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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
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Ohayo Author-san it's me! Know that till now, I've only read 2 Chapters from your story, and to my review of your story and to clarify some things: 1)_It's not bad how you used Emiya Shirou as the appearance of the MC. 2)_The grammar could use a bit of help..., BUT if you hire an editor I wouldn't be surprised that your story would climb the ranks! 3)_The updates are stable. 4)_I like how you used RWBY as the main world as there aren't that many RWBY fics. AAANNDDD as I stated in a comment before me working as your editor is still up! Ruby & Nora: And don't forget to make many cookies and pancakes and destroy some legs in the future! :D
Not gonna lie Best RWBY fanfic i have read in the past six months Characters not too op Story is at a pacing where i'm content with this content and is an intresting concept cant wait to see more
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If you can actually write this fic to the the current season 8 ill give 2 stones like today every time I get more...........................
Although I just started reading your story, I really do think it promising and the writer is doing an amazing job, Do keep it up author 😘😘
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
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Ohayo Author-san it's me! Know that till now, I've only read 2 Chapters from your story, and to my review of your story and to clarify some things: 1)_It's not bad how you used Emiya Shirou as the appearance of the MC. 2)_The grammar could use a bit of help..., BUT if you hire an editor I wouldn't be surprised that your story would climb the ranks! 3)_The updates are stable. 4)_I like how you used RWBY as the main world as there aren't that many RWBY fics. AAANNDDD as I stated in a comment before me working as your editor is still up! Ruby & Nora: And don't forget to make many cookies and pancakes and destroy some legs in the future! :D
Not gonna lie Best RWBY fanfic i have read in the past six months Characters not too op Story is at a pacing where i'm content with this content and is an intresting concept cant wait to see more
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If you can actually write this fic to the the current season 8 ill give 2 stones like today every time I get more...........................
Although I just started reading your story, I really do think it promising and the writer is doing an amazing job, Do keep it up author 😘😘