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Bro rhjs is too tuff im not gonna lie tho i want to help with the editing its not bad but i thjnk the storry would be way better if it was better
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Great idea on this novel. Though this one need grammarly and editor to become great fic. But its good enougj already. So keep up the good work.
the writing quality is great i suggest you don't waste time in this FF and create new one the way u write is great but not what u write the story and the background story is garbage the development is also garbage MCU ? what MCU beside mentioning some character (like STARK,STAN LEE,Etc).the story have no connection what so ever with MCU and Olympic GOD having affair with CHAOS GOD are you insane ??? why the hell cultivation entity making cameo in olympic god story and combining percy jackson shit story with FGO story ???? and wasting so many time just getting like 4 chapter and many people throwing stone around just for 4 chapter ???
Concepto interesante mal ejecutado la apariencia del mc es mala no encaja con lo que es un semidios su aparencia es el epitome de los vampiros y consejo que no mezcles poderes que no encaja si no se va a salir de control el poder del mc imaginate q el mc se encuentre con su padre y mira el sharingan, ¿de donde son esos ojos? a menos que los personajes tenga muerte cerebral, no funcionan
Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good. Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.
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more plz I really liked it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I want mmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in a really quite vouce* please author San
I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say. I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say.
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please add more chapter we are waiting ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
i have to say i really love this fic so far. i definitely feel as if he should skip grades and find someone with mortal connections to protect him so he can go to college and make companies. my suggestion would be the ancient one and use new york sanctum as home adress. maybe buy and or createan island for keeping demigods safe. maybe multiple properties as safe houses onbtheeir way to camp half blood or a portal or something to his island
very good story, only one chapter so far but that single chapter is great, author do not abandon this story, when you release more chapters I will do another review
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Bro rhjs is too tuff im not gonna lie tho i want to help with the editing its not bad but i thjnk the storry would be way better if it was better
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Great idea on this novel. Though this one need grammarly and editor to become great fic. But its good enougj already. So keep up the good work.
the writing quality is great i suggest you don't waste time in this FF and create new one the way u write is great but not what u write the story and the background story is garbage the development is also garbage MCU ? what MCU beside mentioning some character (like STARK,STAN LEE,Etc).the story have no connection what so ever with MCU and Olympic GOD having affair with CHAOS GOD are you insane ??? why the hell cultivation entity making cameo in olympic god story and combining percy jackson shit story with FGO story ???? and wasting so many time just getting like 4 chapter and many people throwing stone around just for 4 chapter ???
Concepto interesante mal ejecutado la apariencia del mc es mala no encaja con lo que es un semidios su aparencia es el epitome de los vampiros y consejo que no mezcles poderes que no encaja si no se va a salir de control el poder del mc imaginate q el mc se encuentre con su padre y mira el sharingan, ¿de donde son esos ojos? a menos que los personajes tenga muerte cerebral, no funcionan
Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good. Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.Nice so far. Hope the bashing is good.
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more plz I really liked it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I want mmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! in a really quite vouce* please author San
I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say. I really like this story. Hope you add more chapters. Nothing more to say.
superb and fantastic,.................. . j . . . . . . . . . . . . . bi. . . . itlyfyidgkcgkctixgdtdypdtidtodyodpuflhdtudgkxgifoyfiyfyidtidgkxyof
please add more chapter we are waiting ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
i have to say i really love this fic so far. i definitely feel as if he should skip grades and find someone with mortal connections to protect him so he can go to college and make companies. my suggestion would be the ancient one and use new york sanctum as home adress. maybe buy and or createan island for keeping demigods safe. maybe multiple properties as safe houses onbtheeir way to camp half blood or a portal or something to his island
very good story, only one chapter so far but that single chapter is great, author do not abandon this story, when you release more chapters I will do another review
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