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A temruly amazing short read. Though there were grammar and spelling errors here and there... the story development was great. Would have been perfect if Yelle and James have their happy ending as well. A highly recommended short read 🥰
A beautiful love story. i so envy the FL who has great friends and ML is true to his love till the end. Am so glad with the happy ending too.
Enjoyed this story so much it was hard to put down. The quality of writing is poor: poor sentence structure and wrong use of pronouns plague it. But the plot and char acters are excellent.
this Was Just Amazing af So Good Yet so Heartwarming Just Thank you for this Amazing Novel and I will Forever love this as One of the Most Amazing Novel I have ever Read
I was so invested in this story, I did not expect the outcome at all. I really love how all characters were well described.Even the plot was well developed . I love how sweet the story ending was!
Intelligent , logic , well done , good continuity. Writter , keep going. We wait others story Congratulations .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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love to continue reading,love the story line,very interesting,but want them to increase the writing process and improve their grammar skill thanks
Short story but yaa...nice one...It was not a perfect story but a realistic story because every love will have some miscommunication first ...its not like every couple can truly share their feelings at fresh...for that they need some fights, jealously feeling etc...but once they start to share its an unbreakable bond... It was a enjoable story...grt job author...
thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story that I've enjoyed reading the whole time, short but very sweet story. Have a wonderful safe day to you.
it was great short story.. not much complications.. all sweetness .. great ..!!!but im hoping for James Maru and Yelle love story..🙏❤️🤣 hope it will romantic comedy.. and full of sweet moments...🙏🙏please..
I like short story; and these one is good. I recommend this to all hopeless romantic. you will enjoy the love story of Maru and Mara. Simple and yet entertaining.
This story was a great read! I couldn’t stop reading the emotional twists and turns of unrequited young crushes that developed in the arranged marriage. ❤️
I doubt the other reviewers even read the novel tbh. It's page after page of this extremely insecure woman who harpers on and on about her husband's ex and how he still has to love the ex, while rejecting the love he shows for her. She's a black hole of wanting to be loved while not letting people love her out of fear that they one day will stop doing so. Read this if you like things and situations repeated ad nauseam.
A typical arranged marriage - A short novel but worth reading ☺️. But not all Love Stories has a good happily ever after but " Business Wife " satisfies the readers 😁
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although typical arranged marriage story, still the story has different twist and not a boring type.[img=recommend] I also like it , coz its not that long novel :-)
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I like how quick-witted the FL is and I live her personality she doesn't have high hopes in her life and she doesnt even have plans for her life cause bcs shes a business wife
The story goes well so far. It only needs some more editing and I can see few spelling errors. Anyway the story is quite interesting. Best wishes to the creator 💖
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A temruly amazing short read. Though there were grammar and spelling errors here and there... the story development was great. Would have been perfect if Yelle and James have their happy ending as well. A highly recommended short read 🥰
A beautiful love story. i so envy the FL who has great friends and ML is true to his love till the end. Am so glad with the happy ending too.
Enjoyed this story so much it was hard to put down. The quality of writing is poor: poor sentence structure and wrong use of pronouns plague it. But the plot and char acters are excellent.
this Was Just Amazing af So Good Yet so Heartwarming Just Thank you for this Amazing Novel and I will Forever love this as One of the Most Amazing Novel I have ever Read
I was so invested in this story, I did not expect the outcome at all. I really love how all characters were well described.Even the plot was well developed . I love how sweet the story ending was!
Intelligent , logic , well done , good continuity. Writter , keep going. We wait others story Congratulations .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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love to continue reading,love the story line,very interesting,but want them to increase the writing process and improve their grammar skill thanks
Short story but yaa...nice one...It was not a perfect story but a realistic story because every love will have some miscommunication first ...its not like every couple can truly share their feelings at fresh...for that they need some fights, jealously feeling etc...but once they start to share its an unbreakable bond... It was a enjoable story...grt job author...
thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story that I've enjoyed reading the whole time, short but very sweet story. Have a wonderful safe day to you.
it was great short story.. not much complications.. all sweetness .. great ..!!!but im hoping for James Maru and Yelle love story..🙏❤️🤣 hope it will romantic comedy.. and full of sweet moments...🙏🙏please..
