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This oone isnt bad actually… i Just hoped in because well I was bored and wasnt expecting much but it really drew me in… not bad author-san😁
This novel is very interresting for the moment! It’s just have 66 chapter so it’s the beginning, but the story have a lot of action and I really like the hero way of thinking!!
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry
I like the novel, although its just like your typical xianxia, I likee typical xianxia's that gives different meaning and attach different experiences to the very well explored genre. About the story, I could say that it really picked itself off after some chapters.
It's interesting how the author chose to go with en media's res, it always makes the reader long for the mysterious beginning. The diction used creates an imagery of regality. It's a promising story, definitely worth looking into!!
Great novel, really enjoyed reading it 📚 MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story and descriptions are incredible, keep up the great work author!
oh my god! i can't believe I'm reading such wonderful book from a talented writer.... the world background portraying is really great, even the writing style... kudos to you, author👌
I love the emphasis on the moral character of the people in the world, it adds a lot to both the world background and the character development! The only issue is some of the grammatical issues, but seeing as the author is new, hopeful as they develop their skills, these mistakes will be checked and corrected in the future! Check the novel out if you're looking for a novel set in the harsh cultivation world. <3
The dialogue between the characters feels good and the characters are also well-crafted. The description could use some work though as there aren't many of them.
The novel is very interesting and it is well written. it has a lot of potentials and the description is very detailed. I'm interested in reading more of it so update the author.
First of nice writing style.... Always enjoy a book with good writing..... I am sure s lot if people would read this book .... I see the potential in it.... looking forward to more chapters..!!!
A wuxia style novel that starts with what appears to be something reminiscent of ATG. Interesting descriptions, and a MC that likes books, it's been a while since I've seen that plotline. Check it out for some cultivation fun.
After reading few chapters, your excellent writing has already get me hooked and was amazed with your vivid imaginations and descriptions. It was beautifully written! Also, your high vocabulary in each lines that intrigued me. Keep the good work!
Revelar Spoiler
This is my first cultivation book notwithstanding the author has managed to get me hooked. Honestly, the description of the setting of the book is pretty commendable. That said, I think the author can still improve the book if he were to work on the flow of the story and make the readers feel more of the emotions of the characters so as not to make them seem flat. The author can also work a little more on the grammar. All in all, nice work Author, keep up the good work!❤🌹☺🤗
Hey neat I am review #10. So first off this is to support this author because it takes 10 reviews for the star total to show up, but I would also like to mention that this book seems very intriguing and would recommend a try! :D -OmniFrog
I like this story! The descriptions are vivid, the style is unique and wording is simple and easy to read, relaxing too. For sure I will continue to read this story. Plot is undoubtedly EXCITING!!
I'm appreciative of the fact that the author adds a small guideline in the beginning for anyone unfamiliar in the wuxia genre. There's some grammatical mistakes and consider me a grammar nazi, but it kinda spoiled the reading for me.So I sincerely suggest to the author to do a quick run-over. Overall, the story is enjoyable.
This story has alot of emotions in it and I love it! please continue this story 🙏 You have alot of potential here. Im excited to read more.
It definitely is interesting. It starts out in an grand scale, letting readers take a peek at what is on the highest level and the storyline is pretty decent. Although the pace of the story is a bit fast, and the grammar is a bit lacking, it is without a doubt, a nice book. So far so good. 👍👍👍👍
It's actually a good story, the plot is exiting .. The beryal chapter was way to interesting, I kinda felt pain wile reading it - The worst feeling ever is to be betrayed by someone you uae to see as a brother .. In general, I'm so in love with the book.
This story has a good bit of mystery involved with how this will go for our main character. Seens like the odds are going to be against him. There are writing errors and a few grammatical mistakes, but it doesn’t hurt this neat story.
So far all so good, the story as a good beginning. It contains emotional plot at the beginning which are well details. It is not your typical fantasy novel
It start with a good epic chapter and good fighting scene. They fight had a good back up story. The betrayal caught me of guard. It the story arrangement is just perfect and realistic. Hmmm all in all it a good story to read
*******Author is here, ****** please I need your comments. The story start in a slow pace but will eventually pickup when all the major characters are involved. Thank for reading. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
ohhhh i like this one, yep, this book is great! From the plot to the story, you know how to get a reader going! I love the main character and I will be rooting for whatever happens next. The way you described everything was really interesting- And i hope u keep on writing like this becuz count me as a fan!
