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MC known from my other novel, thanks to the joke of God Weles, is reborn in the times of the Vikings ... the Vikings series.
Here, more than the previous novel, I will focus on beliefs, demons and Slavic traditions. The MC will have his powers and knowledge ...
Of course, there will also be a lot of focus on the history ... Unfortunately, the creators of the series made some mistakes that I do not intend to correct ... like Rollo was not Ragnar's brother ... and Ivar, instead of being a cripple, could be impotent.
If there are any reviews, let them be honest, it's a pity that someone would waste time on something that is not to their liking.
MC is not a good man, he is a murderer, sadist, manipulator and womanizer. This novel has no safe spaces, so anyone who gets offended ... I don't give a shit.
Chapters will appear not too often. The Commonwealth remains my main focus.
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Escreva uma avaliaçãoHello, ladies and gentlemen! I came across the author's work when he was still writing a book called the commonwealth and only after the commonwealth began to read this book. To bring up to date those who have not yet read or are planning to read. For such people, I write all this, I tried to highlight different aspects of the book, so that it is clear to you and it is easier for you to decide whether to read it or not. By the way, this is written after reading all the available 127 chapters. and yes, forgive me for my terrible English, as my teacher used to say, what are you doing here with such street English? 1. The Main Character. What I like is that as a person living for the second time (and for this book, living for the fourth time) He behaves exactly like a human being. Not like a robot, a hero, a CHOSEN ONE, and so on. What do I mean by that? In the first life, he died as an *****, and after rebirth, he no longer behaves like a child. In his head, he is already a formed person, and when they try to bring him up as a child, where they teach him all sorts of virtues, it does not affect him. In his second life, he became a ruler, and after living in the skin of a ruler, it is clear that he cannot be a farmer. His memory was not erased, he remembers his past life and, accordingly, his personality changes minimally. You can't expect a man who has ruled for so long to become an ordinary citizen. So, all the cruelty and inhumanity of the main character is explained. He's not bad because he's bad. He thinks and acts like a ruler, and for his own purposes he can kill innocent people and even children. For him, they are not people, but a resource, like metal, stone, and so on. He is also not a believer, although he has personally seen God. He can do anything to achieve his goals, he does not care about race, faith, morality, and so on. But as a ruler, he knows how to behave in public, so he is like a modern politician (a hypocrite) who was sent to the time of the Vikings). Those who have read the Commonwealth will understand the main character. For we have seen him transform into what he is now. But for beginners, it can seem that the author is a racist-fascist-Decepticon and generally an a*shole. I can only advise such people to read the Commonwealth. 2. History and facts. The book describes the facts from both the series and the story. The main character is not limited to only the events from the series, but also with a real story. So this is not just a copy-paste of the series, the author's content in the book is enough. 3. Characters. Many characters, both from the series and created by the author. A lot of attention is not paid to them, but the minimum familiarization with them is still present. No surreal characters, they don't act like morons, or weird for the 8th century. Although, stoned mushroom characters and drug trip here is clearly not enough)(I mean the Vikings, with their hallucinogenic mushrooms.) 4. Construction of the city and the army. Thinking here is not necessary, something to tell, and so it is clear to everyone. Although it could have been better if the author had paid enough attention to them. 5. Mysticism. The main character lives in a world where mysticism really exists. Much has been written about this in the opening chapters, but it is rarely mentioned in the middle and beyond. So there are all sorts of vengeful spirits, house-spirits, and so on. Also, the main character has gifts from the Slavic gods. 6. War. Many wars, battles, from internal to the conquest of external enemies. Everything is described more or less well, there are no anime gods-battles, although the main character tried to be one and almost died). There are not enough details and descriptions of the preparation for war, the training of soldiers, the creation of weapons, the provision of food for soldiers, and the consequences of the war itself. Of course, for the Vikings, the consequence is not enough, which means they don't care about it. The main thing is to die in a glorious battle and go feast in the halls of Odin. But from the point of view of the rulers, this should be taken into account, but again, the book almost does not pay attention to this. That's all I could think of, I might have missed a few things, but I think that's enough. Personally, I liked the book, I can not say that it is a masterpiece, but it is quite a good book. It is also worth mentioning the author, he is a person who knows what author's pride is. It may sound far-fetched, but after 2 months of active reading in Webnovel, this is one of the few authors who knows their stuff. He is not a beggar who wants stones, a patrion, and other nonsense. The author does not change or delete the already written chapter, if this chapter did not like the readers who wanted to see Naruto here and not the harsh reality. It does not describe the plot and what the main character, or any other character in the afterwords, actually meant. Everything is written in the chapter itself, so thank God there are no such comments from the author: Guys, the main character did not mean this, he is good, I will explain everything later somehow, do not stop reading and please give me some stones. First of all, he doesn't care about the readers ' opinions, not in a bad way. And if you take into account the users of Webnovel, I would even say this is a mandatory measure. Because here basically, everyone wants anime and other nonsense, I witnessed how readers cornered the author, offering more and more nonsense and he just didn't know how to deal with it further and gave up writing. This is a rare trait for Webnovel, so I can only nod to the author for it. Also, the author does not require any stones and money on the patrion. Everything is free, so I can't demand anything from the author, or complain about something. Everything is free, do you want to read it? Read this! if you don't want to read, then go, no one is forcing you. Good qualities for the author, he does not behave arrogantly, humiliating the reader (The most unpleasant types, consider themselves the navel of the earth) Or like an offended teenager who puts a dislike, then turns to his readers-a schoolboy, so that they put you a dislike. (Although, these are even funny in their own way.) So everything was decided with the author, so the last point is the shortcomings of the book. It's a fast-paced narrative and very little detail. Of course, I don't mean Chinese details, where thousands of characters describe how delicious Chinese rice is. But the book is really very lacking in detail, the author runs from one point to another in a couple of lines. Some things are generally only mentioned in the dialogues, there is not even a minimal mention of it. But, as I have already written above, I have no right to demand something from the author, take it as my personal preference. I think I said everything, although I could have written it shorter, but I had nothing to do and it turned out what it turned out.
