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As I look upon this book full of empty pages, I see my own reflection. And because my own reflection is so amazing and brilliant, I decided to rate this 5 stars.
eu realmente gostei bastante dessa novel oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
This book is amazing and I hope it gets picked for continued translation as i cant help but love every chapter ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗 ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗 ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗
Jjbbgvii is vigg to v cm terrible vittygg F vrr try v C fict D cr g vvvvvvv. Fffgffgggfffgggggfffddfggufcfodu. dvffgcctctcrcr r r d d r. Rr. T Hhfubyrcf
Chapter 355, Finally captures all of his small island.. Then we find out that there are 3 other locations 1 further than the last with more powerful people.. also, him in his prime was only top dog in the second location.. middle-earth.. It has taken him 1 whole year just for 1 expansion and that just reached middle-earth.. but, the other locations are aparently even further.. It starts with; - Eastern Frontier (Currently where he starts from) - Middle Earth (Where the 12 Yama's lived) - South Wilderness (Where Demons are) - Beimang / North Mang (Unknown Land with Stronger people) Each 1 taking longer to get to.. it has taken over 300 chapters just to arrive at Middle-Earth.. Power Levels; - 1 to 9 Realms are only in Eastern Frontier.. - 10 to 13 Realms Are only in Middle Earth (Called Realm 1 to 4) - The 12 Yama's were only Realm 3 and 4.. (12 and 13) - No difference in powers.. just only same realm kills same realm except Yama's can fight 1 realm higher.. I'm stopping at chapter 355.. GL to anyone who reads further..
Petition to bring back Warlock Apprentice and my own little piece of advice: don't pay even a cent to WebNovel, because the novel which you like will most likely be dropped later, after WN thinks it can earn more money from another story. If you pay, it means you support their policy.
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This is just my opinion, I love this kind of book or I guess you could say System. if anyone knows of more like this please let me know, I just want this to be chosen because MTL is not very good lol
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the idea is simply wonderful. however, I feel like the implementation could have been better. there are multiple things that don't make much sense. I will only like to warn others that the start of the novel is a bit fast-paced and according to the script seems like the rest of it would be too. there seems to be present a sense of urgency but I believe its execution was not good enough.
Please support this book! Just the fact that this is the same author who created History's Number 1 Founder already deserves a vote. (I have yet to finish that book, by the way lol) Before I knew this info, I thought this was giving me a slight HNOF feels but it still is different from it, turned out they have the same author. The translation is really easy to understand. The flow of the story is also great. If you like this kind of genre, building cities/empires/or whatever this is definitely a book to try.
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I dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooont know whhhhhhhhhy I am rating those a 5 stars I have no clue I have not even read a word from this book
I like this novel, the title says it all, the MC is OP while in the fortress but not outside. If you like OP protagonists with some kingdom building elements, give it a try.
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This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me. I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me. I’ll give this novel 3/5
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I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards. I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over. The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar. Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is. MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them. Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story. Utter disappointment of a novel.
pretty solid so far...........................................................................................................................
I'm surprised WN put out two good novels in one batch. .. Well. I've only read two. I fear there might be more, and can only hope all the good ones get chosen. I enjoy op MC novels, and this has it. However, there's heavy restrictions on him, location wise, and time wise. He has to aspire to get past them! Also there's kingdom building, and good characters with funny stories. Highly recommend!
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A review before I try it out.... from the synopsis it sounds like he's already very powerful from the beginning, hopefully there'll be surprises...
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 stars Writing quality It s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story development Now i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character design Now, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stability Well, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World background I don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 stars Overall 2.6
I cannot understand the story............... .......................................................... ................................................
Loved it. One of the trial novels I have loved in a long time. The only thing I didn't like is I believe the MC to have God complex. When he disguises himself, he goes the extra bloody mile to make everyone believe that his original body is the greatest. I cringed when he faked being afraid in his disguise of his original body. Other than that, loved it.
Great idea implemented. There are some similar ones but this one is better. Makes you want more chapters.
Why is this underrated??? This was actually interestingly good! . . .. . . . .......... .....................................
