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this is what i wanted a good magi fanfic, i hope it continues please have a good future contact that you don't give up and travel too much,in addition, the construction of the kingdom is very good to see, he taking the marbles aaa good thing
will this be updated ........................................................................................................................
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I have high hopes for this, number 1 being that this novel actually has a schedule. I usually see only original novels with schedules but just from the fact that you have a schedule I can tell that you are organized, second being that you decided to do a magi novel, wich btw you don't see everyday. I hope that you will not drop this but nothing in this world is 100% empty promises do exist
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What can I say, I've been waiting for a Magi fanfic for a long time. I'm excited. . ヽ | | / ／ .＼ ヽ | | / ／ . ＼THANKS!! ／ ＿ . ― /i⌒i⌒i⌒i－￣ .三｜| | | | ∧..∧ . _〈_{＿|＿}_ノ)*•̀ᴗ•́*) Mate!! . ／`ー―(＿ノ _ﾉっ .／ / ｜ | ヽし(_) None shall cook this cat!!!
I have nothing bad to say about this fanfic its creative and awesome good job author!! Good grammar for the most part good character design world background is good you can tell the author know his stuff Good Job!!
interesting story, as I said in the comment, and just waiting for you to get more chapters, I want to see how you handle the growth of the protagonist, the addition of girls, I like "morgiana", among others, but I'll see how it progresses, I just ask for more chapters xD
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great so far but question for arthur is he gonna like another sinbad or are you thinking making hime a mage. You know i mean if he had both he would be too OP.
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I haven't read it yet but 5 stars because it's a Magi Fanfic.............. ....... ........ .................... ........... ....... .......
It's a good story but there are some wrong grammar here and there but overall it's good.......+-+-+-++±--+-++--%%%%$$$$$$$$###@@#@###--&&%-+++&&&-%
Finally a magi fanfic waiting for this keep up the good work 🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💝💝❤️❤️❤️😁👍👍🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊
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this is what I have been waiting for, a good magi fanfic, i hope you don't drop this novel,keep going thank you ..........................
oye amigo te dire que deberias detallar mas las escenas de lucha y no poner tanto contexto porque casi no hay conversaciones en tus historias espero que puedas arreglar eso o podes mirar otras historias para entender a lo que me refiero
Well, a great applause for the author. I like the story very much, I could say that this has good story development. The idea of Solomon reincarnated is really good. The plot also well-made and I know it will be much greater, of course if only the story will be continued.
this is what i wanted a good magi fanfic, i hope it continues please have a good future contact that you don't give up and travel too much,in addition, the construction of the kingdom is very good to see, he taking the marbles aaa good thing
will this be updated ........................................................................................................................
[iruwefjd;lfknc,nx.,v;asdlho[dqwufoi[weqfjdiowyfodhsf;jhbxcb.,cmna;sckl;has;dlfjwpqeyfoweyrpoewpoqyrietiyruwyrpifdkjlshfjkladhsfkldgsclbxmnbcn,xbnmvbmnvbmc mnmcbvsdblkfjkjwhfkljwegryuipqyroiuwyefuhdksgklbvmbvllkdagfkdshjjfklbbvlhgdalkfhkl
I have high hopes for this, number 1 being that this novel actually has a schedule. I usually see only original novels with schedules but just from the fact that you have a schedule I can tell that you are organized, second being that you decided to do a magi novel, wich btw you don't see everyday. I hope that you will not drop this but nothing in this world is 100% empty promises do exist
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What can I say, I've been waiting for a Magi fanfic for a long time. I'm excited. . ヽ | | / ／ .＼ ヽ | | / ／ . ＼THANKS!! ／ ＿ . ― /i⌒i⌒i⌒i－￣ .三｜| | | | ∧..∧ . _〈_{＿|＿}_ノ)*•̀ᴗ•́*) Mate!! . ／`ー―(＿ノ _ﾉっ .／ / ｜ | ヽし(_) None shall cook this cat!!!
I have nothing bad to say about this fanfic its creative and awesome good job author!! Good grammar for the most part good character design world background is good you can tell the author know his stuff Good Job!!
interesting story, as I said in the comment, and just waiting for you to get more chapters, I want to see how you handle the growth of the protagonist, the addition of girls, I like "morgiana", among others, but I'll see how it progresses, I just ask for more chapters xD
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great so far but question for arthur is he gonna like another sinbad or are you thinking making hime a mage. You know i mean if he had both he would be too OP.
Revelar Spoiler is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
I haven't read it yet but 5 stars because it's a Magi Fanfic.............. ....... ........ .................... ........... ....... .......
It's a good story but there are some wrong grammar here and there but overall it's good.......+-+-+-++±--+-++--%%%%$$$$$$$$###@@#@###--&&%-+++&&&-%
Finally a magi fanfic waiting for this keep up the good work 🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁💝💝❤️❤️❤️😁👍👍🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊
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this is what I have been waiting for, a good magi fanfic, i hope you don't drop this novel,keep going thank you ..........................
oye amigo te dire que deberias detallar mas las escenas de lucha y no poner tanto contexto porque casi no hay conversaciones en tus historias espero que puedas arreglar eso o podes mirar otras historias para entender a lo que me refiero
Well, a great applause for the author. I like the story very much, I could say that this has good story development. The idea of Solomon reincarnated is really good. The plot also well-made and I know it will be much greater, of course if only the story will be continued.