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Author, as a non-native english speaker, I can pretty much understand all of it. So don't be ashamed to write with syntaxes errors. Continue your story ! Continue to write ! That's not because there is not to much comments this past days that there is no one interest in this journey ! We believe in you Master ! Bring us the mighty chapters !
well, I didn't particularly like it, it has a very vague story, without anything with much depth, the author left this story very rushed (in 115 chapters he was already at level 299!????). The protagonist is not the best, has a weak mentality and seems to be quite naive. the author is also very lazy, posting chapters whenever he wants, and not to mention that for just 1 or 2 chapters a month the chapter size is ridiculous, I even doubt it has more than 1000 words
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this novel simply have no story what's so ever and he looks like a moron who think real world is game and choose accordingly just as game he didn't even bother to check which was stronger and no world description and many other flaws
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The writing is worse than if it was MTL. I can't get into the story because I'd have to re-read half of the chapter three times. If you're hoping for a story you can read without breaking immersion every 5 seconds look elsewhere.
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I have read 100 chapters. Lots of spelling mistake. No edit. I kinda fed up with these mistakes. Please, hire a editor or edit it yourself. So many mistakes. I can't continue this novel anymore.
I like the novel and just hopes it doesn't get dropped ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really appreciate this novel. story is interesting so far and has lot of potentials . It's just not updating and I hope author will continue this novel and not drop it.
While yes the story has potential i cannot get any more from the story itself because of the chapter locks after chapter 18 causing me to really question why the auther did so and I am very mad for that reason as most chapter locks are at chapter 40+
very enjoyable read altogether, spelling errors here and there, don't know why nobody know what the demon race is, I give it a 4.5 out of 5 I would add the final half a star if no reading errors and longer chapters
I like the book so far with its heavy focus on war and kingdom-building which I feel should stay that way as I feel if haram or romance was added it may mess up the balance if not done correctly. For me maybe a little romantic subplot but definitely not haram as I feel that it won't be good chemistry with how the novel is so far. But overall it's a good novel apart from the grammar mistakes and I would love to see more.
I love the story so far it really reminds me of Overlord but less dark,I hope to see more.My only issue is the grammar sometimes is a little bad but overall okay.
This novel is on the lower side of my list but it still on my list. A lot of grammar error but it got better add the story progress. It ranking is now in the top 10 on the list. Thank for the work.
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understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least. the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist. Author does update steadily. the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain. as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.
although there is a lot of mistake it very good I encourage the author to clear out the mistake's early on and please use tags as it brings more readers I assure you and please update more
the grammar and writing style is so atrocious you can barely read the novel. the story advances and stops without purpose, seemingly just a series of random events with no true plot line. the character lacks background, quality and development (might just be the poor writing failing to show any traits). he updates regularly (it's the only good thing about the novel). the world is a carbon copy of a half dozen others without any unique flair or interrsting culture.
best novel I like it I will be in the first time in the first time in the first time in the first time in the first time in
Grammar is so atrocious it destroys the readability of the content. which to be blunt wasn't even up to mediocre standards. Even if your used to re-translating translated Eastern genre novels this one is a hard slog.
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Plz tell me if this is a harem novel because I don't like to read harem novels. Thanks
If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!
Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel. First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you. Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters. Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world. Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided. I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.
it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses. The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers. The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system) The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. 😃
Author, as a non-native english speaker, I can pretty much understand all of it. So don't be ashamed to write with syntaxes errors. Continue your story ! Continue to write ! That's not because there is not to much comments this past days that there is no one interest in this journey ! We believe in you Master ! Bring us the mighty chapters !
well, I didn't particularly like it, it has a very vague story, without anything with much depth, the author left this story very rushed (in 115 chapters he was already at level 299!????). The protagonist is not the best, has a weak mentality and seems to be quite naive. the author is also very lazy, posting chapters whenever he wants, and not to mention that for just 1 or 2 chapters a month the chapter size is ridiculous, I even doubt it has more than 1000 words
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this novel simply have no story what's so ever and he looks like a moron who think real world is game and choose accordingly just as game he didn't even bother to check which was stronger and no world description and many other flaws
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The writing is worse than if it was MTL. I can't get into the story because I'd have to re-read half of the chapter three times. If you're hoping for a story you can read without breaking immersion every 5 seconds look elsewhere.
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I have read 100 chapters. Lots of spelling mistake. No edit. I kinda fed up with these mistakes. Please, hire a editor or edit it yourself. So many mistakes. I can't continue this novel anymore.
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I really appreciate this novel. story is interesting so far and has lot of potentials . It's just not updating and I hope author will continue this novel and not drop it.
While yes the story has potential i cannot get any more from the story itself because of the chapter locks after chapter 18 causing me to really question why the auther did so and I am very mad for that reason as most chapter locks are at chapter 40+
very enjoyable read altogether, spelling errors here and there, don't know why nobody know what the demon race is, I give it a 4.5 out of 5 I would add the final half a star if no reading errors and longer chapters
I like the book so far with its heavy focus on war and kingdom-building which I feel should stay that way as I feel if haram or romance was added it may mess up the balance if not done correctly. For me maybe a little romantic subplot but definitely not haram as I feel that it won't be good chemistry with how the novel is so far. But overall it's a good novel apart from the grammar mistakes and I would love to see more.
I love the story so far it really reminds me of Overlord but less dark,I hope to see more.My only issue is the grammar sometimes is a little bad but overall okay.
This novel is on the lower side of my list but it still on my list. A lot of grammar error but it got better add the story progress. It ranking is now in the top 10 on the list. Thank for the work.
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need free chapters and lots of update on the story ............................ ,...........................................................
understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least. the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist. Author does update steadily. the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain. as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.
although there is a lot of mistake it very good I encourage the author to clear out the mistake's early on and please use tags as it brings more readers I assure you and please update more
the grammar and writing style is so atrocious you can barely read the novel. the story advances and stops without purpose, seemingly just a series of random events with no true plot line. the character lacks background, quality and development (might just be the poor writing failing to show any traits). he updates regularly (it's the only good thing about the novel). the world is a carbon copy of a half dozen others without any unique flair or interrsting culture.
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Grammar is so atrocious it destroys the readability of the content. which to be blunt wasn't even up to mediocre standards. Even if your used to re-translating translated Eastern genre novels this one is a hard slog.
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Plz tell me if this is a harem novel because I don't like to read harem novels. Thanks
If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!
Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel. First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you. Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters. Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world. Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided. I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.
it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.
Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses. The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers. The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system) The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. 😃