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It is one in a million.l read this novel all day is like am watching a movie so interesting.
The relation between FL and ML was up and down....sometimes good....sometimes pretty bad. Overall ok...
The book was good and great, but fortunately not my cup of cup of tea. Two lovers how had dark past and found love again. It’ just I got too attached to another character that was not the ML that when I later knew who was exactly the ML I was disappointed she didn’t marry him. It a great book but have many love triangles for my poor heart to be torture like that. But great development overall. 😞👌
I tried .. I really tried but there are so many contradictions in the story and FL is too much of a doormat with weak personality that I couldn't continue reading anymore....
I like the story, but it does have errors.[img=recommend] If you want I can proofread it.[img=recommend] Overall it's a fresh story of this genre!
first of all I love all your novels but the storyline is a little bit childish I don't see a reason why poor girl got married to a rich man and she still dresses like a poor person, why bring Aaron to the story when you still going to give him another heartbreak for the second time that's not fair please try to make your story or novels or little bit mature. I'm still trying to reason why marienne ran away and sold the coffee shop just because of a guy she was not dating, and there's absolutely nothing between them at the time just employer and employee relationship
Really good story.But I really hope the author will write the detailed story of how Marianne and Jack met at Newcastle for the first time. Not just a slight description of what had happened.
what drew me to this novel because it has real setting and the FL was actually someone with character. I followed through the story development despite poor vocabulary and until it became too draggy. I skipped chapters but it drags further I have to drop the book as it has become too costly. some chapters which cost 5 coins but no substance. I found better written story with better English with cheaper coins. I'll wait till this novel is completed as I want to know how Anne/Jack, Linda/Paul, Aaron/Rose end up.
read ch 30 so far , loving it.Love the Female protagonist 🤗, she is great, she doesn't ponder(although gets hurt but doesn't show) and cuts off rotten relationship & people. ex It seems there are many Male leads🧐 Can Anyone Please tell Who she ended up with?(coz most / all of them seem like they believe they are centre of the world)
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my only question..who is the male lead? 😅 I've read many chapters, but I don't have a clue about the male lead🤔 so who is it? who? Leo, Jack e Aaron don't really inspire me😅😅😅😅 the male characters in this story are all jerks
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This novel is really good, I like all the characters very much but I just don't like that the fl doesn't really fights back most of the time, atleast till where I have read. I understand that ignoring sometimes is good but I don't like it very much maybe because I have read too many op female lead novel on this website recently.
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i love this novel and a very interesting storyline.. I really love all the characters and how they decribed thier nature . waiting for more chapters😁
Thank you so much for all the bonus chapters dear author! 😘😘😘 One of my most fav novels here! Please keep the updates coming dear author! 🤩🤩🤩
I thought this is another cliche arranged marriage story, but surprisingly it's not. The story is decent, the only problem for me are the pronouns of the characters are not accurate so i often get confused. but overall it's good. Keep up the nice work author!
I really enjoy it so much and i want to see how much Leon regrets ommggggg haha I wish you bad luck with your Steffi beloved wife and hope Anne will be stronger
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This book has a really interesting start... Not your cliche set up. I hope The rest of the book is translated because it’s a great read! 👍 👍 👍
This is a very wonderful story line that I can't wait to read more of it.The publisher has done a great job and I hope the chapters will be more interesting as we read on.Well done writer.
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Very interesting novel, I wish you more inspiration for more interesting actions, you have done a great job the translation is okay the characters are well defined, with an excellent background
Beautiful story line, but try to correct the use of your pronouse. He should be he and she should be she, outside that I'm good. I just hope the story willvnot drag for too long like some other authors do.
Interesting story so far, Jack's disappearance all of a sudden, I can't wait to know what happens next, and who took Aaron and Anne's picture.
A story where the protagonist suffers over and over again at the hands of various characters, failing to defend herself properly and taking the pain and suffering in silence, accepting the situation but unable to change anything; there are hardly any happy moments for Anne, on top of that she doesn't make Jack suffer for what he has done to her and that is disappointing. The supposed protagonist seems more like a psychopath with anger issues, arrogant and rude attitude towards his supposedly beloved woman, always having the last word and incredibly inconsiderate. There is hardly any kindness extended towards the victim, threats and vulgarities are continuous and this parallels the supposed words of love from the male protagonist throughout the novel, repeated over and over again without change. To me this novel expresses the helplessness of people with normal identities and normal lives when faced with the ridiculous demands of those who possess much more, how their opinions do not matter in the least and their lives are acclimated to the desires of said subjects. I do not wish to criticize the writer by writing this, in fact, it is just my opinion on the matter after reading this novel. For those who enjoy sweet moments and affection, this is not your novel. If you like and enjoy this type of development, then this is your novel.
It is one in a million.l read this novel all day is like am watching a movie so interesting.
The relation between FL and ML was up and down....sometimes good....sometimes pretty bad. Overall ok...
