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Suka banget sama ceritanya. Alurnya juga menarik, pokoknya wajib masuk collection, semangat ngetiknya ya kakak ditunggu kelanjutannya ya ....
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After all, just be excited about the author. Hopeftheyly in the future she will be more fluent in designing his new novels. good job author😇😇😇😇😇
Amazing, Awesome, Nice, You can wrote Japanese Culture with completed This Book very good story Very very Recommended Wish u all the best, sis, I hope you always success. Good Luck. 🤗🙂
Fuyuki, a young man who has spiritual power. Early in life, looks normal. But all that changed when his father was mysteriously killed. Since then, he has been determined to find his father's killer. The narrative is very good. In my opinion, there are no errors in the use of grammar 🔥🔥👍
i always trying to get some great novel about Japanese culture and boom!! i found this novel. i really enjoyed while i'm reading this, the plot, the characters, i love so much. thanks to ANA BANTINGAN, because you have Made this gergous novel. keep fighting!! ganbarimasyooou!!
Very good story sister👍👍 I don't speak English, but I've read the Indonesian version and it's really really cool😘😘 Good luck sister🙏🙏🙏
this story is good and intriguing. for the author, keep up the spirit, don't give up. you will definitelly be the best...i put it on the bookshelf
Making a novel, even in Bahasa, is a difficult thing. Let alone, in English. With Japan as a setting, it's well done. I could really feel it's Japanese culture. Never give up!💪🏼💪🏼
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I was reading the first chapter, and I want to share my thoughts. The author was writing with Japan as the setting. It's quite rare novel to find in this platform. For you who loves to read manga, you can read this as well. I will come again to read next chapters! Fighting!
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very good english novel. considering that the author is Indonesian. I recommend it for Wibu. good job sis ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a good story. You can add this to library. Hope everyone can enjoy this. Hope the best for the author. Good job. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Good story, I like the story, very interesting reading. The spirit continues to work, don't give up. [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Writing novels in English, I think it's very difficult. and the author can make this story in English very well. should be appreciated and recommended, especially for manga enthusiasts Good job! Success for you
Japanese novels are really good stories. the plot is also easy to read. the depiction of characters and others is also very detailed. anyway this novel is a recommendation to read. Ganbatte sis
hello! I am one of fans this novel. I already read the indonesia version too. well I never getting bored about the storyline that always makes me surprise. it's feel like you're pulled by the story. I highly recommend you this novel if you like story that have unusual plot. I always wait for your next chapter author ✨😆😁🎉
It's really difficult to make an english translation of a novel, especially from someone that are non-native speaker. But, the author of this story has done it really well. This have a good story, good job. Keep it up.
i like this story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] you must add this book to your collection[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is very interesting, packed with spiritual elements and tense action. There are only a few sentences that are not quite right when read. I hope this writer will continue to develop in the future in making better stories. Keep the spirit, dear ❤
Every day I am surprised to learn more about other cultures, about writing friends, with other cultural backgrounds ... Filled with unlikely stories, worlds once sophisticated, and high finances. Then magical worlds, of superhuman powers, of intense generational experiences, where parents transmit to their children knowledge, wealth, companies, powers ... It's worth reading on, it's recommended, the synopsis says it all and the chapters go from less to more ...
Hi everyone, introduce me to Ana Bantingan, the owner of this novel. The first published work on Webnovel, actually this novel has been written since 2012, because there is a lot of activity in the real world, this novel has just been published, of course it will have many chapters. So far the story has been revised up to the latest chapter for the convenience of the readers (hikss sorry if your comments and replies are lost because they were swept away so you can read and comment again, as well as give supporting criticism and suggestions, try to use polite language). If there are small mistakes or words that feel ambiguous, please remind me. Then thank you for those who have supported and subscribed to look forward to the continuation of this story ^ _ ^ For readers outside of platform, friends in the real world, online friends, gamers friends, wibu friends too, thank you for visiting this novel, thank you for your support and prayers. I will try to be able to update as often as possible: "D BIG THANKS FOR ALL 😍💕
Suka banget sama ceritanya. Alurnya juga menarik, pokoknya wajib masuk collection, semangat ngetiknya ya kakak ditunggu kelanjutannya ya ....
