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Ayo kak sambil menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya, ayo mampir ke novel aku kak🙏 ceritanya lumayan ramai dan mirip. Nama novelnya Bali. Sinopsisnya: Setelah teman dekatnya mengalami kecelakaan serius. Seorang pria menawarkan untuk membantunya membayar biaya pengobatan teman dekatnya. Namun pria licik itu tak mau merasa rugi, ia sengaja menjebak Bali untuk memanfaatkan gadis itu. Dan karena tragedi yang menimpa temannya, Bali terjebak dalam situasi yang rumit.
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suka tapi kenapa ya agak bosen bosen gitu, suka tapi ya gimana ya kurang sreg sama ceritanya, tetap semangat mengerjakan cerita ini Thor, never be quite
SEJAUH INI ASIK BACANYA. MC GK SEPERTI KEBANYAKAN YANG JADI PENGIKUT TANG SAN ATAU TEMANNYA ATAU SAUDARANYA. SEMOGA LANJUT SAMPAI TAMAT JANGAN BERHENTI DITENGAH JALAN SEPERTI KEBANYAKAN FANFIC
LANJUTKAN TERUS THOR KARYA NOVELMU SANGAT SERU,DAN ASIK, APALAGI ADA UNSUR BERBAU NTR.NYA (tpi yg penting MC yg bukan kena NTR <egois bukan saya ini hahaha>Jos margondos) DAN LAGI ADA UNSUR HAREM.NYA JADI LEBIH SERU LAGI HA-HA-HA.. INTINYA SEMANGAT TERUS THOR, DAN SEMOGA TIDAK BERHENTI DITENGAH JALAN, ATAU DROOP SEPERTI NOVEL~NOVEL SERU LAINNYA YG PERNAH SAYA BACA..... DAN SETIAP UDAH UP AMPE 10CHAP BAKAL GW DUKUNG DENGAN BATU KUASA BIAR AUTHOR TAMBAH SEMANGAT XIXIXI
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it's fun to read, only the protagonist's up is a little quick in terms of the strengths of the people around him, but other than that the story is very good, keep it up so it's not a sickly or very repetitive story, thanks for your work
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Assalamualaikum, maaf kalau misalnya jarang up gitu, lagi banyak tugas nih, ntar deh digantiin kapan kapan, hehe. Mkshh ya yang udh nyempetin baca dan juga klik favorit buat fanfic ini, dadah smuaa[img=recommend][img=recommend]
pokoknya gue suka banget ama nih fanfic dan gue akan selalu ngedukung author untuk terus membuat fanfic ini menjadi lebih bagus sekian dari saya Penggemar ni Fanfic-Tyran69
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Very interesting fanfic please, the author will release more chapters ......................................
bibi dong Ama Qian renxue harus masuk Harem dong wkwkwk ~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Terimakasih author semoga update terus baru tau ada ni fanfic hehehe [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
.................................................................this is a good story and enjoyable to read..........................................................
baru ketemu nih ff.karena gua orang indo gua dukung dah..........................Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
This is just my kind of story, I am liking it. Although translating it makes me loose a little and confuses me I still understand most of it. If u do not like big harem, beware
Revelar Spoiler Very good fanfic, more chapter author. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Thanks you, Cool fanfic, More chapter please. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Ayo kak sambil menunggu kelanjutan ceritanya, ayo mampir ke novel aku kak🙏 ceritanya lumayan ramai dan mirip. Nama novelnya Bali. Sinopsisnya: Setelah teman dekatnya mengalami kecelakaan serius. Seorang pria menawarkan untuk membantunya membayar biaya pengobatan teman dekatnya. Namun pria licik itu tak mau merasa rugi, ia sengaja menjebak Bali untuk memanfaatkan gadis itu. Dan karena tragedi yang menimpa temannya, Bali terjebak dalam situasi yang rumit.
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suka tapi kenapa ya agak bosen bosen gitu, suka tapi ya gimana ya kurang sreg sama ceritanya, tetap semangat mengerjakan cerita ini Thor, never be quite
SEJAUH INI ASIK BACANYA. MC GK SEPERTI KEBANYAKAN YANG JADI PENGIKUT TANG SAN ATAU TEMANNYA ATAU SAUDARANYA. SEMOGA LANJUT SAMPAI TAMAT JANGAN BERHENTI DITENGAH JALAN SEPERTI KEBANYAKAN FANFIC
LANJUTKAN TERUS THOR KARYA NOVELMU SANGAT SERU,DAN ASIK, APALAGI ADA UNSUR BERBAU NTR.NYA (tpi yg penting MC yg bukan kena NTR <egois bukan saya ini hahaha>Jos margondos) DAN LAGI ADA UNSUR HAREM.NYA JADI LEBIH SERU LAGI HA-HA-HA.. INTINYA SEMANGAT TERUS THOR, DAN SEMOGA TIDAK BERHENTI DITENGAH JALAN, ATAU DROOP SEPERTI NOVEL~NOVEL SERU LAINNYA YG PERNAH SAYA BACA..... DAN SETIAP UDAH UP AMPE 10CHAP BAKAL GW DUKUNG DENGAN BATU KUASA BIAR AUTHOR TAMBAH SEMANGAT XIXIXI
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it's fun to read, only the protagonist's up is a little quick in terms of the strengths of the people around him, but other than that the story is very good, keep it up so it's not a sickly or very repetitive story, thanks for your work
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Assalamualaikum, maaf kalau misalnya jarang up gitu, lagi banyak tugas nih, ntar deh digantiin kapan kapan, hehe. Mkshh ya yang udh nyempetin baca dan juga klik favorit buat fanfic ini, dadah smuaa[img=recommend][img=recommend]
pokoknya gue suka banget ama nih fanfic dan gue akan selalu ngedukung author untuk terus membuat fanfic ini menjadi lebih bagus sekian dari saya Penggemar ni Fanfic-Tyran69
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Very interesting fanfic please, the author will release more chapters ......................................
bibi dong Ama Qian renxue harus masuk Harem dong wkwkwk ~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Terimakasih author semoga update terus baru tau ada ni fanfic hehehe [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
.................................................................this is a good story and enjoyable to read..........................................................
baru ketemu nih ff.karena gua orang indo gua dukung dah..........................Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
This is just my kind of story, I am liking it. Although translating it makes me loose a little and confuses me I still understand most of it. If u do not like big harem, beware
Revelar Spoiler Very good fanfic, more chapter author. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Thanks you, Cool fanfic, More chapter please. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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