War of the Races

LV 12

Culture_Lover

well, here is my comment, please do not be offended by this: the novel has a good writing, heck, that's something difficult to find here in webnovel, the development of the story is good and interesting, also if you like animal girls it will be to your liking, but like any story, this one has something bad (at least for me), the religion professed by their mother and sister makes them prostitutes who let themselves be ****ed for money so that the "beneficiaries" are drunk by the goddess through them (they are called priestesses) they even go as far as get pregnant and they don't care (that's how the MC's sisters were born) and no matter how much you justify with any nonsense that this is their religion or their customs, if the MC said that they will be part of his harem, I think it will give you a bad taste in your mouth if you came for the wincest tag, so I wish you luck author, but I'm out

LV 3

Quadser

Man I like your novel very much and if u can please increase the chapter frequency........,............................................................................... ...........

LV 1

Demon_Hunter78

Found you on Lit and saw in your bio this is where you were going to be putting up more. I’ve enjoyed this story so much. You’ve grown the characters and the world with more and more detail. I can’t wait until the next chapter is released. Looking forward to seeing where our trio is headed, and what the Svartalfar are going to do.

LV 11

JCPort

Pinkender, congratulations. I haven’t enjoyed a fantasy story since I read Lord of the Rings some 30 yeras ago (obviously taking into consideration the difference in the spicyness of the stories). But what makes me enjoy both is the good story telling and character development, and you are doing a great job at that. It looks as if you are creating a saga (Viridian Vale Saga?), and I look forward to your next chapter.

LV 1

Kris_Putnam

Keep up the good work, enjoyable reading and interesting character development. I look forward to the rest of the story........................................................................................................ ...

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

Now that I know the MC doesn't get ccked, I can say I really love this book. it's not really a flaw per se but you spend too much time on character development, 40 percent of the book is about backstories of characters that I wish you could have just given a summary.

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

My unbiased review: The book is really well written and is an interesting read but I still can't get over how open their culture is especially the priestesses of selene that are practically whres. I'm at chapter 9 and I hope the MC doesn't get ccked

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LV 5

highfi

Good story, like the characters and world. The only problem I have is that the ... cultured scenes... aren't as descriptive or as arousing as I like, but none the less still good.

LV 2

DANIEL_KAMBWIRI

The Story(Novel) is amazing and I'd like to ask you to please continue it I have no complaints so far cause overall everything about it is amazing.

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