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The author of the fanfic is very interesting, I really like to read him, so I give five stars, and I also ask you to update the chapters more often.
I dont like that you skipped lookism >:( . But I'm going to give it 5 stars anyways because i'm weird ------------------------------------------------
Muy bueno, bastante impredecible como continuará la historia lo cual la hace muy entretenido , el protagonista está bien ,es dominado pero no OP, así que da gusto leer las batallas y las misiones .
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this is not for me it turn into a sh*t-show very quickly, there is a lot of typo's there and then also the author seems to not even know what the character that he writes, because the MC obtained Kim Doo shiks Physiology(from God of Highschool) and somehow that's weaker than people from Lookism and Onepiece and there is a more inconsistency but i'm not gonna bother listing it here. anyways it's too bland and boring also don't expect me to give constructive review on this one cause i treat FF all the same no matter how good they are all of them are trash in my opinion. also for those readers who keep spamming 5 star i just hope you get cancer or something worse and die also your family should die lol cause i hate you guys🤣
like someone else said b4 me everything is pretty good but the romance / relationship is just a bunch of girls and him fucking each other and that's it ... its not an harem well its what you would call "modern harem" maybe ? . where the MC is just fucking but his companions is like oh i wonder what girl you can pick up so i can devourer her as well "so its not really an harem at least not he´s one? and the girls are just fucking each other nonstop the dude is just there "what it feel´s like" .... so for those who want the mc to have harem will have to look somewhere else it is really one piece robins harem welp that's just my opinion I'm a firm believer in a harem the girl/boy should have his or hers boy/girls for himself and not share
Pretty much we got a reincarnated MC who gets martial art powers and their physiques. I like the chat group members as they're a bit of everything and are not solely there because of their fighting ability. Missions are split up and are summarized for the side characters so we don't have to waste time on them. Leaving the focus on our MC. Now the things I hate. Character development happens out of no where. The MC gets with robin out of no where and plot armor paves the way against logic. (Harem Shenanigans) And the RWBY arc was pretty meh. I never was a fan of it. Besides all these things, the fic has improved and is a unique experience to read. I'd recommend it for the slight twist on a chat group novel.
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
So Is that picture the mc ? And i like the story so far tho its Pretty cool cant lie Never been in to this kind of novels i cant lie But i gave it a try
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Only dimensional chat group story I’ve read but I freaking love it, need a hundred more chapters as soon as possible please and thank you author!!!!!!!
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Haha this novel really does have fallen do you know the reason haha you fucking give tsunade to taichou haha i know it might sound idiotic but it is the true reason you know why because to put harem tag in this novel and you know many readers always wants if their is a naruto world the mc always gets trunade and you disappoint those man of culture out their
Awesome story, can’t wait for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If you're looking for a great story where the mc actually has a personality and it's not a copy and paste story with new characters this is for you. The Author occasionally gets things wrong but not everyone can remember every little detail. The pacing might also give you wipe lash but this next arc seems like it won't have that problem so no worrys there. Although the Author seems to have a problem with avoiding anything even remotely "cliché" he has actively abandoned ideas if he thinks they are cliche later which isn't healthy for the story so if you read this Author don't worry about cliches so much just don't dump a truck load on top of your story.
es interesante el concepto pero hay cosas que no me quedaron muy claras como en que punto de la trama se encuentra historia y deberías de llevar una mejor optimización del tiempo cuando viajan a otros mundos te recomiendo que detengas el tiempo en todos los demas mundos por que si no sera mas tedioso para ti al escribir o para los demas al seguir la historia incluso dejaras algunos huecos argumentales
Writing is awful, sometimes its hard to understand WTF is happening. meaningless sidelines: Dont rwally inderstand why they are. story is nice
Stupid, shallow and hollow. Interaction between characters liveless. Idea behind bulky gangster mc, seems like a stupid joke from Era of anime, where every stupid things was animated without thinking, but oh well. How he's martial arts can be as powerful as ninjas with chackra? Who knows? I don't... Either way, I wouldn't mind such stupidity if story was at least interesting, but that just like a joke, that you never going to tell people because you would be too ashamed.
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somehow it feels bland.. relationship developments, interactions, etc. are imperceptible and tasteless..
I really enjoy this story and I really hope and pray that it continues until completion because its unique and extremly enjoyable. I would recommend this story to be read if anyone cares for my opinion.
Just so you know I'll not bash this fic. Truthfully speaking, the story is bland. The author skipped the whole lookism story from the get go, it makes me think author reincarnated MC just only for the sake of gaining Logan's body. The interactions, dialogues, description is seriously awkward. Its kinda you know reading something without any emotion in it. This just doesnt make you feel anything thus what I said bland. I hope to see author improve as the time goes on, its rare to see a fanfic with bulky power type MC, most we read are just athletic refined agility type MC. But yeah for now, this story is just bland.
I just came back online baby! This has potential to become one of my favorite fanfiction in my library. Hoping the Author will not quit that's all =recommend]
pretty good but I don't go with there's no r18 so how many girls he asked him and who's the strongest in the group chat. like is that a pregnancy personality and that's theory you hate cocky people.
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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Great storyline and premise while bringing new characters and dynamic to those characters we already know and love.
