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When you coming back man/woman? We still want to see where the story leads to and ends.
This is a very unique way to go about using powers and even his power is unique and cool
when is the new chapter? tell jokes The police love to play catch up. don't believe? the next time you see a cop, start running away, you will see that he will run after you.
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I'd like to rate higher but some things like world and characters haven't been fleshed out enough, or possibly just haven't been delivered to readers. Interesting idea/take and hoping to see. Ore chapters released
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
well it's pretty good but the updates are so slow it's probably not worth reading till it's done, also the parasites are more of a copying ability than a gross worm infestation ability, which is honestly kind of a bummer.
Definitely a great read, had some unique aspects, Right now it updates a lil slowly so it may just sit in your library but also worth a good binge when you need a quick one
It's ironic how I'm reading this while being infected by tape worms, well nevermind that this novel is great especially the world and the fact that everything is explained clearly like the esper origins and abilities. anyways thank me later.
I've read 91 chapters. Love the idea. Hate the execution and pace. The development is sooo ssllooowww, and the horrible update schedule just makes it worse. I don't expect him to be a god among men by now, but a system should provide more growth at a faster rate. After nearly 100 chapters, Jay still seems weak. When compared to other similar novels, the progress is much more tangible in every other novel I've seen. He has basically only used his system powers THREE times in 91 chapters! Also, the powers he does obtain with the system seem to grow at the normal rate of needing YEARS of honing. Then there is the issue of making small advances seem huge. Jay can now mildly sense what his parasites feel which gives him a low-powered danger warning sense and the ability to sense the strength of opponents. He can also slightly buff or very mildly influence someone infected with his parasites. He basically has 3 very normal protagonist skills. The author acts like these are insane gains in ability when they're really bland. In 91 chapters, he should have used his system multiple times, should have several skills, and should have tangible growth. The author may as well have left the system and parasites out at this rate, and just made the novel about a guy with 3 normal abilities instead of the usual one per person.
Even though I just started reading this I like the novel. Even if it has short chapters the over all story line is pretty good and easy to understand.
This is a great story. I love the ideas behind the system and the world. One of my favorite parts about the system is that he doesn't know everything about it at the very beginning. He finds out bits and pieces here and there. So you have random bits popping up to save the day. Which might seem like it could be *rather convenient*, but surprisingly it doesn't feel that way. There are a few parts that are hard to follow. Especially when people are talking and you have no idea who is talking. It would be less confusing if one person's dialog wasn't split into multiple paragraphs (unless it was lengthy) or the part that says who said the line was in the same paragraph. Overall a great story. Thanks for writing!
Revelar Spoiler
es una muy buena historia, su escritura es entendible además de que el concepto es interesante (al menos para mí), el personaje no es OP desde el principio o en muy poco tiempo y el hecho de que se desarrolle poco a poco es algo que en lo personal me gusta, la historia es entretenida y tiene sus momentos divertidos que hacen que me guste mucho más.
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Early review so far, 15 chapter in. First off, he said english was his second language and yet the writing has been extremely good. Not just grammatically, but it’s so easy to read and flows very well. Second, the MC feels like a real person. I’ve read a good few novels and even in some of my favorites it doesn’t feel like the MC is (insert name here), but just the MC if that makes sense. Just a well fleshed out character thats pretty easy to associate with. Not far enough to judge the power system quite yet, but the 3 different types of supers that kinda covers all the bases is very neat. The power ranking is a bit simple. I’m not sure how thats gunna work out tbh. I think having numerical differences between the ranks is a must. It might work early on with just E- to E to E+ but When you get to A-S ranks you can’t just be jumping an entire 3rd of a ranking at time. There just needs to be numbers in between to show progress later on.
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The story its not bad apart from a few things that should be changed the first its the stability of the releases its just too slow this story for sure its long but with this slow release after some time a lot of people would drop it
It's one of the best novels i see and the thematic of using parasites is something don't used ir showed in the novels 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
main detractors to this novel, short chapters that are infrequently released, and occasional poor grammar/spelling/syntax (english version). however, the MC is interesting and the supporting characters each have unique and distinct personalities, with each drawing you in a bit more into the story. the world is well balanced and developed, albeit a bit of a trope regarding a persons growth. the story is consistently miving forward at a nominal pace, with balance and few if any deus ex machina occurring. overall, a good read. worth spending coins/fast passes on. i am happy it showed up for free reading day, as i now have added it to my reading library
Great read with a good story, large number of interesting characters and solid world building. Overall a nice time and totally worth it. I do wish there was more of it.
Parasyte System is a pretty good story and it's enjoyable. What makes it special is the fact of how works the System and the kinds of persons of the story
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.
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Mans dropped a banger of a read then left on a cliff hanger, had everything one would want from a comprehensive system, to suspenseful descriptions of environmental/enemys. A lot of underlying concepts yet to be explored. Will read again whenever I feel nostalgic
When you coming back man/woman? We still want to see where the story leads to and ends.