The book was good and great, but fortunately not my cup of cup of tea. Two lovers how had dark past and found love again. It’ just I got too attached to another character that was not the ML that when I later knew who was exactly the ML I was disappointed she didn’t marry him. It a great book but have many love triangles for my poor heart to be torture like that. But great development overall. 😞👌
I tried .. I really tried but there are so many contradictions in the story and FL is too much of a doormat with weak personality that I couldn't continue reading anymore....
I like the story, but it does have errors.[img=recommend] If you want I can proofread it.[img=recommend] Overall it's a fresh story of this genre!
first of all I love all your novels but the storyline is a little bit childish I don't see a reason why poor girl got married to a rich man and she still dresses like a poor person, why bring Aaron to the story when you still going to give him another heartbreak for the second time that's not fair please try to make your story or novels or little bit mature. I'm still trying to reason why marienne ran away and sold the coffee shop just because of a guy she was not dating, and there's absolutely nothing between them at the time just employer and employee relationship
Really good story.But I really hope the author will write the detailed story of how Marianne and Jack met at Newcastle for the first time. Not just a slight description of what had happened.
what drew me to this novel because it has real setting and the FL was actually someone with character. I followed through the story development despite poor vocabulary and until it became too draggy. I skipped chapters but it drags further I have to drop the book as it has become too costly. some chapters which cost 5 coins but no substance. I found better written story with better English with cheaper coins. I'll wait till this novel is completed as I want to know how Anne/Jack, Linda/Paul, Aaron/Rose end up.
read ch 30 so far , loving it.Love the Female protagonist 🤗, she is great, she doesn't ponder(although gets hurt but doesn't show) and cuts off rotten relationship & people. ex It seems there are many Male leads🧐 Can Anyone Please tell Who she ended up with?(coz most / all of them seem like they believe they are centre of the world)
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact ameerhassangarba*@*gmail.com (please ignore both asterisks ** when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
my only question..who is the male lead? 😅 I've read many chapters, but I don't have a clue about the male lead🤔 so who is it? who? Leo, Jack e Aaron don't really inspire me😅😅😅😅 the male characters in this story are all jerks
Revelar Spoiler If you're looking for a good romance story with unexpected plots and twists that leave you like WTH, then this your book. I'm excited for the rest of the story.
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This novel is really good, I like all the characters very much but I just don't like that the fl doesn't really fights back most of the time, atleast till where I have read. I understand that ignoring sometimes is good but I don't like it very much maybe because I have read too many op female lead novel on this website recently.
Revelar Spoiler can anyone tell me who is the real hero of the story. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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i love this novel and a very interesting storyline.. I really love all the characters and how they decribed thier nature . waiting for more chapters😁
Thank you so much for all the bonus chapters dear author! 😘😘😘 One of my most fav novels here! Please keep the updates coming dear author! 🤩🤩🤩
I thought this is another cliche arranged marriage story, but surprisingly it's not. The story is decent, the only problem for me are the pronouns of the characters are not accurate so i often get confused. but overall it's good. Keep up the nice work author!
I really enjoy it so much and i want to see how much Leon regrets ommggggg haha I wish you bad luck with your Steffi beloved wife and hope Anne will be stronger
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Revelar Spoiler This book has a really interesting start... Not your cliche set up. I hope The rest of the book is translated because it’s a great read! 👍 👍 👍
This is a very wonderful story line that I can't wait to read more of it.The publisher has done a great job and I hope the chapters will be more interesting as we read on.Well done writer.
Revelar Spoiler Very interesting novel, I wish you more inspiration for more interesting actions, you have done a great job the translation is okay the characters are well defined, with an excellent background
Beautiful story line, but try to correct the use of your pronouse. He should be he and she should be she, outside that I'm good. I just hope the story willvnot drag for too long like some other authors do.
Interesting story so far, Jack's disappearance all of a sudden, I can't wait to know what happens next, and who took Aaron and Anne's picture.
A story where the protagonist suffers over and over again at the hands of various characters, failing to defend herself properly and taking the pain and suffering in silence, accepting the situation but unable to change anything; there are hardly any happy moments for Anne, on top of that she doesn't make Jack suffer for what he has done to her and that is disappointing. The supposed protagonist seems more like a psychopath with anger issues, arrogant and rude attitude towards his supposedly beloved woman, always having the last word and incredibly inconsiderate. There is hardly any kindness extended towards the victim, threats and vulgarities are continuous and this parallels the supposed words of love from the male protagonist throughout the novel, repeated over and over again without change. To me this novel expresses the helplessness of people with normal identities and normal lives when faced with the ridiculous demands of those who possess much more, how their opinions do not matter in the least and their lives are acclimated to the desires of said subjects. I do not wish to criticize the writer by writing this, in fact, it is just my opinion on the matter after reading this novel. For those who enjoy sweet moments and affection, this is not your novel. If you like and enjoy this type of development, then this is your novel.