Emotional Pressure

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CodeW

Hey, Gideon. I want to say that you write with a concise, yet descriptive style. You fleshed out the characters very well, and there isn't a lot of grammar mistakes. I admittedly don't read a lot of romance. But, from what I can say with the first five chapters (and the synopsis)- I can feel that the leading MC's will have a cute relationship. The male MC's conflict is also understandable. Overall, your writing is excellent. Wish you good luck on your writing journey. Sincerely, CodeW

LV 1

Shiza_Mumtaz

Seamless storyline. Beautifully written. Has me absolutely hooked. The character development is intricate. I'd highly suggest you add it to your library because you wouldn't want to miss any updates.

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Jozan

YOW! GRAMMAR IS 10/10 PUNCTUATION IS 10/10. Blue is a muscle head basketball player (possible Chad💪🏾😎🤳🏾) Blue seems to be a hot young independent lady who don't need no man but wants a man 😂😂

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daniella19

The narrative style is very clear and concise, and the plot development is on point. The author did good with the grammatical structure. I love the character of Gary,and would love to see more!

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CaptainChaos0301

haha. There are a few spelling mistakes, but besides that, this is good reading content. Good Luck with the story author! I'm not really gonna say anything now without spoiling... So I suggest reading it for yourself!

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Darkiepen

The novel has a nice and fascinating plot. The grammar and punctuation are appropriate and written properly. The characters are interesting too.

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sharrnister

Hi Author! So far, this is certainly interesting, I'm a bit excited about how these two would work out. And also I love how you named the chapters, it's pretty amazing! haha keep up the good work! I hope you'll write more

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Heart59

Awesome book! Keep up the excellent work![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Gideon_Johnson

My first book Please put down reviews to motivate my work And kindly comment on the parts you find unpleasing . Recommend it as well. Thank you. -Author

Had to read the book all over again.its really a tight gripping story.Has a touch of teenage romance and it's really explicit. Love take from the first chapter to the next

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kuhaku_sora

The story is well-made and there are hardly any grammatical errors in this book. I would recommend it to anyone if I could! The scenes are very progressive and fun to read! Good job, author!