Revelar SpoilerThis is the kind of story that is rarely found in this trash site therefore I consider it a good one. The author is not some politically correct pansy that is too scared to write a truly evil mc so that is always a plus. If you're not ready to read about the incarnation of ruthlessness in an already ruthless setting then I advise you to not even click on this story.
I'm inlove with the MCs personality, honestly it's such a breath of fresh air to have a somewhat logical and somewhat evil MC that has already adapted to the universe he is in.. author I highly suggest you create a Game Of Thrones fanfiction.. I feel like you'd create an amazing story in the GOT world.
its really this novel,yesterday i discover this read the 3 only chapter and serarch for other novel from the author and find a really good novel of the auther called commonwealthand read the 200 episodes in one day.lol GOOD AUTHOR DONT GIVE UP ON THIS NOVEL OR THE COMMONWEALTH NOVEL
He comes to usurp the world bringing destruction and chaos wherever he goes all women love him and he does this all at the teNder age of 5??
I like how ruthless the MC is. To be honest, a good and merciful MC in this series would only die in so many ways. So far I like where the story is going keep it up 🦾.
My mother told me Someday I will buy Galley with good oars Sail to distant shores Stand up on the prow Noble barque I steer Steady course to the haven Hew many foe-men love you story,
Alright, For those who want a strong-willed Mc or Ruthless Mc, This is for you or If you like the Fanfic of "HOLYJOKER" where the Mc is Evil, Manipulator, Ruthless, Selfish then this is for you, But overall this Novel is 10/10 For me Because, this is my cup of tea Question Author-sama ; Will his women betray him or are there some kind of NTR?
Buenísima historia de viking autor eres lo máximo, solo quiero más más más más más más más más más más 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Writing Quality- 3 Stars Story Development- 4Stars Character Design- 5 Stars Updating Stability- 5 Stars World Background- 5 Stars Writing Quality [ Not much to say here. It is understandable and not complete bullshit, so there's that ] Story Development [ It is going forward and it seems that it could be a good Story, just read it, folks ] Character Design [ I love him, not a naive and innocent Mc but a man that knows what he wants, the way I like it ] Updating Stability [ A Chapter a day keeps the doctor away ] World Background [ The author seems to know his shit but I didn't watch the show for a year so I do not have a promising authority to conclude that ]
This is one of those fics that really belonged to this site, retarated readers, retarted auther, harem, killing, explicit ***, a touch of deus ex machina and as a retarted reader I love it, good job on this novel mate together with the other one, it's like chips that slowly kills off your brain cells but can't stop reading.
Here is my score, independently of the quality of the novel, if you insult and say "I don't give a shit if you are offended" automaticly it deserves the lowest score. I didn't even read this novel and with a author like you, I won't.
I'm really looking forward to this I have read his other book the commonwealth I hope it is just as good and entertaining so far it seems to have the makings of a good novel.
The author is not some politically correct pansy that is too scared to write a truly evil mc so that is always a plus. If you're not ready to read about the incarnation of ruthlessness in an already ruthless setting then I advise you to not even click on this story.
keep it author 👌👊🙏.......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoilerdude....ur paragraph alignment sucks. in small devices its hard to read and its clustered, especially since u use ellipses and dont separate the dialogues, they are like thoughts. use the ' ' [marks to signify the dialogue and dont write a part of a sentence in a another line]. even ur other bk, the same shit happened. fix it cause even if people are interested u just lose the will to read cause you cant understand. ur common wealth bk was interesting but 4 chps in and I dropped, its hard to read.
What can I say? Well I’ve read it twice already. Very nice work! Good character development, detailed world background and interesting narrative. MC feels real to me, just like any other person with little powers to use. Good job implementing the series knowledge and self-made storyline. More of a Kingdom Building during Viking age and slice of life instead of constant battles or knowledge seeking. Chapters are entertaining, not short. Grammar is excellent - no typos, no mistakes, though sometimes I wish you could give little briefing to meaning of certain words or idioms. I give it solid 10/10 even tho the rest of chapters aren’t there, cause you’re concentrating on your other novel. Btw you’re second novel is also nice, although I don’t understand Lithuanian history very much. But wars were described plentiful. Anyways, I couldn’t find other vikings novel that good, so this once is definitely must-read
interesting, different than the norm of most fics, but definitly interesting and refreshing. I dont think its everyones pot, but one should definitly try it.
Well i am deeply disapointed. It's not that It's bad, but i feel like watching a remake of vikings with a différent MC at this point. So yeah It's not interesting to see MC win juste like ragnar deed, become jarl Just like ragnar deed. In the end i can't help but ask myself if thé MC being itself make sens since Hé Just feel like a copycat. Where is thé originality ? What's thé point of doing a fanfic if you don t try to take another road to get some where better than thé Web série ? What's thé point of existence of our MC here ?
Autor MedTryglaw
As an author, I do not recommend it, I do it for my own pleasure and do not want to encourage anyone. MC is an asshole, a sadistic asshole. My writing style has many flaws, English is not my first language. Usually, any suggestions and good advice are ignored.