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The Dark Past

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Autor: Joecurie

4.31 (13 Avaliações)

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Left behind without a note to what could have happened to their parents not calling them as promised,while it's more than a month they were gone.It is mysterious to then hear that their parents disappeared into thin air without a trace. Such news can be a devastating one to hear.... Catherine and Perry couldn't have imagined not seeing their parents again. Days after, both girls began to have series of nightmares that came into reality and are left to decide whether to succumb to it's occurrence or find out the truth about why they are having such dreams.

  1. Joecurie
    Joecurie Contribuído 14
  2. Mala_Smith
    Mala_Smith Contribuído 2
  3. Emmanuel_9323
    Emmanuel_9323 Contribuído 1

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    Ademola_Emmanuel_8250

    Wow!!! I love the starting point of this novel💯 it's more original and amazing to read. Please update more... you will make a good writer 😉 😎✨❤️💯🥰

    4yr
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    Joecurie

    I see potentials of you becoming a great writer😎 story is creative and interesting, keep writing. Update consistently and let's see where the story is leading✨✨❤️❤️❤️

    4yr
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    DaoistE7ls3i

    I'm quite interested in this story and feel you should keep it up....the storyline is creative and magnificent. Please,update more often....I give a good rating

    4yr
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    Proteety_Promi

    The story has potential, but there are a few things that should be noted by the author. Firstly, punctuation. You barely use any punctuation in dialogues! It makes the story less attractive and interesting though it can be fixed. Secondly, the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Just maybe add a few more things to make it a bit clearer. Feel free to disagree!

    3yr
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    Oluwasanmi_Ola

    Nice story... beautiful story development. You have the potential to become a great writer❤️ Keep writing and you will get there ... Don't stop updating.

    4yr
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    Adewole_Obisesan

    Reading your chapter 14,you got me there.. lol It has suspense and the story line is creative😎I wish too see more characters you had input into the book Nice one❤️

    4yr
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    Adewole_Obisesan

    Welcome back Joecurie💜 I'm glad to see you came up with a nice storyline and one with suspense. Don't relent at what you do best, breakthrough soon Keep it up 💯

    3yr
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    Ademola_Emmanuel_8250

    I'm loving the way you give suspense in your story it showed you understand how you want your story line to look like. It's great keep it up and I'm sure you had become a good writer in no time 💚💚

    3yr
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    Joecurie

    It's been a while but I hope you had be back with a really nice and captivating continuous story. Give the best you can and never stop pushing,I'm definitely sure you are gonna be great💯💯💯

    3yr
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    Molly_Sun_2848

    Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom@gmail.com  We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!

    3yr
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    Shammah_John

    This is author has the makings of a good writer in a couple years. Your work is captivating and very enjoyable. I can't wait to digest everything you have to offer with it.

    3yr
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    Joecurie

    Amazing💯 Been a long time you wrote a new chapter ?? We are waiting. It's too early to put a stop to it. Come back with a force and a more constructive and interesting storyline.

    2yr
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    Joseph_Obisesan_7621

    A nice story. I love the construction of your story it has potential in it and it's sure bound to have a good rating from me. Write more and explore your mind more.

    3yr
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