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Pls make her straight it’s hard to find strong female characters that are straight ❤️
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Really enjoying this alisa is a great character with a great personality cant wait to read more. really i could just read like 100 more chapters right now😂 also i know its your story and you can take it whatever way you want and ill still read but id really like yuri.
Pls update i really like this!!! But pls no Yuri i have yet to find a fanfic where the strong female lead has a staight relationship, and its kinda annoying.
Lads just go read Game of Thrones; The prideful ones. It's an actually alright fanfic unlike this one. bruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruh
Please continue writing this story, this is one of the most interesting Esdeath story I have ever read, it is really interesting on how you portrayed her.
No point in reading this if you actually like Esdeath's personality. The personality is so diluted in this novel and other characters have such choppy dialogue that it'd be better if they were mute.
this is the best never stop thanks for the great work and please update more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Esdeath a great character in got she would kick ass ......................................................................................................
good chapter ^^ perhaps have alisa/dany go aslo well, kepp the good work ...............................................................................
Great 👍👍👍👍👍 keep going 😍😍😍😍😌😌😌😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Going great so far, please Continue. ----‐------------‐--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Estória maravilhosa espero que continue e mantenha a taxa de lançamento e a qualidade da escrita ................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler yuri please ^^ .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Even though u are just starting i like the story. I can see that this is heading in the right direction ...........................................................................
Even though the story is just starting out, I think it's turning out great so far and I'm really looking forward to where the story is going. I honestly cannot wait to see how the story continues to unfold, though I do think the best romance option for the main character is Arya Stark.
I see well her fall in love with arya stark ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Impossible to immerse myself and enjoy the story , the words seem awkward, forced dialogues , these exploits seem like nothing with this kind of. the idea is good but the story deserves a rewrite
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Pls make her straight it’s hard to find strong female characters that are straight ❤️
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Really enjoying this alisa is a great character with a great personality cant wait to read more. really i could just read like 100 more chapters right now😂 also i know its your story and you can take it whatever way you want and ill still read but id really like yuri.
Pls update i really like this!!! But pls no Yuri i have yet to find a fanfic where the strong female lead has a staight relationship, and its kinda annoying.
Lads just go read Game of Thrones; The prideful ones. It's an actually alright fanfic unlike this one. bruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruhbruh
Please continue writing this story, this is one of the most interesting Esdeath story I have ever read, it is really interesting on how you portrayed her.
No point in reading this if you actually like Esdeath's personality. The personality is so diluted in this novel and other characters have such choppy dialogue that it'd be better if they were mute.
this is the best never stop thanks for the great work and please update more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Esdeath a great character in got she would kick ass ......................................................................................................
good chapter ^^ perhaps have alisa/dany go aslo well, kepp the good work ...............................................................................
Great 👍👍👍👍👍 keep going 😍😍😍😍😌😌😌😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Going great so far, please Continue. ----‐------------‐--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Estória maravilhosa espero que continue e mantenha a taxa de lançamento e a qualidade da escrita ................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler yuri please ^^ .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Even though u are just starting i like the story. I can see that this is heading in the right direction ...........................................................................
Even though the story is just starting out, I think it's turning out great so far and I'm really looking forward to where the story is going. I honestly cannot wait to see how the story continues to unfold, though I do think the best romance option for the main character is Arya Stark.
I see well her fall in love with arya stark ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Impossible to immerse myself and enjoy the story , the words seem awkward, forced dialogues , these exploits seem like nothing with this kind of. the idea is good but the story deserves a rewrite