The story is amazing. Good job, author👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
🤎💚🤍💜💛🧡💛🧡💛❤️🧡💜🤍💚💙💚💙💚🖤💛💛🤎💛🤎🤎💛🖤🧡💜🧡🖤🧡💛🤍💜💙🤎🤍🧡💛🤍💛🧡💛🧡🧡💛❤️💙🧡❤️🤎💛💛💜🤎💛💜🤎❤️💙💛❤️🤎💛💜🤎💛💜💜🤎🤎💜🧡🧡
After all, just be excited about the author. Hopeftheyly in the future she will be more fluent in designing his new novels. good job author😇😇😇😇😇
Amazing, Awesome, Nice, You can wrote Japanese Culture with completed This Book very good story Very very Recommended Wish u all the best, sis, I hope you always success. Good Luck. 🤗🙂
Fuyuki, a young man who has spiritual power. Early in life, looks normal. But all that changed when his father was mysteriously killed. Since then, he has been determined to find his father's killer. The narrative is very good. In my opinion, there are no errors in the use of grammar 🔥🔥👍
i always trying to get some great novel about Japanese culture and boom!! i found this novel. i really enjoyed while i'm reading this, the plot, the characters, i love so much. thanks to ANA BANTINGAN, because you have Made this gergous novel. keep fighting!! ganbarimasyooou!!
Very good story sister👍👍 I don't speak English, but I've read the Indonesian version and it's really really cool😘😘 Good luck sister🙏🙏🙏
this story is good and intriguing. for the author, keep up the spirit, don't give up. you will definitelly be the best...i put it on the bookshelf
Making a novel, even in Bahasa, is a difficult thing. Let alone, in English. With Japan as a setting, it's well done. I could really feel it's Japanese culture. Never give up!💪🏼💪🏼
very good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I was reading the first chapter, and I want to share my thoughts. The author was writing with Japan as the setting. It's quite rare novel to find in this platform. For you who loves to read manga, you can read this as well. I will come again to read next chapters! Fighting!
Revelar Spoiler very good english novel. considering that the author is Indonesian. I recommend it for Wibu. good job sis ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a good story. You can add this to library. Hope everyone can enjoy this. Hope the best for the author. Good job. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Revelar Spoiler Good story, I like the story, very interesting reading. The spirit continues to work, don't give up. [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Writing novels in English, I think it's very difficult. and the author can make this story in English very well. should be appreciated and recommended, especially for manga enthusiasts Good job! Success for you
Japanese novels are really good stories. the plot is also easy to read. the depiction of characters and others is also very detailed. anyway this novel is a recommendation to read. Ganbatte sis
hello! I am one of fans this novel. I already read the indonesia version too. well I never getting bored about the storyline that always makes me surprise. it's feel like you're pulled by the story. I highly recommend you this novel if you like story that have unusual plot. I always wait for your next chapter author ✨😆😁🎉
It's really difficult to make an english translation of a novel, especially from someone that are non-native speaker. But, the author of this story has done it really well. This have a good story, good job. Keep it up.
i like this story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] you must add this book to your collection[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is very interesting, packed with spiritual elements and tense action. There are only a few sentences that are not quite right when read. I hope this writer will continue to develop in the future in making better stories. Keep the spirit, dear ❤
Every day I am surprised to learn more about other cultures, about writing friends, with other cultural backgrounds ... Filled with unlikely stories, worlds once sophisticated, and high finances. Then magical worlds, of superhuman powers, of intense generational experiences, where parents transmit to their children knowledge, wealth, companies, powers ... It's worth reading on, it's recommended, the synopsis says it all and the chapters go from less to more ...
Hi everyone, introduce me to Ana Bantingan, the owner of this novel. The first published work on Webnovel, actually this novel has been written since 2012, because there is a lot of activity in the real world, this novel has just been published, of course it will have many chapters. So far the story has been revised up to the latest chapter for the convenience of the readers (hikss sorry if your comments and replies are lost because they were swept away so you can read and comment again, as well as give supporting criticism and suggestions, try to use polite language). If there are small mistakes or words that feel ambiguous, please remind me. Then thank you for those who have supported and subscribed to look forward to the continuation of this story ^ _ ^ For readers outside of platform, friends in the real world, online friends, gamers friends, wibu friends too, thank you for visiting this novel, thank you for your support and prayers. I will try to be able to update as often as possible: "D BIG THANKS FOR ALL 😍💕