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Pohaa, como você me escreve sobre um mundo sem saber nada sobre ? Pelo menos uma pesquisa básica você deveria ter feito, um Deus de Atg com um espirro destruiria um mundo inferior é realmente vergonhoso, se for alguém que não conhece poderia até engolir a história
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........................................................................................... REALMENTE EL PEOR MC QUE EH VISTO EN TODO WEBNOVEL, PRACTICAMENTE EN EL PRIMER CAPITULO LE DICE EN TODA LA CARA QUE A LAS DE GRUPO DEL CHAT QUE NO EXISTE DE PRIMERA Y LE CHUPA 1 HUEVO PRACTICAMENTE NADA DE CONSIDERACION POR DAÑO PSICOLOGICO
O começo eu achei mais ou menos, aí as coisas foram piorando, a personalidade do MC mudou muito sem um bom motivo é tem outros problemas ...................
just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something. just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something. just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something.
sayang sekali bahwa novel ini Dropped, padahal ini novel bagus untuk tipe Novel Bercerita Group Chat multiverse, dan juga unsur ceritanya gak basa basi langsung to the point, tapi sayangnya udah dropped xD
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Its good but some of the words or grammar is wrong but I like the story not like the usual we see...,..........,............................
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It is a very good book. However, when will you release another chapter because I am waiting for a month now and you still have not release another chapter or volume at all.
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Hey dude this story is a really good one the rest that i read aren’t really much background or like character info Well except Anihalation maker i really dont know how to spell that word any ur alive right?
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........................................................................................... REALMENTE EL PEOR MC QUE EH VISTO EN TODO WEBNOVEL, PRACTICAMENTE EN EL PRIMER CAPITULO LE DICE EN TODA LA CARA QUE A LAS DE GRUPO DEL CHAT QUE NO EXISTE DE PRIMERA Y LE CHUPA 1 HUEVO PRACTICAMENTE NADA DE CONSIDERACION POR DAÑO PSICOLOGICO
O começo eu achei mais ou menos, aí as coisas foram piorando, a personalidade do MC mudou muito sem um bom motivo é tem outros problemas ...................
just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something. just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something. just illogical and stupid nonsense. the author was clearly under something.
sayang sekali bahwa novel ini Dropped, padahal ini novel bagus untuk tipe Novel Bercerita Group Chat multiverse, dan juga unsur ceritanya gak basa basi langsung to the point, tapi sayangnya udah dropped xD
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]...........When will u start updating this.......
When the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter when the chapter
are u gonna drop this author????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? pls dont................................................................
Its good but some of the words or grammar is wrong but I like the story not like the usual we see...,..........,............................
nonoonononononononoonononononononoononononoonononononoononononooonononoononononononononoononononomomooonooononoonoononononononoonooononnononnonnononononononononononononononnonoonn
more more more more more more more more more more more more 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 more more more more more more more more more more more more 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Revelar Spoiler when are u gonna write again??? hi Aisha kg djdndjdjshsksjd kg dhendjxbs kg djcjdbd kg fix kg djxkcjdbdjdkcjdjdbx kg CBS kg ejdkdhs NV end kg casks kg fix NV did oh did kg dkd[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It is a very good book. However, when will you release another chapter because I am waiting for a month now and you still have not release another chapter or volume at all.
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Hey dude this story is a really good one the rest that i read aren’t really much background or like character info Well except Anihalation maker i really dont know how to spell that word any ur alive right?
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