This oone isnt bad actually… i Just hoped in because well I was bored and wasnt expecting much but it really drew me in… not bad author-san😁
This novel is very interresting for the moment! It’s just have 66 chapter so it’s the beginning, but the story have a lot of action and I really like the hero way of thinking!!
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry
I like the novel, although its just like your typical xianxia, I likee typical xianxia's that gives different meaning and attach different experiences to the very well explored genre. About the story, I could say that it really picked itself off after some chapters.
It's interesting how the author chose to go with en media's res, it always makes the reader long for the mysterious beginning. The diction used creates an imagery of regality. It's a promising story, definitely worth looking into!!
Great novel, really enjoyed reading it 📚 MC is likeable and humorous. The world background is creative and imaginative. The flow of the story and descriptions are incredible, keep up the great work author!
oh my god! i can't believe I'm reading such wonderful book from a talented writer.... the world background portraying is really great, even the writing style... kudos to you, author👌
I love the emphasis on the moral character of the people in the world, it adds a lot to both the world background and the character development! The only issue is some of the grammatical issues, but seeing as the author is new, hopeful as they develop their skills, these mistakes will be checked and corrected in the future! Check the novel out if you're looking for a novel set in the harsh cultivation world. <3
The dialogue between the characters feels good and the characters are also well-crafted. The description could use some work though as there aren't many of them.
The novel is very interesting and it is well written. it has a lot of potentials and the description is very detailed. I'm interested in reading more of it so update the author.
First of nice writing style.... Always enjoy a book with good writing..... I am sure s lot if people would read this book .... I see the potential in it.... looking forward to more chapters..!!!
A wuxia style novel that starts with what appears to be something reminiscent of ATG. Interesting descriptions, and a MC that likes books, it's been a while since I've seen that plotline. Check it out for some cultivation fun.
After reading few chapters, your excellent writing has already get me hooked and was amazed with your vivid imaginations and descriptions. It was beautifully written! Also, your high vocabulary in each lines that intrigued me. Keep the good work!
Revelar Spoiler This is my first cultivation book notwithstanding the author has managed to get me hooked. Honestly, the description of the setting of the book is pretty commendable. That said, I think the author can still improve the book if he were to work on the flow of the story and make the readers feel more of the emotions of the characters so as not to make them seem flat. The author can also work a little more on the grammar. All in all, nice work Author, keep up the good work!❤🌹☺🤗
Hey neat I am review #10. So first off this is to support this author because it takes 10 reviews for the star total to show up, but I would also like to mention that this book seems very intriguing and would recommend a try! :D -OmniFrog
I like this story! The descriptions are vivid, the style is unique and wording is simple and easy to read, relaxing too. For sure I will continue to read this story. Plot is undoubtedly EXCITING!!
I'm appreciative of the fact that the author adds a small guideline in the beginning for anyone unfamiliar in the wuxia genre. There's some grammatical mistakes and consider me a grammar nazi, but it kinda spoiled the reading for me.So I sincerely suggest to the author to do a quick run-over. Overall, the story is enjoyable.
This story has alot of emotions in it and I love it! please continue this story 🙏 You have alot of potential here. Im excited to read more.
It definitely is interesting. It starts out in an grand scale, letting readers take a peek at what is on the highest level and the storyline is pretty decent. Although the pace of the story is a bit fast, and the grammar is a bit lacking, it is without a doubt, a nice book. So far so good. 👍👍👍👍
It's actually a good story, the plot is exiting .. The beryal chapter was way to interesting, I kinda felt pain wile reading it - The worst feeling ever is to be betrayed by someone you uae to see as a brother .. In general, I'm so in love with the book.
This story has a good bit of mystery involved with how this will go for our main character. Seens like the odds are going to be against him. There are writing errors and a few grammatical mistakes, but it doesn’t hurt this neat story.
So far all so good, the story as a good beginning. It contains emotional plot at the beginning which are well details. It is not your typical fantasy novel
It start with a good epic chapter and good fighting scene. They fight had a good back up story. The betrayal caught me of guard. It the story arrangement is just perfect and realistic. Hmmm all in all it a good story to read
*******Author is here, ****** please I need your comments. The story start in a slow pace but will eventually pickup when all the major characters are involved. Thank for reading. ♥️♥️♥️♥️
ohhhh i like this one, yep, this book is great! From the plot to the story, you know how to get a reader going! I love the main character and I will be rooting for whatever happens next. The way you described everything was really interesting- And i hope u keep on writing like this becuz count me as a fan!