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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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While i would've preferred if he wasn't banging every pretty woman he fancies, plus the humiliating acts even on his subordinates. That's basically author's fictional opinion, So can't really be critical about it. At least he's not a righteous hypocrite. The story has a nice build up, he becomes op, but at least he worked for it. And not following canon, even though it's still couple years before canon starts. Is big plus. Most fanfics just follow the Strawhats, either babysitting them, or tolerating the bossy og characters like Nami. Waiting to see how mc handles first encounter with Admirals and Yonkos. And how author portrays or reveal some of The World's 'mysteries', in his own way.
Will there be an update in the future? Or is that all? It's just that when someone puts many chapters at a time, the work ends there. I hope there will be an update
Hmm typical reincarnation and training arc in the first few chapters and getting stronger than yankos + is resistent to seastone and seawater, has haki and a system with a shop function... hmmm and the first thing he sees when going out to see is finding Boa Hancock and fucking her... Oh have i mentioned that his crew consist of those monkey that learn from people.... Anyway for me it´s a 6/10...
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I like your fanfic man the character development, the versatility of the mc's devil fruit dont drop it.[img=update] Thats all plus ULTRA! !! ![img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
Revelar Spoiler While i would've preferred if he wasn't banging every pretty woman he fancies, plus the humiliating acts even on his subordinates. That's basically author's fictional opinion, So can't really be critical about it. At least he's not a righteous hypocrite. The story has a nice build up, he becomes op, but at least he worked for it. And not following canon, even though it's still couple years before canon starts. Is big plus. Most fanfics just follow the Strawhats, either babysitting them, or tolerating the bossy og characters like Nami. Waiting to see how mc handles first encounter with Admirals and Yonkos. And how author portrays or reveal some of The World's 'mysteries', in his own way.
Will there be an update in the future? Or is that all? It's just that when someone puts many chapters at a time, the work ends there. I hope there will be an update
Hmm typical reincarnation and training arc in the first few chapters and getting stronger than yankos + is resistent to seastone and seawater, has haki and a system with a shop function... hmmm and the first thing he sees when going out to see is finding Boa Hancock and fucking her... Oh have i mentioned that his crew consist of those monkey that learn from people.... Anyway for me it´s a 6/10...
Revelar Spoiler I like your fanfic man the character development, the versatility of the mc's devil fruit dont drop it.[img=update] Thats all plus ULTRA! !! ![img=recommend][img=recommend]
i haven't read it yet but 5* for u.