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it is a great book I found it interesting and fun to read please don't drop........................................................... .....
awesome story. I love it .please more .💯👊👌🤘🤘🤩😎❤😋😝👻🥳😤😌😂😉🔰😊😘😍💕😭👝😛😛😃🤣✌✌😄😇😜🤓🤑🙏🙂😆😁🥰😉🔰😊😘😍😍😭👝😛😛😃😃😂😌😤🥳👻👻😝😝😋😋❤😎🤩👍🤘👌👊💯
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
in the next work to write or if you write this again it puts the MC with a high IQ and an omega-level mutant power that is already good, an omega mutant is very underestimated, most of them can beat all the MCU's primary avengers, thor the strongest still depended on the hammer, not to mention that omega-level mutants need to evolve and OP is not born right from the start
No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author. No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author.No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author.
La historia esta buena, el ritmo es un poco acelerado pero creo que es por que solo es temas de prólogo aun no inicia la trama(espero, porque si no entonces perdería puntos), el MC tarda bastante en describirse pero almenos se hace, la historia va bien solo falta más caps
Good points + You didn't try to make a bad guy of his father (or if you tried you failed). + Good grammar. + He didn't yearn for familial love nor did he swear to protect his loved ones as soon as he reincarnated. That's rarer than you would think. + He entertains the possibility of killing with glee. It gives me hope. + He doesn't seem to be Superman. Bad points - Some slight inconsistencies? Like him asking for cosmic energy dimension but getting a sun energy one. - The chapters were too long at the beginning. - His choice of when, where and as whom to reincarnate. - The fact he couldn't be cloned despite not wishing for it. - He has done some weird things but I'm assuming that he has some sinister plot in mind. - His deplorable clothing tastes. Neutral points • He pussied out a little when it comes to killing (through a screen) but there was no useless drama. • I had so much hope for the AI • What's his goal? I bookmarked it for now. I recommend it
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Looks interesting and good. .140 words. Looks interesting and good. .140 words.Looks interesting and good. .140 words.Looks interesting and good. .140 words.
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I have enjoyed this story thus far. It's a bit fast for my taste, then again thats personal and not indicative of the stories quality. However, for this reason I gave averag ratings for caracter and world background. This is a worthwhile read if you ran out of chapters elsewhere. The writing is decent pleasant and I feel like the author places some effort into it. Not a fan of the lolita, but that's just me again. Not a fan of power stealing when you are already op af, as it may lower the quality of the overall originality and impact of the mc. Last thoughts, this is certainly better than most I have read on this platform/place evident by me taking yime to leave a review. Maby it's worth your time aswell. Keep up the good work author, I hope you don't run out of steam early on. Happy holidays to all those reading this later in the year.
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it is a great book I found it interesting and fun to read please don't drop........................................................... .....
awesome story. I love it .please more .💯👊👌🤘🤘🤩😎❤😋😝👻🥳😤😌😂😉🔰😊😘😍💕😭👝😛😛😃🤣✌✌😄😇😜🤓🤑🙏🙂😆😁🥰😉🔰😊😘😍😍😭👝😛😛😃😃😂😌😤🥳👻👻😝😝😋😋❤😎🤩👍🤘👌👊💯
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
in the next work to write or if you write this again it puts the MC with a high IQ and an omega-level mutant power that is already good, an omega mutant is very underestimated, most of them can beat all the MCU's primary avengers, thor the strongest still depended on the hammer, not to mention that omega-level mutants need to evolve and OP is not born right from the start
No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author. No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author.No. Sad that the story is being paused. Take care author.
La historia esta buena, el ritmo es un poco acelerado pero creo que es por que solo es temas de prólogo aun no inicia la trama(espero, porque si no entonces perdería puntos), el MC tarda bastante en describirse pero almenos se hace, la historia va bien solo falta más caps
Good points + You didn't try to make a bad guy of his father (or if you tried you failed). + Good grammar. + He didn't yearn for familial love nor did he swear to protect his loved ones as soon as he reincarnated. That's rarer than you would think. + He entertains the possibility of killing with glee. It gives me hope. + He doesn't seem to be Superman. Bad points - Some slight inconsistencies? Like him asking for cosmic energy dimension but getting a sun energy one. - The chapters were too long at the beginning. - His choice of when, where and as whom to reincarnate. - The fact he couldn't be cloned despite not wishing for it. - He has done some weird things but I'm assuming that he has some sinister plot in mind. - His deplorable clothing tastes. Neutral points • He pussied out a little when it comes to killing (through a screen) but there was no useless drama. • I had so much hope for the AI • What's his goal? I bookmarked it for now. I recommend it
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Its getting excited. Really excited for more.Its getting excited. Really excited for more.Its getting excited. Really excited for more.Its getting excited. Really excited for more.
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Looks interesting and good. .140 words. Looks interesting and good. .140 words.Looks interesting and good. .140 words.Looks interesting and good. .140 words.
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I have enjoyed this story thus far. It's a bit fast for my taste, then again thats personal and not indicative of the stories quality. However, for this reason I gave averag ratings for caracter and world background. This is a worthwhile read if you ran out of chapters elsewhere. The writing is decent pleasant and I feel like the author places some effort into it. Not a fan of the lolita, but that's just me again. Not a fan of power stealing when you are already op af, as it may lower the quality of the overall originality and impact of the mc. Last thoughts, this is certainly better than most I have read on this platform/place evident by me taking yime to leave a review. Maby it's worth your time aswell. Keep up the good work author, I hope you don't run out of steam early on. Happy holidays to all those reading this later in the year.
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