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First, I love your fanfiction. This is nice, light hearted, and not much tragedy which I like sometimes.. His wish is very OP yet you didn't use it properly, like use it for anything at all.. But I wouldn't say much since its your freedom how to use your cheat.. All I'm asking is for you to not nerf mc just to get the so called 'Shounen moment'...
binged it. really like it so far. ........................................... cant wait to read more........................................................................
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Amazing, I love the story, I love the way you write, I love it. Jesus this is one of the best Harry Potter fan-fictions, keep up the good shit bruv and write more
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loved it loved the plot and the mc[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
First, I love your fanfiction. This is nice, light hearted, and not much tragedy which I like sometimes.. His wish is very OP yet you didn't use it properly, like use it for anything at all.. But I wouldn't say much since its your freedom how to use your cheat.. All I'm asking is for you to not nerf mc just to get the so called 'Shounen moment'...
binged it. really like it so far. ........................................... cant wait to read more........................................................................
I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ... I arrived at the fruit part and when it started to distribute, like 10 cent bullets ...
Amazing, I love the story, I love the way you write, I love it. Jesus this is one of the best Harry Potter fan-fictions, keep up the good shit bruv and write more
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