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The author of the fanfic is very interesting, I really like to read him, so I give five stars, and I also ask you to update the chapters more often.
I dont like that you skipped lookism >:( . But I'm going to give it 5 stars anyways because i'm weird ------------------------------------------------
Muy bueno, bastante impredecible como continuará la historia lo cual la hace muy entretenido , el protagonista está bien ,es dominado pero no OP, así que da gusto leer las batallas y las misiones .
Revelar Spoiler this is not for me it turn into a sh*t-show very quickly, there is a lot of typo's there and then also the author seems to not even know what the character that he writes, because the MC obtained Kim Doo shiks Physiology(from God of Highschool) and somehow that's weaker than people from Lookism and Onepiece and there is a more inconsistency but i'm not gonna bother listing it here. anyways it's too bland and boring also don't expect me to give constructive review on this one cause i treat FF all the same no matter how good they are all of them are trash in my opinion. also for those readers who keep spamming 5 star i just hope you get cancer or something worse and die also your family should die lol cause i hate you guys🤣
like someone else said b4 me everything is pretty good but the romance / relationship is just a bunch of girls and him fucking each other and that's it ... its not an harem well its what you would call "modern harem" maybe ? . where the MC is just fucking but his companions is like oh i wonder what girl you can pick up so i can devourer her as well "so its not really an harem at least not he´s one? and the girls are just fucking each other nonstop the dude is just there "what it feel´s like" .... so for those who want the mc to have harem will have to look somewhere else it is really one piece robins harem welp that's just my opinion I'm a firm believer in a harem the girl/boy should have his or hers boy/girls for himself and not share
Pretty much we got a reincarnated MC who gets martial art powers and their physiques. I like the chat group members as they're a bit of everything and are not solely there because of their fighting ability. Missions are split up and are summarized for the side characters so we don't have to waste time on them. Leaving the focus on our MC. Now the things I hate. Character development happens out of no where. The MC gets with robin out of no where and plot armor paves the way against logic. (Harem Shenanigans) And the RWBY arc was pretty meh. I never was a fan of it. Besides all these things, the fic has improved and is a unique experience to read. I'd recommend it for the slight twist on a chat group novel.
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
So Is that picture the mc ? And i like the story so far tho its Pretty cool cant lie Never been in to this kind of novels i cant lie But i gave it a try
Nice ............................................................................................................................................................................................................
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Only dimensional chat group story I’ve read but I freaking love it, need a hundred more chapters as soon as possible please and thank you author!!!!!!!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Haha this novel really does have fallen do you know the reason haha you fucking give tsunade to taichou haha i know it might sound idiotic but it is the true reason you know why because to put harem tag in this novel and you know many readers always wants if their is a naruto world the mc always gets trunade and you disappoint those man of culture out their
Awesome story, can’t wait for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
If you're looking for a great story where the mc actually has a personality and it's not a copy and paste story with new characters this is for you. The Author occasionally gets things wrong but not everyone can remember every little detail. The pacing might also give you wipe lash but this next arc seems like it won't have that problem so no worrys there. Although the Author seems to have a problem with avoiding anything even remotely "cliché" he has actively abandoned ideas if he thinks they are cliche later which isn't healthy for the story so if you read this Author don't worry about cliches so much just don't dump a truck load on top of your story.
es interesante el concepto pero hay cosas que no me quedaron muy claras como en que punto de la trama se encuentra historia y deberías de llevar una mejor optimización del tiempo cuando viajan a otros mundos te recomiendo que detengas el tiempo en todos los demas mundos por que si no sera mas tedioso para ti al escribir o para los demas al seguir la historia incluso dejaras algunos huecos argumentales
Writing is awful, sometimes its hard to understand WTF is happening. meaningless sidelines: Dont rwally inderstand why they are. story is nice
Stupid, shallow and hollow. Interaction between characters liveless. Idea behind bulky gangster mc, seems like a stupid joke from Era of anime, where every stupid things was animated without thinking, but oh well. How he's martial arts can be as powerful as ninjas with chackra? Who knows? I don't... Either way, I wouldn't mind such stupidity if story was at least interesting, but that just like a joke, that you never going to tell people because you would be too ashamed.
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
somehow it feels bland.. relationship developments, interactions, etc. are imperceptible and tasteless..
I really enjoy this story and I really hope and pray that it continues until completion because its unique and extremly enjoyable. I would recommend this story to be read if anyone cares for my opinion.
Just so you know I'll not bash this fic. Truthfully speaking, the story is bland. The author skipped the whole lookism story from the get go, it makes me think author reincarnated MC just only for the sake of gaining Logan's body. The interactions, dialogues, description is seriously awkward. Its kinda you know reading something without any emotion in it. This just doesnt make you feel anything thus what I said bland. I hope to see author improve as the time goes on, its rare to see a fanfic with bulky power type MC, most we read are just athletic refined agility type MC. But yeah for now, this story is just bland.
I just came back online baby! This has potential to become one of my favorite fanfiction in my library. Hoping the Author will not quit that's all =recommend]
pretty good but I don't go with there's no r18 so how many girls he asked him and who's the strongest in the group chat. like is that a pregnancy personality and that's theory you hate cocky people.
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍 Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍
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Great storyline and premise while bringing new characters and dynamic to those characters we already know and love.