I like short story; and these one is good. I recommend this to all hopeless romantic. you will enjoy the love story of Maru and Mara. Simple and yet entertaining.
This story was a great read! I couldn’t stop reading the emotional twists and turns of unrequited young crushes that developed in the arranged marriage. ❤️
I doubt the other reviewers even read the novel tbh. It's page after page of this extremely insecure woman who harpers on and on about her husband's ex and how he still has to love the ex, while rejecting the love he shows for her. She's a black hole of wanting to be loved while not letting people love her out of fear that they one day will stop doing so. Read this if you like things and situations repeated ad nauseam.
A typical arranged marriage - A short novel but worth reading ☺️. But not all Love Stories has a good happily ever after but " Business Wife " satisfies the readers 😁
wydjxnbxnxodjwhdbnckfkeufjcmdlworjfjdndhgeyeifkxnsgeydifjxnsgndmdkeeoeohdhdhdhdjdjjdjdyeidkxnxhxhdnrhsyffdndkiwydgdhsjwieudhdbxnskdixhhdjdjejdj
although typical arranged marriage story, still the story has different twist and not a boring type.[img=recommend] I also like it , coz its not that long novel :-)
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I like how quick-witted the FL is and I live her personality she doesn't have high hopes in her life and she doesnt even have plans for her life cause bcs shes a business wife
The story goes well so far. It only needs some more editing and I can see few spelling errors. Anyway the story is quite interesting. Best wishes to the creator 💖
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I loved this story, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I really really want you to write more... You know it's easy to please readers, but to make a writer fan of yourself is a great thing....😍😍😍😍😍😍 I sincerely hope that you keep on writing....
💞🥰🥰🤍💞💌😘💌🧡💌💛💖💖🤍🧡😍💝😍💘🖤🤎🖤💓💓❣️💓🥰💛🖤🧡🥰😘💞🥰😍😘😍💘😍💕🖤💓😍💓💛😍❤️❣️😘🥰❤️💌🤎🤍🤎💓😍😘🥰💞😍💘❣️💘😍🤎🖤💓🤍💛🤍😘🥰💞😍💘
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Did you know that WN inflates your book views by x10? That means for one true genuine read or view you have it is inflated 10 times in fake views. Not to mention they don't protect your work from bots inflating your reads and stealing your content for pirate sites. Additionally, contracts with WN are boderline exploitative. Some big famous WN writers with millions of views (which by the way that million is not actually a million due to fake inflated views), only earn about 10-20% of the revenue they should be earning for writing thousands of words every day. And then on the reader side of the equation, WN just straight up doesn't care and readers pay insane amount of fees but only about 5% of that actually goes to the writers. Enough is enough. No more can we allow writers or readers to be taken advantage of. Now is the time for change. Now is the time for another option. Audertist Novels is made by writers and readers designed for all of us, and we need your help to get the word out about Audertist Novels. Audertist Novels is here to be the game changer in online reading and writing. It is one of the *first and only online writing/novel reading sites to utilize a community monetization system where you can earn real world cash just from interacting on the site through reading AND writing. So creating review clubs and cover shops or commenting and reading each other's works? You can earn money. The system is simple. Your site interactivity aka: comments, liking a book, visiting the site, reading books, writing books, posting chapters, and more. All of these things are ways you can earn site coins which are exchanged for real world cash. The higher site interactivity from the community the higher the exchange rate from coin to real world money increases. So, whether you're a reader or a writer, the more we earn, the more you earn. Let make waves together. Join us now and share this message around. If you are sharing this message, thanks. You are an agent of change here to revolutionize the online writing and reading world. audertist.com novels.audertist.com