This is a very unique way to go about using powers and even his power is unique and cool
when is the new chapter? tell jokes The police love to play catch up. don't believe? the next time you see a cop, start running away, you will see that he will run after you.
...........................................................................................................................I don't like .........................................
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I'd like to rate higher but some things like world and characters haven't been fleshed out enough, or possibly just haven't been delivered to readers. Interesting idea/take and hoping to see. Ore chapters released
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
well it's pretty good but the updates are so slow it's probably not worth reading till it's done, also the parasites are more of a copying ability than a gross worm infestation ability, which is honestly kind of a bummer.
Definitely a great read, had some unique aspects, Right now it updates a lil slowly so it may just sit in your library but also worth a good binge when you need a quick one
It's ironic how I'm reading this while being infected by tape worms, well nevermind that this novel is great especially the world and the fact that everything is explained clearly like the esper origins and abilities. anyways thank me later.
I've read 91 chapters. Love the idea. Hate the execution and pace. The development is sooo ssllooowww, and the horrible update schedule just makes it worse. I don't expect him to be a god among men by now, but a system should provide more growth at a faster rate. After nearly 100 chapters, Jay still seems weak. When compared to other similar novels, the progress is much more tangible in every other novel I've seen. He has basically only used his system powers THREE times in 91 chapters! Also, the powers he does obtain with the system seem to grow at the normal rate of needing YEARS of honing. Then there is the issue of making small advances seem huge. Jay can now mildly sense what his parasites feel which gives him a low-powered danger warning sense and the ability to sense the strength of opponents. He can also slightly buff or very mildly influence someone infected with his parasites. He basically has 3 very normal protagonist skills. The author acts like these are insane gains in ability when they're really bland. In 91 chapters, he should have used his system multiple times, should have several skills, and should have tangible growth. The author may as well have left the system and parasites out at this rate, and just made the novel about a guy with 3 normal abilities instead of the usual one per person.
Even though I just started reading this I like the novel. Even if it has short chapters the over all story line is pretty good and easy to understand.
This is a great story. I love the ideas behind the system and the world. One of my favorite parts about the system is that he doesn't know everything about it at the very beginning. He finds out bits and pieces here and there. So you have random bits popping up to save the day. Which might seem like it could be *rather convenient*, but surprisingly it doesn't feel that way. There are a few parts that are hard to follow. Especially when people are talking and you have no idea who is talking. It would be less confusing if one person's dialog wasn't split into multiple paragraphs (unless it was lengthy) or the part that says who said the line was in the same paragraph. Overall a great story. Thanks for writing!
Revelar Spoiler es una muy buena historia, su escritura es entendible además de que el concepto es interesante (al menos para mí), el personaje no es OP desde el principio o en muy poco tiempo y el hecho de que se desarrolle poco a poco es algo que en lo personal me gusta, la historia es entretenida y tiene sus momentos divertidos que hacen que me guste mucho más.
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Early review so far, 15 chapter in. First off, he said english was his second language and yet the writing has been extremely good. Not just grammatically, but it’s so easy to read and flows very well. Second, the MC feels like a real person. I’ve read a good few novels and even in some of my favorites it doesn’t feel like the MC is (insert name here), but just the MC if that makes sense. Just a well fleshed out character thats pretty easy to associate with. Not far enough to judge the power system quite yet, but the 3 different types of supers that kinda covers all the bases is very neat. The power ranking is a bit simple. I’m not sure how thats gunna work out tbh. I think having numerical differences between the ranks is a must. It might work early on with just E- to E to E+ but When you get to A-S ranks you can’t just be jumping an entire 3rd of a ranking at time. There just needs to be numbers in between to show progress later on.
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The story its not bad apart from a few things that should be changed the first its the stability of the releases its just too slow this story for sure its long but with this slow release after some time a lot of people would drop it
It's one of the best novels i see and the thematic of using parasites is something don't used ir showed in the novels 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
main detractors to this novel, short chapters that are infrequently released, and occasional poor grammar/spelling/syntax (english version). however, the MC is interesting and the supporting characters each have unique and distinct personalities, with each drawing you in a bit more into the story. the world is well balanced and developed, albeit a bit of a trope regarding a persons growth. the story is consistently miving forward at a nominal pace, with balance and few if any deus ex machina occurring. overall, a good read. worth spending coins/fast passes on. i am happy it showed up for free reading day, as i now have added it to my reading library
Great read with a good story, large number of interesting characters and solid world building. Overall a nice time and totally worth it. I do wish there was more of it.
Parasyte System is a pretty good story and it's enjoyable. What makes it special is the fact of how works the System and the kinds of persons of the story
struggled to make it through the first chapter. this story needs alot of work and needs a over haul on both characters and world view building and development.
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Mans dropped a banger of a read then left on a cliff hanger, had everything one would want from a comprehensive system, to suspenseful descriptions of environmental/enemys. A lot of underlying concepts yet to be explored. Will read again whenever I feel nostalgic