Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

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ArtoriaPendragon_

It’s a horrible crossover between DxD and MCU with mutants. Some people were defending this, but it brings a h*ll of a lot of problems. First: Plot holes, the author is going to have to completely change the Norse pantheon for it to even work. He’s going to have to explain why the ancient one hasn’t been involved. He’s going to have to explain whether or not mutants as devils is a thing. He’s going to have to explain if higher ups (like Fury) know of devils (which realistically he would). He going to have to completely change the Egyptian Pantheon due to moon knight. He’s going to have to explain Thor and Loki more. He’s going to have to explain if Ophis and Great Red even know of the outside universe (which they should). He’s also going to have to explain wth the dimensional gap is, and how someone like Dormammu hasn’t just killed Great red and taken it. 2nd: The timeline is now a clusterf*ck, he’s going to have to completely reorganize some events for them to make even the littlest bit of sense. 3rd: He’s going to have to explain how no one has ever found out about Devils, even with the technology they have. As there’s no way there isn’t a mistake here or there. Overall, this fsnfic is doomed to fail. And considering the MC in Naruto and how r*tarted he was, I don’t have much to any hope in this fsnfic.

LV 1

Kobyfate

i like it, thx author for new int story!ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ ᅠ

LV 4

Grenhaer

before the release of the MCU it was very interesting... but then the author showed his dislike for the "heart" (girls) of the dxd world... and this ruined my whole fanfic experience as a dxd fan. I'd rather you write MCU fanfiction than an ugly dxd world with a disgusting crossover with a biased and bad opinion about the girls of the dxd world. Everyone who reads dxd fanfiction loves these girls... but seeing how you feel about them, I'm leaving. And it is necessary to write in the description that this is a crossover. It’s a pity that I didn’t like this fanfic, unlike the previous fanfic (fanfic about Naruto turned out to be very interesting)

LV 2

Daoist59PBaE

it was a great fanfic before the MCU and Natasha came along. Creating and distributing his Evil Pieces doesn't even make sense for your character with his personality anymore. In general, your fanfic turned into a complete trash in just 2 chapters.

LV 11

DogLickerGods

FF Dxd without harem? and MCU crossover? I'm dropping this book. Sorry, I know your story is well crafted. But that combination of worlds makes me amused.

LV 11

LittleBaron

of all the stories why DxD was crossed with the MCU. .

LV 4

Konan2020

I give up, that author start by describing the MC as a paranoid guy that don't trust his knowledge of DxD canon about Rias because she/Germony could be dangerous, he prepare dozens of backup plan before interacting with human mages/devil, but he sees Back widow once and everything goes out the window. He knows she ia a spy, but kidnaps her during one of her missions. Tells everything about supernatural to her (as if Shield never even saw one instance of supernatural) Resolve to trust her after seen her past a little after noticing that his ability to see the past is influence by himself, but for her only once is enough to trust her implicitly tell her about evil pieces and their mind control setting, say that he recreate then without the mind control and she accept it without prof. somehow convinces her that he is more trustworthy than Shield in one conversation prompting her to leave then. After several backup plan before meeting a Devil and always talking about how they aren't trustworthy, decided that introduce Natasha to his Devil associate without informing her of anything, giving the Devil a lot of information about himself. After every chapter Mc give her more information about himself without any explanation on why. I don't know what happened, after Marvel introduction, it feels like another author took control of this story.

LV 15

ExiledLord

It's an MCU x DxD crossover, if that's not your cup on tea, don't bother. Otherwise, the wiring style is decent, probably in the top 50% on writers on this site

LV 5

Jaryk

Finally good story focused on human mage in dxd!Hope to see it continue. The plot so far mainly focuses on human magic side and I love it. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 6

CarlosSalazar

The MC believes that becouse he got money and conection he's untuchable.... DXD and MCU are going to cure he of that notiont becouse he's a weakling...

LV 4

Pointles

this fanfic has the potential to be the best dxd fanfic on this site it's truly amazing please author give us more chapters ..................

LV 5

akasuna123

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LV 1

ReficulsRegret

The writing is good the chap updates are good but be warned this is a dxd and mcu crossover so I'm sure just like me you are concerned with how the story and world of this fan-fic is going to end up, so in the meantime, I'm going to wait and see how it goes

LV 1

Thehighesthol1

After reading this I also feel strange, in the DxD mc section it seems as if he is not interested in women but when he meets a black widow he is immediately naive maybe? he immediately likes Natasha, revealing Everything information about magic or demons in just 2 days. What's even weirder is that according to the author he won't be leaning too much towards the MCU but the black widow has been brought in in a hurry.Even the highest mage doesn't have any response here as if the author forgot him or maybe he's already in the writer's nerf

LV 12

Spelloyal

This fanfic is a Crossover with MCU. This only appears in chapter 17, but I feel the author should have tagged or mentioned it in the review, as it's the kind of thing fanfic readers deserve to know before they start reading. I'm taking two stars out of wolrd background because I believe mutants don't fit DxD and the author will have to invent a lot and mess up the background a bit to make this work.

LV 15

Falsic

The DxD part is interesting. The Marvel characters were made into idiots to fit into its verse though... If the Marvel part wasn't there, it would've been a really fun story to read. My biggest problem is the reduction of Natasha's personality. Her being less experienced or not, it just made me uncomfortable.

LV 3

IMakeEOD

Haven't read it yet. Came here after finishing your Naruto FF. I just wanna say, haters gonna hate. At the end of the day, they don't matter, neither do their opinions. If at the end of your story your happy with the way it turned out, completely disregarding others opinions, then that's all that should matter to you. People will read it, or they won't. They'll like it, or they won't. I absolutely loved the Naruto FF. If this is of the same quality, I'm sure you'll smash it. You do you homie!

LV 1

Franco_Vicente

Very good fanfic, I love the analysis that the protagonist performs from a particularly sinic point of view to the world of dxd. The only thing that doesn't convince me is the way Nathalla acts (considering that she is based on her version of the mcu), but maybe it's just because of my interpretation of her personality, it's good to see the characters from time to time from different perspectives so I'm not going to detract from this story for that. A well deserved 5 stars, thank you for writing good stories sir great author, I wish you the best. PS: Don't listen to the comments that say this crossover doesn't make sense, a fanfic doesn't need to be perfect to be good.[img=recommend] PSS: Although as I already said Natasha is not as I imagined her, in the last chapters I really liked how you developed her character.

LV 4

WickedxMenace

In the beginning this story had very good progression but as time passed it seems the author essentially gave up on the story. Now it’s just endless filler and pointless complaint by the main character about everything. I don’t recommend reading this! 😩

LV 12

Rickyson

last chapter, you are one of the best authors so far that I have been following, unfortunately I will be stopping reading on the webnovel because they are not allowing you to read, only in the app lol, but they do not support portuguese (I read using google translator ) so I hope that if one day you post your work on another site, you can leave a warning on your profile or anything like that, thank you, until next time, good luck.