As I look upon this book full of empty pages, I see my own reflection. And because my own reflection is so amazing and brilliant, I decided to rate this 5 stars.
eu realmente gostei bastante dessa novel oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
This book is amazing and I hope it gets picked for continued translation as i cant help but love every chapter ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗 ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗 ❤ ♥ 💕 💜 💖 💗
Jjbbgvii is vigg to v cm terrible vittygg F vrr try v C fict D cr g vvvvvvv. Fffgffgggfffgggggfffddfggufcfodu. dvffgcctctcrcr r r d d r. Rr. T Hhfubyrcf
Chapter 355, Finally captures all of his small island.. Then we find out that there are 3 other locations 1 further than the last with more powerful people.. also, him in his prime was only top dog in the second location.. middle-earth.. It has taken him 1 whole year just for 1 expansion and that just reached middle-earth.. but, the other locations are aparently even further.. It starts with; - Eastern Frontier (Currently where he starts from) - Middle Earth (Where the 12 Yama's lived) - South Wilderness (Where Demons are) - Beimang / North Mang (Unknown Land with Stronger people) Each 1 taking longer to get to.. it has taken over 300 chapters just to arrive at Middle-Earth.. Power Levels; - 1 to 9 Realms are only in Eastern Frontier.. - 10 to 13 Realms Are only in Middle Earth (Called Realm 1 to 4) - The 12 Yama's were only Realm 3 and 4.. (12 and 13) - No difference in powers.. just only same realm kills same realm except Yama's can fight 1 realm higher.. I'm stopping at chapter 355.. GL to anyone who reads further..
Petition to bring back Warlock Apprentice and my own little piece of advice: don't pay even a cent to WebNovel, because the novel which you like will most likely be dropped later, after WN thinks it can earn more money from another story. If you pay, it means you support their policy.
Uygulamayı yeni kesfettim ve kitabı okudum yazar basarılı kirgusu falan iyi karekterler iyi yazarı tebrim ederim👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
This is just my opinion, I love this kind of book or I guess you could say System. if anyone knows of more like this please let me know, I just want this to be chosen because MTL is not very good lol
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Revelar Spoiler the idea is simply wonderful. however, I feel like the implementation could have been better. there are multiple things that don't make much sense. I will only like to warn others that the start of the novel is a bit fast-paced and according to the script seems like the rest of it would be too. there seems to be present a sense of urgency but I believe its execution was not good enough.
Please support this book! Just the fact that this is the same author who created History's Number 1 Founder already deserves a vote. (I have yet to finish that book, by the way lol) Before I knew this info, I thought this was giving me a slight HNOF feels but it still is different from it, turned out they have the same author. The translation is really easy to understand. The flow of the story is also great. If you like this kind of genre, building cities/empires/or whatever this is definitely a book to try.
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I dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooont know whhhhhhhhhy I am rating those a 5 stars I have no clue I have not even read a word from this book
I like this novel, the title says it all, the MC is OP while in the fortress but not outside. If you like OP protagonists with some kingdom building elements, give it a try.
the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best the best
This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me. I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me. I’ll give this novel 3/5
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I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards. I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over. The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar. Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is. MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them. Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story. Utter disappointment of a novel.
pretty solid so far...........................................................................................................................
I'm surprised WN put out two good novels in one batch. .. Well. I've only read two. I fear there might be more, and can only hope all the good ones get chosen. I enjoy op MC novels, and this has it. However, there's heavy restrictions on him, location wise, and time wise. He has to aspire to get past them! Also there's kingdom building, and good characters with funny stories. Highly recommend!
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A review before I try it out.... from the synopsis it sounds like he's already very powerful from the beginning, hopefully there'll be surprises...
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 stars Writing quality It s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story development Now i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character design Now, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stability Well, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World background I don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 stars Overall 2.6
I cannot understand the story............... .......................................................... ................................................
Loved it. One of the trial novels I have loved in a long time. The only thing I didn't like is I believe the MC to have God complex. When he disguises himself, he goes the extra bloody mile to make everyone believe that his original body is the greatest. I cringed when he faked being afraid in his disguise of his original body. Other than that, loved it.
Great idea implemented. There are some similar ones but this one is better. Makes you want more chapters.
Why is this underrated??? This was actually interestingly good! . . .. . . . .......... .....................................