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This has got to be the worst sh*t I've ever seen. This is just plain TRASH. First of all, Nick Fury would never panic, he's the NICK FURY, and also don't read this, this is just a trash chinese fanfiction with overconfident and arrogant attention-wh*re MC(Most chapters are just full of people exaggerating things MC does like how handsome his face is, how he strong he is, blah blah blah,...).
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he dropped it he says BECAUSE HE DIDNT GET STONES which we couldnt give him cause the novel didnt support it ... fck logic ... anyway dont read from this person
this story cool dont drop it and about the stone probpem. its not our (reader) fault this is webnovel fault because we cant find vote button on your story. so i propose that how about you ask webnovel about this problem if they didnt fix it maybe we (reader) can vote your other story to give you stone? how about that?
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Its really good,considering this is a fanfic.Though the experience system should just be like an experience and learn type of system. It's so the Mc doesn't appear too strong at the beginning. It should have taken a page out of "Super Detective in a Fictional World". Learning the abilities of other universes is already OP enough. I mean if one learnt ki from Dragon Ball,with a power level of 140-150,you could destroy something the size of the moon. Haki is another OP ability after all you could deal damage to a blunt resistant superhuman,like Mr.Fantastic or Hydro Man.And that's not even considering the new information about it. Just saying author-san should have started smaller,then snowballed it to higher stakes.
what is with this level of slowness? 38 chapters still a day in the story is not over. This gives a new meaning to slow-paced novels. please increase the speed a little bit.
Man, the novel is mix between marvel and cultivation, its okay but please even if you translated it through MTL, didn't you at least read it yourself before posting it man, the meaning of the work completely lost in the transition man, pls check it and post it.
the only thing I saw in the first 10 chapters was how shocking the MCs abilitys are for the marvel heroes. This novel has a serious case of cringerites
The translation is utter dog shit. The sentences sometimes make no sense, dont waste your time on this
I have no problems with people translating fanfics from Chinese, even with bad quality, I don't even have problems with them creating a patreon or something. The problem starts when, in addition to the bad translations, the translator pretends it is his original work.
Really shitty chinese translation DO NOT READ IF YOU VALUE BRAIN CELLS . . . . . . . . ,. ,. , , , , , . , . ,, , . . . . . . . .
i like it. it could use a bit of work but all aroud think it is good also i love cats dont know what that has to do with anything i just love cats
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Kurasa ini sangat bagus , tolong lanjutkan. Kuharap penulis tidak perlu terlalu mementingkan kritikan dari yang lain, anggap saja itu semua saya
impossible to be read. too many grammar mistakes . possibly MTL translated . do not recommend reading it unless you have patience to understand it(which is near impossible due to mistakes)
Chinese translated novels are the worse they don't even research western culture and the way they speak when translated doesn't have anything to do with the movie or how they act
Writing quality is beyond poor. Grammar is some of the worst I've seen on the site which is really bad. When characters speak the words they say dont fit the characters. Its more like this is a cultivation novel where everyone except the MC is mentally challenged. Stability of Updates is not so great mostly because the grammar is so poor. Story Development cant say much as it hurt my brain to read until chapter 4. Character design is quite poor, entirly 2D no background all other characters seem to follow. none of the Avengers question anything. Cant say anthing about world background as I cant read the story anymore.
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Ultimately I like the idea behind this story and even the plot direction but not the way it is carried out. I will list some but not all the issues I have found below. The character interactions are very flat and unrealistic. This is a pretty typical case of a overdone power fantasy. The pacing is weird and off. We should have had 15 to 30 chapters of same length to get introduced to the character before the beginning chapters. This doesn't mean that we couldn't have started with reincarnation as but that you need to flesh out the characters before starting actions scenes. I like what having him thrown into the action does for the MC's character motivations. So maybe it should start with his previous life and give us a reason as to why he jumps into the action. I strongly recommend not having side characters show anything other than a relatively calm reaction to his abilities at this point outside of the fist 2 times he shows different abilities than the first. Their reactions and personality so far have been extremely flat and boring. Lastly none of this should mean you so a rewrite in fact I strongly recommend against that. Use what of my advice or others is useful to adapt and improve the rest of the story and use it as a learning experience. The writing quality overall is actually pretty decent and shows that you have potential to improve further.
My eyes are bleeding ? first This is a mtl novel ,second it’s a Marvel fanfiction or a chinese cultivation novel ? ...................................
do not waste your time here or any other of this leeches translations. None of them are his, and even if he is translating them, they are literally worst than sub par. I didnt read them because just from a glance and not only his profile but at the others reviews, you can tell he is only doing this for patreon to make a quick buck off someone else's work. get a real job fam
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This has got to be the worst sh*t I've ever seen. This is just plain TRASH. First of all, Nick Fury would never panic, he's the NICK FURY, and also don't read this, this is just a trash chinese fanfiction with overconfident and arrogant attention-wh*re MC(Most chapters are just full of people exaggerating things MC does like how handsome his face is, how he strong he is, blah blah blah,...).
DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!! DONT READ IT IF YOU LOVE YOUR BRAIN CELLS !!!!!
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he dropped it he says BECAUSE HE DIDNT GET STONES which we couldnt give him cause the novel didnt support it ... fck logic ... anyway dont read from this person
this story cool dont drop it and about the stone probpem. its not our (reader) fault this is webnovel fault because we cant find vote button on your story. so i propose that how about you ask webnovel about this problem if they didnt fix it maybe we (reader) can vote your other story to give you stone? how about that?
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Its really good,considering this is a fanfic.Though the experience system should just be like an experience and learn type of system. It's so the Mc doesn't appear too strong at the beginning. It should have taken a page out of "Super Detective in a Fictional World". Learning the abilities of other universes is already OP enough. I mean if one learnt ki from Dragon Ball,with a power level of 140-150,you could destroy something the size of the moon. Haki is another OP ability after all you could deal damage to a blunt resistant superhuman,like Mr.Fantastic or Hydro Man.And that's not even considering the new information about it. Just saying author-san should have started smaller,then snowballed it to higher stakes.
what is with this level of slowness? 38 chapters still a day in the story is not over. This gives a new meaning to slow-paced novels. please increase the speed a little bit.
Man, the novel is mix between marvel and cultivation, its okay but please even if you translated it through MTL, didn't you at least read it yourself before posting it man, the meaning of the work completely lost in the transition man, pls check it and post it.
the only thing I saw in the first 10 chapters was how shocking the MCs abilitys are for the marvel heroes. This novel has a serious case of cringerites
The translation is utter dog shit. The sentences sometimes make no sense, dont waste your time on this
I have no problems with people translating fanfics from Chinese, even with bad quality, I don't even have problems with them creating a patreon or something. The problem starts when, in addition to the bad translations, the translator pretends it is his original work.
Really shitty chinese translation DO NOT READ IF YOU VALUE BRAIN CELLS . . . . . . . . ,. ,. , , , , , . , . ,, , . . . . . . . .
i like it. it could use a bit of work but all aroud think it is good also i love cats dont know what that has to do with anything i just love cats
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Kurasa ini sangat bagus , tolong lanjutkan. Kuharap penulis tidak perlu terlalu mementingkan kritikan dari yang lain, anggap saja itu semua saya
impossible to be read. too many grammar mistakes . possibly MTL translated . do not recommend reading it unless you have patience to understand it(which is near impossible due to mistakes)
Chinese translated novels are the worse they don't even research western culture and the way they speak when translated doesn't have anything to do with the movie or how they act
Writing quality is beyond poor. Grammar is some of the worst I've seen on the site which is really bad. When characters speak the words they say dont fit the characters. Its more like this is a cultivation novel where everyone except the MC is mentally challenged. Stability of Updates is not so great mostly because the grammar is so poor. Story Development cant say much as it hurt my brain to read until chapter 4. Character design is quite poor, entirly 2D no background all other characters seem to follow. none of the Avengers question anything. Cant say anthing about world background as I cant read the story anymore.
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Ultimately I like the idea behind this story and even the plot direction but not the way it is carried out. I will list some but not all the issues I have found below. The character interactions are very flat and unrealistic. This is a pretty typical case of a overdone power fantasy. The pacing is weird and off. We should have had 15 to 30 chapters of same length to get introduced to the character before the beginning chapters. This doesn't mean that we couldn't have started with reincarnation as but that you need to flesh out the characters before starting actions scenes. I like what having him thrown into the action does for the MC's character motivations. So maybe it should start with his previous life and give us a reason as to why he jumps into the action. I strongly recommend not having side characters show anything other than a relatively calm reaction to his abilities at this point outside of the fist 2 times he shows different abilities than the first. Their reactions and personality so far have been extremely flat and boring. Lastly none of this should mean you so a rewrite in fact I strongly recommend against that. Use what of my advice or others is useful to adapt and improve the rest of the story and use it as a learning experience. The writing quality overall is actually pretty decent and shows that you have potential to improve further.
My eyes are bleeding ? first This is a mtl novel ,second it’s a Marvel fanfiction or a chinese cultivation novel ? ...................................
do not waste your time here or any other of this leeches translations. None of them are his, and even if he is translating them, they are literally worst than sub par. I didnt read them because just from a glance and not only his profile but at the others reviews, you can tell he is only doing this for patreon to make a quick buck off someone else's work. get a real job fam
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Please put more on this. Fiction book it's awesome