reading. it seems to have stop updating. so I'm gonna drop the story- i only like the mc tho, since he's kinda reasonable on how they act
I have just started reading it and I enjoy it very much. The story is very slow paste but it shows how much he is trying to get into the story buildup. However, the author is not that frequent on updates.
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Please don't drop Ndjjdjdjjndndndnnnnjn&jjjhhhh&hhhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhhhdhdhhddjsjeidisjjjjdjdjdhrhdhdhdhdhdhhdhhhhhhdhddhhdhdhdhdjjdududdijdjdjdjdjdjdjddodidididi
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just dont drop. our stones will with you ........................................................................................................................
Start as a slave ... really ? Dk why ppl try so hard to make mc in fanfics be shit at the start and start crawling up the ladder of development.Could have been born a normal person and still have the development but nope lets be a slave and read about him being abused and pushed around like a dog.Wont change no matter how much he grows Was and will always be a slave.Thats just how GOT is
I like it a lot, the only thing I dislike is the slow development. I have nothing against the characters developing but there are chapters that have nothing but the MC and system communicating which are unnecessarily long. The story is great! It is new, with the starting of slavery instead of nobility, and is based in Essos instead of Westeros. I just don't like the slow development, most chapters feel like fillers. Don't drop!
Revelar Spoiler story is good so far but bit slow. I hope auther wont drop ....................................................................................
i have a really high expectations when reading the first chapter, but the progress was so slow, i got tired reading. it seems to have stop updating. so I'm gonna drop the story- i only like the mc tho, since he's kinda reasonable on how they act